10 lines
no dickridin votes
no crew votes etc
DUE BY 8 P.M. LETS Go !
KnowP
Soza.Money™
10 lines
no dickridin votes
no crew votes etc
DUE BY 8 P.M. LETS Go !
Soza.Swisher !
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extension to 11pm
Soza.Swisher !
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i can drop in the morning fam. im busy atm. u coo with that?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...130/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...364/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...039/index.html
Last edited by KnowP; April 28th, 2011 at 02:22 PM
My punches demolish opponents, yo eyes are closing soon
So If voters say So you up, they only tryina stitch bleeding open wounds
Women view you as a fail, your mug brings eyes into pain
hoes scream and run after Money, that’s why u try to look like little Wayne
If you are in the middle of things, you’ll get embarrassed badly
Soza’ll be the Center of attention, and get t-bagged by dude in my avy
Money got bank like a prisoner, but his bars are weak, tho
they couldn’t be LUKE warm if he performed in the summer at his freak show
we know you bang animals daily, at baseball games you’ll starve son
you’ll order a hot dog, they’ll give you extra ketchup packets and hard buns
Smh
V/S KNOWP AKA KOBE (CREW: CREATIONAL DAMAGE)
In the game Kobe Ain't Scorin , I'll eatem like a Gourmet
letting a 'Insect beat you' Just shows you cant handle a 'Hornet'
i dont 'Know' him but he's a rapist with a Wierd name
Punches will hang 'P'... Like Wiz Chain
Treat em like 'One word messaging' I should'nt reply to ya text
My shots will 'Dump' on KnowP Like Kobe's Ex
As I continue to Yawn . .im typing with boredom
How you a 'Mod' and cant do good battling in your own Forum (KnowP Mods "Front Line")
Either way 'Ya get Cut' Like trying out for basketball with a Bandage
I'll 'Destruct his creativity just to make a Creational Damage
#Swag !
Soza.Swisher !
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Lakers V.S hornets (Playoffs) . .For NBA non watchers
Soza.Swisher !
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My punches demolish opponents, yo eyes are closing soon
So If voters say So you up, they only tryina stitch bleeding open wounds
dope
Women view you as a fail, your mug brings eyes into pain
hoes scream and run after Money, that’s why u try to look like little Wayne
not feeling it
If you are in the middle of things, you’ll get embarrassed badly
Soza’ll be the Center of attention, and get t-bagged by dude in my avy
na
Money got bank like a prisoner, but his bars are weak, tho
they couldn’t be LUKE warm if he performed in the summer at his freak show
pretty average
we know you bang animals daily, at baseball games you’ll starve son
you’ll order a hot dog, they’ll give you extra ketchup packets and hard buns
Nice concept and I see what you were tryna do, the way it's set up is a little random, but it's decent.
In the game Kobe Ain't Scorin , I'll eatem like a Gourmet
letting a 'Insect beat you' Just shows you cant handle a 'Hornet'
Doesn't rhyme it's pronounced gor-may, and punch was forced/not hitting
i dont 'Know' him but he's a rapist with a Wierd name
Punches will hang 'P'... Like Wiz Chain
weak/basic idea with basic wording try not to use "like"
Treat em like 'One word messaging' I should'nt reply to ya text
My shots will 'Dump' on KnowP Like Kobe's Ex
basic again
As I continue to Yawn . .im typing with boredom
How you a 'Mod' and cant do good battling in your own Forum (KnowP Mods "Front Line")
can't do good battling? poor wording fam, decent attempt at a personal but unable to deliver it strongly.
Either way 'Ya get Cut' Like trying out for basketball with a Bandage
I'll 'Destruct his creativity just to make a Creational Damage
na played, and weak you need to be more complex with your ideas, these are too simple/easy to come up with.. try be more original in the way you word things/look at how to approach a punch.
V- KnowP for having a few punches that hit and a better verse overall.
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links up shortly
bumpsky
My punches demolish opponents, yo eyes are closing soon
So If voters say So you up, they only tryina stitch bleeding open wounds
haha nice
Women view you as a fail, your mug brings eyes into pain
hoes scream and run after Money, that’s why u try to look like little Wayne
nahhh
If you are in the middle of things, you’ll get embarrassed badly
Soza’ll be the Center of attention, and get t-bagged by dude in my avy
ehhhh
Money got bank like a prisoner, but his bars are weak, tho
they couldn’t be LUKE warm if he performed in the summer at his freak show
so-so
we know you bang animals daily, at baseball games you’ll starve son
you’ll order a hot dog, they’ll give you extra ketchup packets and hard buns
okay closer ha
Vs.
In the game Kobe Ain't Scorin , I'll eatem like a Gourmet
letting a 'Insect beat you' Just shows you cant handle a 'Hornet'
well saw what you were trying but nahhh
i dont 'Know' him but he's a rapist with a Wierd name
Punches will hang 'P'... Like Wiz Chain
basic at best
Treat em like 'One word messaging' I should'nt reply to ya text
My shots will 'Dump' on KnowP Like Kobe's Ex
ehhhh no
As I continue to Yawn . .im typing with boredom
How you a 'Mod' and cant do good battling in your own Forum (KnowP Mods "Front Line")
worded terrible and no need to explain your bar
Either way 'Ya get Cut' Like trying out for basketball with a Bandage
I'll 'Destruct his creativity just to make a Creational Damage
weak and played...ive seen concepts like this before
well dont make it seem like him grading yours harder then knowps soza, just trying to help you know were you went wrong. Knowp I know you didnt give this your all and you had some ight lines that were enough to get the W
vote...know
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...364/index.html
vote
Nice job both of you
Tooooopzzzz
My punches demolish opponents, yo eyes are closing soon
So If voters say So you up, they only tryina stitch bleeding open wounds
we know you bang animals daily, at baseball games you’ll starve son
you’ll order a hot dog, they’ll give you extra ketchup packets and hard buns
vs
i dont 'Know' him but he's a rapist with a Wierd name
Punches will hang 'P'... Like Wiz Chain
vote->KP. stronger hits..soza's lines lacked a bit of creativity n direction
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...519/index.html
My punches demolish opponents, yo eyes are closing soon
So If voters say So you up, they only tryina stitch bleeding open wounds
dope^
vs nothing really
soza deff seem a bit rusty or somethng idk.. bit rushed maybe? just keep doin ur thing
vote know p for better hitting punches creativity sting flow etc...good drop my dude
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...451/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...206/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...426/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=449361
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