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    Re: Jada

    Quote Originally Posted by Something View Post
    Baaa,

    Do you have some wool?
    ???
    do you have some over your eyes.. its clear.

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    Re: Jada

    Quote Originally Posted by Proper Intel View Post
    ???
    do you have some over your eyes.. its clear.
    Yah, I can also see how much he hated it 'til someone new said they liked it lol. I'm not saying shit about the poster,

    but someone who goes,

    "oh... on second look,,," grates on me, was obvious he was just following the crowd.

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    Re: Jada

    yeah right dude. i seriously took a second look. i still don't like it but i can see he put more work in it then i saw on the first look

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    Re: Jada

    i dont like the text

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    Re: Jada

    I love jada and the concept and merge of the two into one is solid
    looks like he's there

    but from a lyricists point of view

    your tag looks too big and bland

    just use PEX designs as the tag and make it more artistic

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    Re: Jada

    Yeah, your tag takes the attention away from the rest.
    You might want to try and blend it in some.

    He seems to be a bit further from the burning house, so it should should look more of a distance away, maybe make the burning building a bit smaller...then you could give a bit more depth into the sky. It's odd how there isn't much going on, but it seems a bit cluttered. I don't think the picture is horrible though.

    I'm no graphics expert...this is just IMO.

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    Re: Jada

    preciate the feed

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    Re: Jada

    fire looks mad fake

    road to house.. not good blendin

    havin jada standin there does not help it

    text is unimpressive

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    Re: Jada

    I don't like it. Not because it's "simple" but because it doesn't tie in with anything. Since when do you get an highway leading straight into an house anyway?, and I can see the blending and blurring of the background to make the focal stand out. But you used the wrong stocks, it just doesn't look "real" if you know what I mean. On the other hand I quite like the text placement, sure the text is plain but it works.. although you should probably lose the orange outer-glow/drop shadow or at least tone down the size of it. No hate, fair criticism.
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    Re: Jada

    Quote Originally Posted by Blayde? View Post
    I don't like it. Not because it's "simple" but because it doesn't tie in with anything. Since when do you get an highway leading straight into an house anyway?, and I can see the blending and blurring of the background to make the focal stand out. But you used the wrong stocks, it just doesn't look "real" if you know what I mean. On the other hand I quite like the text placement, sure the text is plain but it works.. although you should probably lose the orange outer-glow/drop shadow or at least tone down the size of it. No hate, fair criticism.
    u never seen roads like that in front of a light for people to walk throuh?..

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