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Verses due by Friday Midnight
LLL Rules Will Be Strictly Enforced
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Current Champion: Token
Good luck
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Last edited by 24 Karat; April 11th, 2009 at 04:31 PM
Reborn
Hmm, OKAY a X i D / Tokin' / Cornea
dude's a joke that'll miss.. i'll fuck him up, here's the twist
while you're here playin Board Games..
.....i'll 'Connect Four' that'll put your 'Life' at 'Risk'
brandon and mariah's brother? a third fool your mom should of aborted
now i look really bad..
.....for having THREE kids i bailed out payin child support with
this fag brings no moves cuz all his raps are stupid and dull
but all gayness aside.. and you just learned the cupid shuffle
i've seen ya pics you skinny bitch.. i can tell your not wealthy
so i'll be punching til your bodies swelled..
.....then you'll finally look healthy
and his namechange proves he's gay.. suckin dick is his charm, ya see?
cuz dude has an AXID oral solution that you can't find at no pharmacy
but thank you for your valued verses.. brother, your limits the sky
so here's a tokin' of my appreciation.. now put an icepack over that eye
and what's with your ego? that shit will get you killed.. you got no clue
when it comes to your punches, Cor's light..
.....and that's something we can ALL drink to
you shouldn't of changed your name, so now your heads gettin a good spin, dude
and next your gettin the boot.. since Token finds no more importance in you
might wanna change your name again.
-Karat-
Last edited by 24 Karat; April 10th, 2009 at 08:38 PM
Reborn
16. Let's do this.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...11#post6981611
you signed out then edited back in, ugly fuck, you're a ball of disgrace
cause we all know it, you can't make up your mind if it's all on your face
you're not even a matchup for me, time to give this tard more
while Apple's logo tries to prove something about him is hardcore
see, Eratik's a pussy and a lame...it's not just a battler I'm hitting now
and I want a leg up on my competition, so this week I'll be sitting down
you're not even close to good, I can't consider pretenders an obstacle
so if I put ER in a world of hurt...it'll more than likely resemble a hospital
this dude won't make a dent in the league, this nub is great? hardly!
cause if the rest of the us drop E...LLL will look like a fucking rave party
and I've read your old verses, your style is complete trash, it's shitty
yo, I mean, you somehow managed to drop 30 lines in a match for 16
this fag's bloated...it's not just his head, but it's the people that praise
so whether he's braindead or not, the scalpel be done as his ego deflates
listen man, your sexual fantasy is overflowing, stay away from erections
based on personality, we say "fuck Karat" like we are making suggestions
Shake it off. Peace.
Scytsophrenia
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Vs.Originally Posted by ERatiK
you signed out then edited back in, ugly fuck, you're a ball of disgrace
cause we all know it, you can't make up your mind if it's all on your face
if his minds on his face??? i don't get how that's relevant.
you're not even a matchup for me, time to give this tard more
while Apple's logo tries to prove something about him is hardcore
apple/ hard core.. decent concept i guess
see, Eratik's a pussy and a lame...it's not just a battler I'm hitting now
and I want a leg up on my competition, so this week I'll be sitting down
cool line.
you're not even close to good, I can't consider pretenders an obstacle
so if I put ER in a world of hurt...it'll more than likely resemble a hospital
too simple IMO.. easy name flip
this dude won't make a dent in the league, this nub is great? hardly!
cause if the rest of the us drop E...LLL will look like a fucking rave party
again to simple..but it's a decent line
and I've read your old verses, your style is complete trash, it's shitty
yo, I mean, you somehow managed to drop 30 lines in a match for 16
stop feeding off his verse (and i totally agree.. fuck that style.. lol)
this fag's bloated...it's not just his head, but it's the people that praise
so whether he's braindead or not, the scalpel be done as his ego deflates
bad wording.. scalp'll/scalpel. not a bad wp.. just need better wording.. still a cool concept.
listen man, your sexual fantasy is overflowing, stay away from erections
based on personality, we say "fuck Karat" like we are making suggestions
i don't get this.. you'll have to explain "
Eratik: you had a lot of oddly worded lines. A lot of missed punches. and a few line that didn't even seem to have a punch line. but at least one gem in ur verse. work on consistency.. shake rust off if there is any.
fav:
and what's with your ego? that shit will get you killed.. you got no clue
when it comes to your punches, Cor's light..
.....and that's something we can ALL drink to
axid: some really simple lines in there. for the most part, your wording was good, and didn't have too many terrible lines.
fav:
see, Eratik's a pussy and a lame...it's not just a battler I'm hitting now
and I want a leg up on my competition, so this week I'll be sitting down
over all: I think eratik had the best line of the battle, but tokin was far more consistent with wording and punches.
v/ acid
$usernamejoshs
$9.99 for an unbiased vote
$14.99 full breakdown vote
and his namechange proves he's gay.. suckin dick is his charm, ya see?
cuz dude has an AXID oral solution that you can't find at no pharmacy
Decent here, but you shoulda worded it better so people KNOW what you're saying, you know?? like Reflex didn't even see a diss here.. I see it as you're saying he gives oral sex to dudes, lol.. the wording coulda been better n more clear imo.. still, decent..
and what's with your ego? that shit will get you killed.. you got no clue
when it comes to your punches, Cor's light..
