HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa thanx bruh...i do try sometimes...yeah vocab n wordin are what i am tryin to work on...but i dont wanna sound POETIC so i gotta keep it hood n dumbed down...thank u all for tha feed!!!
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa thanx bruh...i do try sometimes...yeah vocab n wordin are what i am tryin to work on...but i dont wanna sound POETIC so i gotta keep it hood n dumbed down...thank u all for tha feed!!!
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hmm, Im not going to lie to you man.. I wasn't feeling it much.. not saying it was bad but after reading for a while, I started to lose interest in the subject. I was confuced at a few lines because you jumped off topic by trying to make it into a battle verse rather then what it really was. You should try to stick to your concepts more tightly then just jumping off and naming a million different cereal types nah, no hate at all man, Just stating my opinion and peace nah mean. Id give this piece a 4.
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its kewl mayn...yeah i cuda done better...but this is HELLA OLD...just dropped it cuz its funny too me...anywayz THANX FOR THAT FEED...imma work on my shyt more n more...oneday...I WILL TAKE THIS FUKIN BITCH OVER!!!
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