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    Corona and Lime

    Corona & Lime

    The bar was caked in dust, a relic of a passing age
    Sunlight peered through grimy windows in a blast of rays
    And illuminated the scenery in a tapestry of memories
    Light played on the piano and it's bullet-ridden keys
    It was the last place, they said, the Ridley brothers stood
    In a shoot-out with the sheriff and his extended brotherhood
    The swizz cheese walls tell a story of true determination
    Of yesteryear Robin Hood's and their boozy altercation


    They had 6 bank's, 4 trains and 5 liquors store's to their name
    Chased across a dozen states; an endless war or a game?
    Their enemy's were in sight now, chasing their dusty trail
    Visualising a noose after jail, no hope of a bail
    They bully-footed to a liquor house, shooting the chandeliers
    Screaming

    "Everybody out!"

    A last stand to last for years
    But there was no chance for an exit, pursuers closed quickly
    Opening up like artillery on the building so swiftly
    Jebb, the piano player was the first to die
    His back exploded outwards with an unearthly cry
    Bob and Jess hit the windows with retaliatory action
    But outnumbered 10 to 1 they could only kill a fraction
    And in a gory fashion they saw the bar annihilated
    Every soul sent Heavenwards as metal penatrated
    Jess stifled a shriek as his brother fell, face obliterated

    "Bobby!"

    Of course, no response, death was clearly demonstrated
    And it seemed the fire doubled, Jesse kissed the floorboards
    He crawled passed the bodies of the clientele, bartender and poor whores
    And in the hail, Jesse reported himself to the bar
    A last request for alcohol before the shrapnel scars
    A lone bottle of corona rested on odd shaped shelves
    With an aged lime to squeeze like a spice from the Gods themselves
    He took a sip, pure ambrosia, sweet as ever tasted
    A last gasp of freedom for a man who never made it
    Then glass shattered in his hand as a stray shot passed through it
    Buried itself in his gut, his life at last ruined
    Blood smeared his lips as he emptied the chambers
    His gun clicked empty on the men he could blame this
    A second shot hit his temple, he dropped to his knees
    As if in worship, but a grave's now where he take his ease

    And as the ballistics ceased, and the lawmen invaded
    They found the bodies of the outlaw's in enough blood to bathe with
    They saw the splinters of the bottle and were knowing, in time
    That a dead man's last request was for corona and lime

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    Re: Corona and Lime

    damn kid you still doing your thing making me want to drop a new thing thing lol stay up hermano you still fire
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    hey as for that collab im hit n run forever papa hit me tomorrow and i can get a verse done for it i def dont want the fam to be forgotten so def get at me
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    ^^Quit sleeping^^

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    hey johny... pretty long time since i seen you write or i've been here.... this here flowed real good to me man.... alot of multies in this.... very good story telling i must say.... and read real smooth.... I cant really see any complaint in this, good shit man...

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    That was pretty dope man, Good flow really good multi's I liked the concept too

    A last stand to last for years
    But there was no chance for an exit, pursuers closed quickly
    Opening up like artillery on the building so swiftly
    Jebb, the piano player was the first to die
    His back exploded outwards with an unearthly cry
    Bob and Jess hit the windows with retaliatory action
    But outnumbered 10 to 1 they could only kill a fraction
    And in a gory fashion they saw the bar annihilated
    Every soul sent Heavenwards as metal penatrated
    Jess stifled a shriek as his brother fell, face obliterated

    That was just pure awesomeness to be honest haha, I agree with TJC I can't see anything here to complain about!

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    mayn that was a kewl story...im not sure who ur talkin bout...but he was obiviously doing major crimes with his brother...u shud drop a name for me...anyway this was a very well told story bout a criminalz last stand...good shyt mayn...good flow...good conceptz...good vocab...rele good storytellin...good metaphorz...great imagery...just a GOOD STORY PIECE!!! my fav lines are...


    A last stand to last for years
    But there was no chance for an exit, pursuers closed quickly
    Opening up like artillery on the building so swiftly
    Jebb, the piano player was the first to die
    His back exploded outwards with an unearthly cry
    Bob and Jess hit the windows with retaliatory action
    But outnumbered 10 to 1 they could only kill a fraction
    And in a gory fashion they saw the bar annihilated
    Every soul sent Heavenwards as metal penatrated
    Jess stifled a shriek as his brother fell, face obliterated

    good lines...great imagery n shyt...that was good bruh...KEEP ON WRITING THAT SHYT!!!

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