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    Unfinished Artwork

    Another unfinished verse tell me what u think. Its longer than the other one but not a fly. You drake still fly instrumental cause thats whats i wrote it to so if u can catch the beat like i did it reads better


    I Show love to my city that’s why it show it back
    now I’m running that bitch like i'm on a nordatrack
    In some Fresh nike kicks
    Jeans are evisu
    And I always try to leave
    But the streets say we need u
    making money is habit
    I could never ever break it
    I see I want it then ima have 2 take it
    Me I’m never faking, but you aint never real
    green is for envy and
    bruh u looking teal
    Bruh u need to chill,
    u just getting by
    Me I’m in the back posted up getting high
    Chillin wit bfant, where the fuck is drew at
    Nigga we be everywhere
    where da fuck was u at
    I tell em not to sleep on my me
    them niggas steady doing that
    Meet her at the P.O.B.
    4 am I’m screwing that
    …yea my flow sicker than the swine flu
    Natural winner without even tryin to
    And where I’m from
    Nigga always eyeing u
    They mad cause I did everything they tryna do

    Ok and the p.o.b. is the platnum of birmingham a night club and i got another one too this one is to that man of the year beat

    Damn I have no fear
    I’m in here rocking shit that don’t drop til next year
    My swagger on point and my ice so clear
    I’m flyin by the comp while they stuck in first gear
    Yea, but sometimes its kinda hard though
    I’m in an apartment tryna move into a condo
    So, ya boy gotta keep on trucking
    Them hoes still bopping
    So my phone still buzzing
    I like to keep it gutta
    Aint no need in me frontin
    But we run thru hoes, money and weed like its nothing
    Damn a nigga fly without the jet A
    Just a hunger to get up and go and get paid
    I got plenty hoes so a nigga get laid
    And when I smoke the purp is the only time I get hazed
    I’m the shit, u don’t think so nigga I aint ask
    So keep your 2 cents nigga I got my own cash
    Haters quick to try put a nigga on blast
    But I’m in it til the finish
    They aint looking like they gone last


    oh and jet A is the fuel they use for airplanes, let me know how u feel bout both these writtens

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    Re: Unfinished Artwork

    Green is for envy? What does that mean?

    The last four lines don't flow right.
    I killed Hitler to be a greater evil/ I spit at Lucifer and killed all the devils.
    I like my death metal gigs on the darkest nights/ while I like my rap and pussy damn tight.

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    u never heard the saying green is the color of envy? And on the last 4 or 5 lines i kinda tried to switch my flow up again so u gotta slow it down a bit.... What u think of the second one?
    Last edited by dakyng; May 1st, 2009 at 02:42 AM

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    lol. I really need to read more. Enlighten me nigga.
    I killed Hitler to be a greater evil/ I spit at Lucifer and killed all the devils.
    I like my death metal gigs on the darkest nights/ while I like my rap and pussy damn tight.

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    lol i feel u, what about the second one though?

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    both were str8...flow only broke once or twice...u hooked me in fast...decent vocab...u shud up ur wordplay a bit...i like how u listed a place only u'd know bout...thatzx good shyt...mayn all i can say is KEEP UP THA HOOD SHYT!!! yo peep my PROFILE n search my latest dropz...dude I AM THA FUTURE!!!
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