Burden (4-3) vs. Tru Grit (4-1) [NEEDS VOTES]

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[Kenny the G]

lol, again?! whaddup burd. im not losing this time homie.

[Orc]

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[Orc]

kenny you need better concepts mine never will rattle,
how you gonna brainstorm? when you can't even weather this battle.
you should take phlymo's advice u've no hope according to me,
cuz you got THAT Punch style. you know, forced, repetitive and boring to read.
yea the economy is awful. but ur so afraid of burd hitting bitch,
man no wonder construction is struggling at the rate that you're shitting bricks.
i win everywhere. i'm elite whether or not RB thought the same,
you gonna make the cut? yea.. just remember to go ACROSS the vein.
u could spit chat up lines. ur old stuff were neat plays,
but how could Ken get a date when every single Barbie wack these days.
look queer boy, ur not shit. your bars are lackin' some hot wit...
if anyone was hot on ur heels. u'd call him a bitch & put them back in ur closet.
YOU DON'T GET BITCHES. have i made my point in this fine bout?
shiiit, anyone seeing u Noodle be so disgusted it'll make the new guy sign out.
plus i'm vicious with wishes u'll get hung above bitch,
cuz the knife'll double-cross ur heart, like EVERY bitch u fell in love with.

yea. 16.

[Kenny the G]

you got lucky last time we met. it wont happen again, i promise
if lightning strikes twice, its ok. u'll be nailed to a tree w/ sharp metal objects
i'll bring you up to speed if u didnt hear the news, my reps way violent
here's a current event: with you at the ocean floor gettin swept away by it

man wtf i battled kenny the week before last this is some gay shit. kontext has the same record as me we should have been matched up.

i want someone to address this or i'm not dropping/signing out

i see your reasoning, "quit while i'm ahead cuz i dont think that i'll last"
backpeddle now. cuz after i snap ya legs walking will be a thing of the past
i'll fold this queer. why fear 'em when even in his prime he's dry
Burds golden years could ruin its stock & have silver at an all-time high
shit. im just dropping by in this thread to tear the head off this maggot
in contrast, you're dropping bi in order to become a full fledged faggot
I rep my crew hard. but everything u utter it sucks
u aint part of the organization. u wack & ya wordings cluttered as fuck
s'like u brought a knife to a gunfight. i'll tim boot this loser
shoulda been packin, to make the transition out of the league go smoother
hate to shatter ya dreams but im rippin u apart like a bomb
i'd say pick up the pieces & keep it movin but thatd require legs & arms

[Chrit.]

you should take phlymo's advice u've no hope according to me,
cuz you got THAT Punch style. you know, forced, repetitive and boring to read.
YOU DON'T GET BITCHES. have i made my point in this fine bout?
shiiit, anyone seeing u Noodle be so disgusted it'll make the new guy sign out.

vs

you got lucky last time we met. it wont happen again, i promise
if lightning strikes twice, its ok. u'll be nailed to a tree w/ sharp metal objects
i'll fold this queer. why fear 'em when even in his prime he's dry
Burds golden years could ruin its stock & have silver at an all-time high
s'like u brought a knife to a gunfight. i'll tim boot this loser
shoulda been packin, to make the transition out of the league go smoother

Burden came pretty played. Ive seen the brainstorm concept before. The Barbie punch was already done and worded better by Blue Bayou. The quotables were pretty fresh but everything else was lacking.

Kenny: some sloppy wording and everything seemed to be the same style of punch. You were much harsher however and a bit fresher.

v/Kenny

[2triple0]

my favorite lines by Burden:

yea the economy is awful. but ur so afraid of burd hitting bitch,
man no wonder construction is struggling at the rate that you're shitting bricks.
i win everywhere. i'm elite whether or not RB thought the same,
you gonna make the cut? yea.. just remember to go ACROSS the vein.

and..

YOU DON'T GET BITCHES. have i made my point in this fine bout?
shiiit, anyone seeing u Noodle be so disgusted it'll make the new guy sign out.
plus i'm vicious with wishes u'll get hung above bitch,
cuz the knife'll double-cross ur heart, like EVERY bitch u fell in love with.

my favorite lines from Kenny:

you got lucky last time we met. it wont happen again, i promise
if lightning strikes twice, its ok. u'll be nailed to a tree w/ sharp metal objects
i'll bring you up to speed if u didnt hear the news, my reps way violent
here's a current event: with you at the ocean floor gettin swept away by it
i see your reasoning, "quit while i'm ahead cuz i dont think that i'll last"
backpeddle now. cuz after i snap ya legs walking will be a thing of the past
i'll fold this queer. why fear 'em when even in his prime he's dry
Burds golden years could ruin its stock & have silver at an all-time high
hate to shatter ya dreams but im rippin u apart like a bomb
i'd say pick up the pieces & keep it movin but thatd require legs & arms

overall: i liked burden's verse a lot when i first read it before kenny dropped yesterday, but i think kenny came with just enough to take the win.. his bars were connecting more clearly, and i think he was more original with his shit.. i thought some of burden's verse sounded a bit recycled. basically some of his bars were just concepts that have been used to death... good battle though on both sides.. i thought you both were decent, and was impressed with Kenny for being able to reply to Burden's verse with a dope drop..

vote/// Kenny

[B E L L]

burd..
brainstorm line was nice..
across the vein line raw..
that was about it for me..