.....and that's something we can ALL drink to
This was pretty nice, I like it..
Vs
you signed out then edited back in, ugly fuck, you're a ball of disgrace
cause we all know it, you can't make up your mind if it's all on your face
LOL, funny..
you're not even close to good, I can't consider pretenders an obstacle
so if I put ER in a world of hurt...it'll more than likely resemble a hospital
Decent nameplay here..
Overall both verses were slacking imo.. Eratik had the best bar, but comparing both quotables it was pretty even.. when it comes down to the misses tho, Axid's weren't as bad.. this is a VERY close decision, but.... \\//ote: a X i D
P.S: "a X i D" is a really gay name.. it should be just Axid if anything.. but hey, atleast you're not Tokin anymore, lol..........
dude's a joke that'll miss.. i'll fuck him up, here's the twist
while you're here playin Board Games..
.....i'll 'Connect Four' that'll put your 'Life' at 'Risk'
MORE OF A STATER, EHH OPENER
brandon and mariah's brother? a third fool your mom should of aborted
now i look really bad..
.....for having THREE kids i bailed out payin child support with
EHHH-O.K
this fag brings no moves cuz all his raps are stupid and dull
but all gayness aside.. and you just learned the cupid shuffle
U MEANT PUT, IT WOULD OF BEEN NICER IF HIS NAME WAS CUPID,
NICE CONCEPT BUT DIDNT REALLY LAND.
i've seen ya pics you skinny bitch.. i can tell your not wealthy
so i'll be punching til your bodies swelled..
.....then you'll finally look healthy
STATER,
and his namechange proves he's gay.. suckin dick is his charm, ya see?
cuz dude has an AXID oral solution that you can't find at no pharmacy
NOT FEELING,
but thank you for your valued verses.. brother, your limits the sky
so here's a tokin' of my appreciation.. now put an icepack over that eye
ONLY STATER MEANT.
and what's with your ego? that shit will get you killed.. you got no clue
when it comes to your punches, Cor's light..
.....and that's something we can ALL drink to
THIS WAS A NICE CONCEPT, BUT YOU DID NOT LAND, YOUR WORDING AND WHAT YOU TRIED TO MAKE IT RELATED TO MADE IT WEAK AND WACK
you shouldn't of changed your name, so now your heads gettin a good spin, dude
and next your gettin the boot.. since Token finds no more importance in you
ANOTHER STATER
OVERALL WEAK, THE REASON THEY COME OF STATEMENT LIKE IS BECAUSE BESIDE THE FACT THEY ARE, THEY LACKED A LOT OF WIT IN THEM, PLUS IF YOUR STATING SOMETHING THEY SHOULD INVOLVE A LOT OF WIT SO IT WOULD COME OFF MORE LIKE A PUNCH.
VS.
you signed out then edited back in, ugly fuck, you're a ball of disgrace
cause we all know it, you can't make up your mind if it's all on your face
O.K
you're not even a matchup for me, time to give this tard more
while Apple's logo tries to prove something about him is hardcore
EHHH
see, Eratik's a pussy and a lame...it's not just a battler I'm hitting now
and I want a leg up on my competition, so this week I'll be sitting down
NICE CONCEPT, FAILED PLAIN AND SIMPLE.
you're not even close to good, I can't consider pretenders an obstacle
so if I put ER in a world of hurt...it'll more than likely resemble a hospital
O.K
this dude won't make a dent in the league, this nub is great? hardly!
cause if the rest of the us drop E...LLL will look like a fucking rave party
EHHH-O.K EXTACY LINE EHH
and I've read your old verses, your style is complete trash, it's shitty
yo, I mean, you somehow managed to drop 30 lines in a match for 16
SHIT MADE ME CHUCKLE BUT EHH VERSE,
this fag's bloated...it's not just his head, but it's the people that praise
so whether he's braindead or not, the scalpel be done as his ego deflates
YOU HAD WORDPLAY BUT IT DIDN'T LAND,
listen man, your sexual fantasy is overflowing, stay away from erections
based on personality, we say "fuck Karat" like we are making suggestions
EHHH
EHH VERSE, YOU HAD O.K ATTEMPTS, MOST DIDN'T LAND BECAUSE OF POOR WORDING
AND WHAT YOU RELATED IT WITH. BUT YOU HAD A LESS WACKER VERSE
ERATICK DIDN TREALLY HAVE ANYTHING WORTH QUOTING.
V/AX
dude's a joke that'll miss.. i'll fuck him up, here's the twist
while you're here playin Board Games..
.....i'll 'Connect Four' that'll put your 'Life' at 'Risk'
brandon and mariah's brother? a third fool your mom should of aborted
now i look really bad..
.....for having THREE kids i bailed out payin child support with
this fag brings no moves cuz all his raps are stupid and dull
but all gayness aside.. and you just learned the cupid shuffle
and what's with your ego? that shit will get you killed.. you got no clue
when it comes to your punches, Cor's light..
