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    What Wood U Do If This Was U?...

    keys check 1-2 check check checkk
    i said keys check 1-2 check check checkk lol

    this is science fiction for me, but still real life...listen

    what wood you do if this was you?
    if you got kicked outta ya house and had nowhere else to move?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    if you found out the girl you bound 2 marry had another dude?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    if ya cousin just got killed just for wearin the color blue?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    the world is a circus and everybody in it is a fool

    i had a problem long ago when i was an adolescent
    i was a trouble-maker, always in and out of fences
    my pops wood say to behave but i never got the message
    disconnected from home and addicted to outer lessons
    how to fight i learned fast, but never got to test it
    these dudes was cool and they knew im the type not to mess wid
    got introduced to the game, makin the sweetest money
    200 dollars a day, it wasn't even funny
    took the coke to my house, stashed it up in my closet
    next morning, pulled it out and stashed a cup in my pocket
    went out, got riched, business blowing up like a rocket
    but one problem! my closet, shit! i forgot to lock it!
    i come home that night wid my pops at the door
    his faced shook me up, i felt my heart drop to the floor
    i walked to the porch, inside the house wid my popz behind me
    thats wen the arguing started, which elevated to yellin n fighting
    they started saying how these drugs get you nuttin thats nice
    i yelled bak" they give me nuttin? shit! nothing but rice
    nuthing but my shirts, pants, my fresh lugz and my nikes
    my bucket of ice", i told em straight up, "shit! im loving my life!"
    they told me to pack my stuff den and get out this door
    im like "wait wa u doin?", sorry but u dont live here no more
    20 minutes later, i found myself outside sittin on the steps
    right in front my house, on the ground was my stuff in a mess
    cudnt believe wat was happening, just realizing the truth
    but tell me, what else was i suppose to do?

    what wood you do if this was you?
    if you got kicked outta ya house and had nowhere else to move?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    if you found out the girl you bound 2 marry had another dude?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    if ya cousin just got killed just for wearin the color blue?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    the world is a circus and everybody in it is a fool

    23 years old, feeling happy and inspired
    fell in love with a girl whos got my heart in fire
    i'm wired with these sentiments, we about to get married
    in only 3 weeks, life seemed as sweet as a berry
    but thats wats scary, cuz personally i got some bad luck
    and wen its time to put gasoline, i always get the bad pump
    but anywayz let me continue wid my rap
    n tell u some gud things before i tell the bad
    me and her so gud together like bonnie and clyde
    when im with her, i swear i felt all funny inside
    we wood meet up everyday at my house to stay
    watchin movies, making love, maybe go out to play
    but den one day she called me saying she felt bad
    had a fever, so i told her i be there, but den she felt sad
    told me no, its okay, ill just tell my dad
    are you sure, shes like yea, jst leave it like dat
    the next 2 days was the same old story
    so finally it came to a point wen it just bored me
    so i went to the house walking cuz she was so close
    had a key to her apartment so i opened the door
    walked thru the hallway and heard some noise
    got closer to her room and den i heard a boy
    the door was shut but i cudnt believe my ears
    they were fucking in there, i kno it! i cud hear
    so i just stood there blank realizing the truth
    but tell me, what else was i suppose to do?

    what wood you do if this was you?
    if you got kicked outta ya house and had nowhere else to move?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    if you found out the girl you bound 2 marry had another dude?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    if ya cousin just got killed just for wearin the color blue?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    the world is a circus and everybody in it is a fool

    half of the people in here wont even probably read this
    so ill make this short, so maybe u'll want to read it
    he was my cousin, who lived in central L.A
    and if you didnt know, that there is a dangerous place
    he was coo men, i love him and i always will
    he was a rapper too, cud of been hot wit all his skills
    notice i said "could", yea thats right hes not around
    let me tell ya the story and how it went down
    walking around in the street going to the ice cream store
    had ice cream at his house, but went out to buy ice cream cones
    put on his favorite shirt, dark blue to match his shoes
    he was a nice kid, no gangsta, just normal n cool
    on his way to the shop, two bloods in a honda accord
    pulled out they glocks, it goes pop, my cuz drop to the floor
    blood on the ground, they speed off, the cops jst ignore
    damn!! he never even got to the store
    three days later, we get a call saying he died, hes dead
    no more said, cuz he got shot twice in the head
    so i just stood there blank realizing the truth
    but tell me, what else was i suppose to do?

    what wood you do if this was you?
    if you got kicked outta ya house and had nowhere else to move?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    if you found out the girl you bound 2 marry had another dude?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    if ya cousin just got killed just for wearin the color blue?
    what wood you do if this was you?
    the world is a circus and everybody in it is a fool
    Last edited by Enemie (LP); April 28th, 2009 at 03:28 PM
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    Re: What Wood U Do If This Was U?...

    whoa homie...i rele felt this...all three stories were very well done...it only took me 10 mins to read...but i reread it twice more...u got skillz no lies there...u rele took me into ur world with all this...keep it commin!!!

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    Re: What Wood U Do If This Was U?...

    thanks bro..this one took me a minute.. (not literally but u kno wa i mean)
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    Re: What Wood U Do If This Was U?...

    uppin...let me kno wa u guys think.
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    Re: What Wood U Do If This Was U?...

    Diz shit was mmmmmuuuchhhoooo FUEGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Word nigga...dats some story tell~n 4 dat azz right there...there's niggaz n da game dat couldn't get dat vivid 2 save their life....and u made it look easy as drawing a period....chea...i fux wit dis 1...stay up homes....nigggaaa got dat FUEGOOOOOOOO

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    Re: What Wood U Do If This Was U?...

    Aye man this rite here is ill, keep it goin man u pretty sick for that 1
    One.

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    Re: What Wood U Do If This Was U?...

    this is nice verse
    unlike alot of stuff that people write like this, it kept me interested
    got nice flow, and i like that, plus the story line is well written .. keep it up, dude, you got alot of promise as a writer
    you rap like ibeastout votes

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    Re: What Wood U Do If This Was U?...

    thanks
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    Re: What Wood U Do If This Was U?...

    again, you need links. or this is gonna get closed.


    edit: nevermind I'm now mod of this area.
    this is closed until you pm me two feedback links.
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