MC Like a Disease!

[Treazun]

Just a keystyle, to keep me up lyrically, thx for reading people


I'll never be blinded by the mirage or visions
Corrupted on the inside, like the darkest prisons
Or the facade of political Nazi Religion
Im just an artist, with a typical Martyr's Mission
Subliminal, raw rendition, is my effect
I preject, my complex, spittin at my best
Murder with text, flamin cuss, result your done
Dangerous like a madman holdin a gun
Shoot anyone, Im trigger happy like the army
Mind control, steal our souls just like the Nazi's
Im stayin vigilant like a militant Iraqi
Im fightin for my life, like the tribe of Badawi
Like the crimes of Mugabe, im shiftin unseen
Spittin my dreams, exposing the villains and fiends
Im switchin the scenes, so your vision is clean
And not corrupted by money lovin regimes
Because this is my mission, the reason i be
Any snitch bitchin, will be bleedin heavily
Like a verbally imprisoned demon on weed
Im killin emcees like some sort of disease


For a beat to flow on i used the Immortal Technique - Crossing The Boundary instrumental.


Hopin for feed, and hopin u like.

PS, I hope Obese Jesus(the feedback king) gives me some critique, hes immense lol


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ht-396502.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ms-396773.html

[antology]

For a keystyle this is good man. Your multis and worldplay was good, kept the whole peice flowing nicely, vocab was good kept it interesting... Overall it was a nice peice man.

[Well Versed]

not bad bruh...i kinda wish it was longer...u seem pretty smart...i like ur use of uncommon wordz...vocab is evrything to me...rele mayn keep it up!!!

[Treazun]

Uppin..... and thx for da feed guys!

[Well Versed]

yo treazun check me out homie...my flow crosses dimintionz...

[Ink Poyzin]

I would say for a real quick keystyle this isn't bad at all.. I think the metaphors were a lil simple but oh well, it's a keystyle. You had good vocab and ok multi's, they brought this together. I wasn't feeling the rhyme scheme, too simple for me. I don't know what else to say though bro, its only a key, keep writin. I enjoyed the read, thanks.

[Well Versed]

lol that dude is ALL bout multiz...i dont like em unless they play a role...therefore i dont use em...but eh w/e...

[Treazun]

Thx for the feed again much appreciated