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    mold

    spitting my lyrics like guns im always ready to clap
    gotta get da beat a cofin after i murder the track
    i hear u talkin shit , but i aint heard of u cat
    so ima pay u no attention and show you my back

    i would appreciate it if some one could remove the knife
    i learnt you can't trust nobody , and thats true to life
    i got to the end of the tunnel and there was no light
    my anger tanks full , and anything could make that fuel ignite

    the pain held inside makes water wanna fall down from eye
    but a long time ago my tear ducts dried , and died
    so i realy cant remember the last time i cried
    but who gives a fuck if u can just get high

    who's to blame for the world being so cold?
    cause the worlds to blame for my heart bein froze
    but i am kinda thankfull it let my talent unfold
    you'd think its a tsunami the way the white boy flows

    you'd think its treasure the way he shines like gold
    wid thoughts so rotten you'd think his mind growin mold

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    Re: mold

    aaah fuck i wasnt done!!!

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    Re: mold

    oh well i am a begginner so go easy

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    Re: mold

    Then edit the rest in.....(if you weren't finished.)

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    Re: mold

    Ahhh.. Nice ... I felt a presents of mortal anquished swagged in there... terrifying.... talent is upon you chances of true development as far as... Vocabulary.. depth through knowledge. Signs of Intellect is what i'm truely looking for in this summary. You can do alot i would like i wonder if you can produce any versatility that would really show exactly prop u as a writer... Not an Mc. That is to be determined as well.

    Caese

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