Token (8-2) vs. Burd (6-3) [Championship Match]

[Token]

Read the Rules.
Drop Friday night.
Voting ends Sunday Midnight EST.

Must provide 5 links.

Current Champion: Token

[Orc]

no more than 24.

g'luck buddy.

[Token]

Cool, g'luck man.

[Orc]

...

[Orc]

sorry i'm taking so long.. i'm not having trouble abusing this joker.
i just know NOTHING i write could be funnier than you losing to smoka.

& really.

i'm the underdog?! how, dude my punches will blast doubt.
u've got a faint chance. just try make it through voting before you pass out.
ur personal life must suck. e-relationships are shit, got it?
it's sad..the closest you'll ever be to a Star is getting your bitch modded.
you fell off man.. yo even IF you get mad you'll lose.
everyone's askin' Cudi get any worse. he's got Kid's album gettin bad reviews.
you can't write fluently, writers block is where you're sitting son.
'if walls could talk' ..they'd prolly sue you for assault cuz u keep hitting one.
i'll wreck ur oldschool ass. yea ur deaths all over this boss.
one punch'll destroy ur 'inner-drive'. that's all you'll have to chauffer this loss.
so bitch back up, or you'll get hit with a mad hook.
you Mirror FL style. when i smash you RAS jr will get 7 years of bad luck.
yea Quote is washed up, overrated and burnin with rage.
bitch you'll get Helen this battle. it'd make Paris of Troy turn in his grave.
i peeped the predictions. all of those kids just lack class.
you got so many people Raiden you Metal Gear gonna sue ya wack ass.
'fag, bitch, queer, dick, virgin and stalker'. it's over dude.
did you fall asleep at a party? cuz you've got ALL this written all over you.
i will bash your ugly face in, after this u'll never be flying by.
just to follow ya instincts you'll need a tracking device & a private eye.
you tryna drop early? dude, one hit'll leave u straight queesy.
I notice Toke got that 'stall style'.. you know, cheap shit that breaks easy.
'ehh. alright, horrible. u were all around just better Toke'.
so yea i beat Chrit to it. shit, now how you gonna get a vote?!

26.

[Token]

check it ..

i'ma end burd's life, it's a fact. i could give a fuck if he's reppin tough
i'd say you were a dead man walkin.. 'cept this wack fuck aint gettin up
switched up ya style to try to improve.. ur still just a fan who blew me
you even changed ur avy for the title.. just to fuckin' salute me
take a walk in my shoes, ur concepts are everywhere n' need some cores
shit, what you need is some new balance..
..to go with that old washed up style of yours
fuck your 6-3 record, i'll drop some sense in ur head n' watch the shit spin
make you understand your gettin the loss like 10-4.. 'cept you only got 6 wins
fuckin loser, ur just a servant to those above you, it's straight odd
that I can't even say you'll get served.. simple cuz that's ur day job
ur garbage ways are on the same track.. now i'ma bust this lame wack
& put a fucking end to Burd without even changing his name back
it's a straight fact, I rank with honesty when i'm rating em'
based on ur performance this season & I'll give you 5 stars..
..that'll be circling your cranium
your mind can't keep up, things leave you confused like my last line did
shit, it's like your 2 dimensional....the way this is shaping up to be one sided
flimsy fuck, i'ma give you that weakling stamp forever cuz'
it's like your punches impact in 3d.. you think it's comin but never does
check the awards dog, i'm the champ of LLL, so keep blowin' me
cuz how the FUCK you plan on getting the belt when ur only clout's in poetry..
burd sucks, you should be banned for wack, so now i'll end this
shit, you've been forbidden so long the league could rival ebay n' craigslist
quit tryna make noise, wording's trash & every concept sounds like half a hunch
shit, this bitch is only known for Making a Statement.. with his every attempt at a punch
your vision must be cloudy, cuz your destined for death punk
so i'll give you the right burd's eye view.. after I gauge out your left one

[Barcotic]

i'm the underdog?! how, dude my punches will blast doubt.
u've got a faint chance. just try make it through voting before you pass out.
you can't write fluently, writers block is where you're sitting son.
'if walls could talk' ..they'd prolly sue you for assault cuz u keep hitting one.
'ehh. alright, horrible. u were all around just better Toke'.
so yea i beat Chrit to it. shit, now how you gonna get a vote?!
You had a couple real nice bars, but that's it.. and your wordplay was played as hell.. chauffer, Cudi, Helen.. ALL played.. and other than that, what I didn't quote were just misses or concepts used wrong..

Vs

switched up ya style to try to improve.. ur still just a fan who blew me
you even changed ur avy for the title.. just to fuckin' salute me
fuck your 6-3 record, i'll drop some sense in ur head n' watch the shit spin
make you understand your gettin the loss like 10-4.. 'cept you only got 6 wins
ur garbage ways are on the same track.. now i'ma bust this lame wack
& put a fucking end to Burd without even changing his name back
your mind can't keep up, things leave you confused like my last line did
shit, it's like your 2 dimensional....the way this is shaping up to be one sided
your vision must be cloudy, cuz your destined for death punk
so i'll give you the right burd's eye view.. after I gauge out your left one
Overall, you had a pretty cool verse.. your misses weren't as bad at Burd's, and you definitly didn't come played at all..