.....and that's something we can ALL drink to
vs.
you're not even a matchup for me, time to give this tard more
while Apple's logo tries to prove something about him is hardcore
see, Eratik's a pussy and a lame...it's not just a battler I'm hitting now
and I want a leg up on my competition, so this week I'll be sitting down
you're not even close to good, I can't consider pretenders an obstacle
so if I put ER in a world of hurt...it'll more than likely resemble a hospital
this was actually a close rusty battle. both had pretty cool ideas and fucked them over with wording, and some of the lines actually connected pretty decently.
overall, I think Eratik came a little bit fresher and a bit harsher.
goin against the grain..
vote: Eratik
dude's a joke that'll miss.. i'll fuck him up, here's the twist
while you're here playin Board Games..
.....i'll 'Connect Four' that'll put your 'Life' at 'Risk'
i've seen ya pics you skinny bitch.. i can tell your not wealthy
so i'll be punching til your bodies swelled..
.....then you'll finally look healthy
and what's with your ego? that shit will get you killed.. you got no clue
when it comes to your punches, Cor's light..
.....and that's something we can ALL drink to
VS
you signed out then edited back in, ugly fuck, you're a ball of disgrace
cause we all know it, you can't make up your mind if it's all on your face
you're not even close to good, I can't consider pretenders an obstacle
so if I put ER in a world of hurt...it'll more than likely resemble a hospital
Overall - i actully enjoyed this battle. pretty cool shit on both sides. I got eratik winning it by a bar.
Vote - Eratik
brandon and mariah's brother? a third fool your mom should of aborted
now i look really bad..
.....for having THREE kids i bailed out payin child support with
and what's with your ego? that shit will get you killed.. you got no clue
when it comes to your punches, Cor's light..
.....and that's something we can ALL drink to
vs
you're not even a matchup for me, time to give this tard more
while Apple's logo tries to prove something about him is hardcore
see, Eratik's a pussy and a lame...it's not just a battler I'm hitting now
and I want a leg up on my competition, so this week I'll be sitting down
this fag's bloated...it's not just his head, but it's the people that praise
so whether he's braindead or not, the scalpel be done as his ego deflates
ok battle. overall i felt tokin came slightly more consistent than eratik. a few more decent couplets and better wording gets him the win here.
v/tokin'
blackeloheimannunakirap
i've seen ya pics you skinny bitch.. i can tell your not wealthy
so i'll be punching til your bodies swelled..
.....then you'll finally look healthy
and his namechange proves he's gay.. suckin dick is his charm, ya see?
cuz dude has an AXID oral solution that you can't find at no pharmacy
and what's with your ego? that shit will get you killed.. you got no clue
when it comes to your punches, Cor's light..
.....and that's something we can ALL drink to
vs
you're not even a matchup for me, time to give this tard more
while Apple's logo tries to prove something about him is hardcore
see, Eratik's a pussy and a lame...it's not just a battler I'm hitting now
and I want a leg up on my competition, so this week I'll be sitting down
you're not even close to good, I can't consider pretenders an obstacle
so if I put ER in a world of hurt...it'll more than likely resemble a hospital
close one this, could definitely go either way. both had a few played lines (eratik: token of appreciation was the main one, n the child support flip was something i've seen similar variations on. axid: the drop e, 30/16 bars) and some stuff that wasn't connecting, and also some pretty cool shit. i got it tied in quotes, but i think i'm leaning toward eratik more because i preferred the execution of his quotes. axid didn't quite get the most out of some good concepts (i couldn't help but think the leg up needed rewording a bit, and the same with the ER, but they were still cool). for that reason i've gotta go with eratik here, but props to both.
v/eratik
E:
and his namechange proves he's gay.. suckin dick is his charm, ya see?
cuz dude has an AXID oral solution that you can't find at no pharmacy
and what's with your ego? that shit will get you killed.. you got no clue
when it comes to your punches, Cor's light..
.....and that's something we can ALL drink to
vs
AX:
you're not even close to good, I can't consider pretenders an obstacle
so if I put ER in a world of hurt...it'll more than likely resemble a hospital
pretty lackluster match up here...those r the only linesi felt from either one..the rest didn't have any type of impact at all..in the end E got it with one more line than Ax
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Get with it!!
dude's a joke that'll miss.. i'll fuck him up, here's the twist
while you're here playin Board Games..
.....i'll 'Connect Four' that'll put your 'Life' at 'Risk'
i've seen ya pics you skinny bitch.. i can tell your not wealthy
so i'll be punching til your bodies swelled..
.....then you'll finally look healthy
and what's with your ego? that shit will get you killed.. you got no clue
when it comes to your punches, Cor's light..
.....and that's something we can ALL drink to
VS
you signed out then edited back in, ugly fuck, you're a ball of disgrace
cause we all know it, you can't make up your mind if it's all on your face
you're not even close to good, I can't consider pretenders an obstacle
so if I put ER in a world of hurt...it'll more than likely resemble a hospital
i think i'm just feelin eratik's style a little more. good verse on both sides tho
v/ Eratik
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