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Thread: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

  1. May 21st, 2009, 09:44 PM #16
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    Re: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

    i bought me some brand new gunz dude, see tha specz?
    that shyt is str8 retarded blow ya head off like oral sex
    pplz always lookin at me stupid like they be perplex
    cuz i be in my ride just fukin drinkin some windex
    y? cuz i wanna spit clean, got a lighter? i bet i spit fire
    n im still futuristic swaggin see my ride aint got no tire

    By far this was your most clever lines in the entire verse. Specially the similie on oral sex, nicely played. Your style's pretty simplistic to say the least, Like a cross between lil wayne/young jeezy/rick ross. You never hit the multies or attack a few rhyme schemes.. kind of makes Your flow seem simplistic. But like I said about many of Your drops before dude, shit would be fire on audio.
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  2. May 21st, 2009, 10:30 PM #17
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    Re: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

    hmmmmmm yeah imma get round to those multi'z sometime...n yes i wdu kill this on audio....imma mix of JEEZY/DRO/TIP...at least thats what im going for...thanx for ya FEED...i will keep on givin tha fans what they want...
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  3. May 22nd, 2009, 05:17 AM #18
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    Re: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

    Ehhh, not really feeling the topic and concept. I don't really like the whole "self glory" theme, I feel like that's taking away from a meaningful verse. But anyways, you lacked multi's, you were consistant in the metaphorical area and showed decent flow. Again, this isn't my topic, yet it was an average read, nothing too impressive. Put some thought into the next one and write about a particular topic, for instance..mine, which you can read and respond to, hahaha..

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  4. May 22nd, 2009, 07:05 AM #19
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    Re: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

    TOPIC....im better than u...i got power behind my wordz...n read my other posts...FUK THOSE GOT DAM MULTI'Z...thanx for tha FEED...
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    Re: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

    Your swag is kinda something new and thats good. your flow is also good.
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  6. May 22nd, 2009, 12:11 PM #21
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    Re: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

    futuristic swagg homie...im jack sparrow swaggin...im TRAPPERZ OF THA CARIBBEAN...ya dig?!
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    Re: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

    multis yes harder punches yes these could of been more present but dont think it aint good i think its on point you cat read a rhyme without those complaints cause after it is written we all think what we could do different all togeather i think this had its own flair and was solid
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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    Re: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

    thanx bruh...im workin on gettin my drops into HOF...like its so hood...so catchy...so retard yall will just fukin love it!!! THANX AGAIN FOR THA FEED PPLZ!!!
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  9. May 27th, 2009, 01:47 PM #24
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    Re: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

    UPpED FOR THA OGZ!!!
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    Re: THA KING IS FLEXIN' (white gurl flow)

    upped againz get at ya family!
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