Toke didn't come played and had more quotables so.... \\//ote: Token

[David Lama]

vote - token

why?

cause burden is a biter / flipper

he flipped all the lines he used in this very battle along with a bunch others in other battles

heres the ones he flipped here and a few others. i can post even more if needed

'fag, bitch, queer, dick, virgin and stalker'. it's over dude.
did you fall asleep at a party? cuz you've got ALL this written all over you.

i guess u got mad drunk. then passdout on the sofa dude,
n ya friends musta pulldout the sharpie,
........cuz ya still got faggot written allover you.

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...=written+party

so forget it, Grip's got this. it'd be silly to ask
i'm a certified bigwig. u a receding hairline & brazilian wax

Where kung posted it here
http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...ghlight=bigwig

omg@ the fag. thinkin' ur dope i'd laugh if this geek tore us,
for sure ur a bigwig.. a red dress, some lipstick & u hang on street corners

Find where burden posted it here

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...ghlight=bigwig

'ehh. alright, horrible. u were all around just better Toke'.
so yea i beat Chrit to it. shit, now how you gonna get a vote?!

^^ that line was ok, kinda played... vote-butler
HA beat allah to it... now whos gonna give you hope fucker?

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...ler+allah+beat

i'm the underdog?! how, dude my punches will blast doubt.
u've got a faint chance. just try make it through voting before you pass out.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-2-395507.html

Oneduh may not post; theres no doubt that he’s been writin
But the faint chance he’ll beat his hero may leave him passed out from the excitement;

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...t=faint+chance

so bitch back up, or you'll get hit with a mad hook.
you Mirror FL style. when i smash you RAS jr will get 7 years of bad luck.

I got 7 years of bad luck thanks to this faggot ass fairy
He thought he could mirror my style & win.. so I had to shatter that theory

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...ror+style+luck

that oneduh line is from oneduh vs metasin the same place he got the faint line from.

wtf @ u wantin' to go 22, i gotta win battles all over & make time,
but kids like u got that signature style.. ur not allowed go more than 8 lines.

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...re+style+lines

Now he either flipped raz when raz used it in 2007

Which was

Agree on the amount? nah, Grimet just the me the win to begin with/
Cos Mikez lines so horrible, should've been 8 or less like the signature limit/

Or he bit or is ghost catcher who flipped raz in the first place lmao

and plus your breaking the rules of the forum, great try
you got a 'signature' style, it shouldn't go more then 8 lines

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...re+style+lines

i will bash your ugly face in, after this u'll never be flying by.
just to follow ya instincts you'll need a tracking device & a private eye.

i have a master plan with punchlines, u should ask for advice
cuz to follow your flow, i'd probably need a tracking device

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...+device+follow

i'll shatter ur mouth. ppl askin' bout reflex like can he step?
kid if ur teeth are well connected..one hit'll leave them without any rep.

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...ghlight=burden

Get in my way..your body will be excavating a wall
1 punch & your bones will go from well connected to no reputation at all

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...well+connected

one punch to end this, Horud you don't make the cut,
my fist will cause such a jerk reaction, even your closest homies will hate ur guts.

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...=jerk+reaction

anyone got curtains to lend? because your life is my purpose to end.
when the slugs hit ya jerk reaction'll leave ya hated by ya own circle of friends.

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...+reaction+guns

^and guns posted that in a league burden mods lmao

you can't write fluently, writers block is where you're sitting son.
'if walls could talk' ..they'd prolly sue you for assault cuz u keep hitting one.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-2-395507.html

Trying to get ideas into your mind…well it’s been sore ever since then
Cuz if ‘walls could talk’, they’d say to quit banging your head against them

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...lls+could+talk

[Chrit.]

switched up ya style to try to improve.. ur still just a fan who blew me
you even changed ur avy for the title.. just to fuckin' salute me
flimsy fuck, i'ma give you that weakling stamp forever cuz'
it's like your punches impact in 3d.. you think it's comin but never does
burd sucks, you should be banned for wack, so now i'll end this
shit, you've been forbidden so long the league could rival ebay n' craigslist

^ those were all nice.. kind of a disappointment compared to your normal verses.

Burd: well... you bit in your verse... so you should be banned anyhow. The worst part is, you flipped those lines and reworded them worse than the originals.

v/Token

[SmokaJoka]

vote - token

why?

cause burden is a biter / flipper

he flipped all the lines he used in this very battle along with a bunch others in other battles

heres the ones he flipped here and a few others. i can post even more if needed






http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...=written+party



Where kung posted it here
http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...ghlight=bigwig



Find where burden posted it here

http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...ghlight=bigwig









http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...ler+allah+beat





http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-2-395507.html



http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...t=faint+chance






http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...ror+style+luck

that oneduh line is from oneduh vs metasin the same place he got the faint line from.




http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...re+style+lines

Now he either flipped raz when raz used it in 2007

Which was



Or he bit or is ghost catcher who flipped raz in the first place lmao



http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...re+style+lines






http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...+device+follow





http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...ghlight=burden




http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...well+connected




http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...=jerk+reaction



http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...+reaction+guns

^and guns posted that in a league burden mods lmao



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-2-395507.html



http://netcees.com/forums/showthread...lls+could+talk

some of these are not even close

[SmokaJoka]

scrap bigwig, not even near it and the line you quoted after bigwig isn't even close


after that, you have a solid case...some of these are dangerously similar

[David Lama]

note to smoka, token and any other mod. if ya need more links or more of anything to eliminate any doubts ya have let me know. that is if ya have any

[Orc]

i have doubts. cuz you've absolutely no solid proof. no line for line shit, no nothing. most of the bars quoted are cliches/expressions. lmao.

[David Lama]

im not gonna sit here and try to convince you of something you already know

[Orc]

my point exactly.