10 lines
due asap
g'luck
Raydeoh
Token
10 lines
due asap
g'luck
check. i'll post soon
word
i got 206 bones in ma body nd ya bitch ass cnt even scrape one
nd dnt even speak on blastin' wen it takes like 4 of you to play w/ a fake gun
Gauntlet 2 champ. congrats. but you're talent now is next to a flop
i'd have to bible for AT LEAST 3 years to think of you as a textual God
i'm a brutal cat. one of the meanest alive so it's a blatent fact
i'll char half ya body then take a saw nd act like segregation's back
RB sayin 'Ray need to cheat to win, Toke we kno you got son beat'
but why pay you to take a dive wen i can piledrive you inta concrete?
all those damn awards. fuckin fag. you must post some clever shit
RB saw you leave your mark, nd watched your heart stay broken ever since
gd luck
fuckit..
shits so easy i'ma do all nameplays..
haaa..
quit acting.. ur wack as fuck so i'll leave you shook in whole
shit, Radio ain't been known to entertain since Cuba Gooding Jr. took the role
this bitch is illiterate to the max, so you know this'll be a lame fight
I mean, even the retard from the movie could spell his own name right
i'm displayin' wit at it's best, so i'll leave ya departed
cuz if your Raydeoh from AM to PM that just means your consistently retarded
his concepts are wack as fuck so you know there'll be blood from his corner
his lines are big enough eyesores to rival stevie wonder's retina disorder
people'll remember you tho, your death'll be a showtime
shit, your names set in stone.. with a note: RIP Radio '09 to 09'
i got 206 bones in ma body nd ya bitch ass cnt even scrape one
nd dnt even speak on blastin' wen it takes like 4 of you to play w/ a fake gun
almost... kinda fucked up flow
Gauntlet 2 champ. congrats. but you're talent now is next to a flop
i'd have to bible for AT LEAST 3 years to think of you as a textual God
flow flow flow yuck
i'm a brutal cat. one of the meanest alive so it's a blatent fact
i'll char half ya body then take a saw nd act like segregation's back
self glory? really?
RB sayin 'Ray need to cheat to win, Toke we kno you got son beat'
but why pay you to take a dive wen i can piledrive you inta concrete?
i liked
all those damn awards. fuckin fag. you must post some clever shit
RB saw you leave your mark, nd watched your heart stay broken ever since
weak closer
token damn... that shit was fire
vote with token but we all already knew this
got 206 bones in ma body nd ya bitch ass cnt even scrape one
nd dnt even speak on blastin' wen it takes like 4 of you to play w/ a fake gun
NAH MAN
Gauntlet 2 champ. congrats. but you're talent now is next to a flop
i'd have to bible for AT LEAST 3 years to think of you as a textual God
I ACTUALLY LOLED AT THIS PUNCH I LIKED IT, DECENT PERSONAL
i'm a brutal cat. one of the meanest alive so it's a blatent fact
i'll char half ya body then take a saw nd act like segregation's back
OK A BIT OF SWAGGER BUT IT CAME OF OK
RB sayin 'Ray need to cheat to win, Toke we kno you got son beat'
but why pay you to take a dive wen i can piledrive you inta concrete?
OK THIS WAS SOLID
all those damn awards. fuckin fag. you must post some clever shit
RB saw you leave your mark, nd watched your heart stay broken ever since
OK PUNCH BUT SORTA PLAYED
VS
quit acting.. ur wack as fuck so i'll leave you shook in whole
shit, Radio ain't been known to entertain since Cuba Gooding Jr. took the role
NICE I LIKED THIS
this bitch is illiterate to the max, so you know this'll be a lame fight
I mean, even the retard from the movie could spell his own name right
MEHISH CLEAR U DIDNT TRY HERE
i'm displayin' wit at it's best, so i'll leave ya departed
cuz if your Raydeoh from AM to PM that just means your consistently retarded
LOL NICE
his concepts are wack as fuck so you know there'll be blood from his corner
his lines are big enough eyesores to rival stevie wonder's retina disorder
OK
people'll remember you tho, your death'll be a showtime
shit, your names set in stone.. with a note: RIP Radio '09 to 09'
OK BUT SORTA PLAYED
OK PUNCHES: RADIO BY A LIL BIT
PERSONALS: TOKEN
SWAGGER: RADIO
MULTIS: NO ONE
FLOW:TIE
STRUCTURE:TIE
HUMOUR: TOKEN
OK THIS WAS A HARD BATTLE FOR ME TO DECIDE, I KNOW VETS IN HERE WILL ABUSE MY FEEDBACK AND SAY HOW FAR TOKEN KICKED RADIOS ARSE BUT I THINK THIS WAS A TIGHT MATCH
VOTE/TOKEN
RB sayin 'Ray need to cheat to win, Toke we kno you got son beat'
but why pay you to take a dive wen i can piledrive you inta concrete?
Only one in your verse that had potential to be a punch... Still it coulda been alot better
Vs
quit acting.. ur wack as fuck so i'll leave you shook in whole
shit, Radio ain't been known to entertain since Cuba Gooding Jr. took the role
Meh
this bitch is illiterate to the max, so you know this'll be a lame fight
I mean, even the retard from the movie could spell his own name right
ok
i'm displayin' wit at it's best, so i'll leave ya departed
cuz if your Raydeoh from AM to PM that just means your consistently retarded
Nice
his concepts are wack as fuck so you know there'll be blood from his corner
his lines are big enough eyesores to rival stevie wonder's retina disorder
ok
people'll remember you tho, your death'll be a showtime
shit, your names set in stone.. with a note: RIP Radio '09 to 09'
k
1 sided an battle Token didnt even try lol .
Rtf
i got 206 bones in ma body nd ya bitch ass cnt even scrape one
nd dnt even speak on blastin' wen it takes like 4 of you to play w/ a fake gun
dont really get this
Gauntlet 2 champ. congrats. but you're talent now is next to a flop
i'd have to bible for AT LEAST 3 years to think of you as a textual God
nice!
i'm a brutal cat. one of the meanest alive so it's a blatent fact
i'll char half ya body then take a saw nd act like segregation's back
fell off at the final point
RB sayin 'Ray need to cheat to win, Toke we kno you got son beat'
but why pay you to take a dive wen i can piledrive you inta concrete?
ok!!
all those damn awards. fuckin fag. you must post some clever shit
RB saw you leave your mark, nd watched your heart stay broken ever since
good closer
vs
quit acting.. ur wack as fuck so i'll leave you shook in whole
shit, Radio ain't been known to entertain since Cuba Gooding Jr. took the role
ight!!
this bitch is illiterate to the max, so you know this'll be a lame fight
I mean, even the retard from the movie could spell his own name right
haha nice personal
i'm displayin' wit at it's best, so i'll leave ya departed
cuz if your Raydeoh from AM to PM that just means your consistently retarded
good!
his concepts are wack as fuck so you know there'll be blood from his corner
his lines are big enough eyesores to rival stevie wonder's retina disorder
LMAO!
people'll remember you tho, your death'll be a showtime
shit, your names set in stone.. with a note: RIP Radio '09 to 09'
Real good closer
v/Token,due to him having way more linking punches,there was hardly one that wasnt worse than ok!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-398857.html
xHaveHeart.
see Token. i told you. not even proper feed sometimes. niggas jst ridin you. i appreciate the battle the dude. nd if possible, it'd be appreciated if you cud PM me some feed for my verse.
haha @ ridin' token!
xHaveHeart.
Votes seem fair to me.. I didn't even get proper breakdowns from some..Originally Posted by Raydeoh
but yeah, i'll give you feedback bro.
good battle.
i got 206 bones in ma body nd ya bitch ass cnt even scrape one
nd dnt even speak on blastin' wen it takes like 4 of you to play w/ a fake gun
-cool concept think you coulda said something better then fake gun tho man but decent
Gauntlet 2 champ. congrats. but you're talent now is next to a flop
i'd have to bible for AT LEAST 3 years to think of you as a textual God
-i liked this pretty cool man
i'm a brutal cat. one of the meanest alive so it's a blatent fact
i'll char half ya body then take a saw nd act like segregation's back
-eh alright
RB sayin 'Ray need to cheat to win, Toke we kno you got son beat'
but why pay you to take a dive wen i can piledrive you inta concrete?
-ok
all those damn awards. fuckin fag. you must post some clever shit
RB saw you leave your mark, nd watched your heart stay broken ever since
-decent closer
vs
quit acting.. ur wack as fuck so i'll leave you shook in whole
shit, Radio ain't been known to entertain since Cuba Gooding Jr. took the role
-ok opener man
this bitch is illiterate to the max, so you know this'll be a lame fight
I mean, even the retard from the movie could spell his own name right
-lol nice
i'm displayin' wit at it's best, so i'll leave ya departed
cuz if your Raydeoh from AM to PM that just means your consistently retarded
-cool
his concepts are wack as fuck so you know there'll be blood from his corner
his lines are big enough eyesores to rival stevie wonder's retina disorder
-lol
people'll remember you tho, your death'll be a showtime
shit, your names set in stone.. with a note: RIP Radio '09 to 09'
-cool closer
overall vote-Token he had a funny consistent verse nice man.Ray had a cool verse to he just wasn't as consistent this was a pretty cool battle guys defiantly wasn't as one sided as some say
thanks for the votes guys. appreciate the feed. one more to close
Raydeoh... you actually came better than i thought you would... your 1st bar was a pretty decent nameplay... even if it is a bit played on him... but you wouldn't know that... and the 4th bar was an excellent swag type bar... the other 3 bars were just kind of average though... against anyone else, you probably would've won... but you happened to be going against a vet... once again, i'm not breaking down and critiquing the verse of someone that will learn nothing from me... lol...
vote Token...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-398857.html
Posting Rules