Kenny..
ocean floor line was nice
that Bi line was RAW..
pick up the pieces but you need legs and arms line was funny

Vote Kenny

[Token]

kenny you need better concepts mine never will rattle,
how you gonna brainstorm? when you can't even weather this battle.
played
you should take phlymo's advice u've no hope according to me,
cuz you got THAT Punch style. you know, forced, repetitive and boring to read.
lol, cool.. i think that about covers the nameplays on him between the 2 of us, ha
yea the economy is awful. but ur so afraid of burd hitting bitch,
man no wonder construction is struggling at the rate that you're shitting bricks.
lol, ok
i win everywhere. i'm elite whether or not RB thought the same,
you gonna make the cut? yea.. just remember to go ACROSS the vein.
extremely played
u could spit chat up lines. ur old stuff were neat plays,
but how could Ken get a date when every single Barbie wack these days.
This is a great example on how wordplay is used, it can be read either way. Great bar man, definitely feelin' this.
look queer boy, ur not shit. your bars are lackin' some hot wit...
if anyone was hot on ur heels. u'd call him a bitch & put them back in ur closet.
nah
YOU DON'T GET BITCHES. have i made my point in this fine bout?
shiiit, anyone seeing u Noodle be so disgusted it'll make the new guy sign out.
eh
plus i'm vicious with wishes u'll get hung above bitch,
cuz the knife'll double-cross ur heart, like EVERY bitch u fell in love with.
haha, cool

vs.

you got lucky last time we met. it wont happen again, i promise
if lightning strikes twice, its ok. u'll be nailed to a tree w/ sharp metal objects
not feelin it
i'll bring you up to speed if u didnt hear the news, my reps way violent
here's a current event: with you at the ocean floor gettin swept away by it
kinda cool
i see your reasoning, "quit while i'm ahead cuz i dont think that i'll last"
backpeddle now. cuz after i snap ya legs walking will be a thing of the past
nah, and the quotes made me think you were gonna come out swingin with something hard as fuck, so this was disappointing
i'll fold this queer. why fear 'em when even in his prime he's dry
Burds golden years could ruin its stock & have silver at an all-time high
aight
shit. im just dropping by in this thread to tear the head off this maggot
in contrast, you're dropping bi in order to become a full fledged faggot
nah
I rep my crew hard. but everything u utter it sucks
u aint part of the organization. u wack & ya wordings cluttered as fuck
nah
s'like u brought a knife to a gunfight. i'll tim boot this loser
shoulda been packin, to make the transition out of the league go smoother
not feelin it
hate to shatter ya dreams but im rippin u apart like a bomb
i'd say pick up the pieces & keep it movin but thatd require legs & arms
blah

I was disappointed here guys, I was really expecting a good battle. This shit was weak in my opinion, sorry. No hate, just statin' my mind. I know both of you can come a lot better.

I actually had Burden with 2 nice lines I liked, and less bars that I didn't like at all.

So against the grain vote..

Vote: Burd

[Erupt]

kenny you need better concepts mine never will rattle,
how you gonna brainstorm? when you can't even weather this battle.
you should take phlymo's advice u've no hope according to me,
cuz you got THAT Punch style. you know, forced, repetitive and boring to read.
yea the economy is awful. but ur so afraid of burd hitting bitch,
man no wonder construction is struggling at the rate that you're shitting bricks.
^lmao

vs

i'll fold this queer. why fear 'em when even in his prime he's dry
Burds golden years could ruin its stock & have silver at an all-time high
shit. im just dropping by in this thread to tear the head off this maggot
in contrast, you're dropping bi in order to become a full fledged faggot
^dope
hate to shatter ya dreams but im rippin u apart like a bomb
i'd say pick up the pieces & keep it movin but thatd require legs & arms


hmm kenny had bar of the battle for me with the 'dropping bi' line and they are equal on quotables but burden had a few nearly quotables whilst the ones I didnt quote from kenny werent so good.. so for overall consistency I'ma go with

Vote Burden

[Tony B]

you should take phlymo's advice u've no hope according to me,
cuz you got THAT Punch style. you know, forced, repetitive and boring to read.
yea the economy is awful. but ur so afraid of burd hitting bitch,
man no wonder construction is struggling at the rate that you're shitting bricks.

vs

you got lucky last time we met. it wont happen again, i promise
if lightning strikes twice, its ok. u'll be nailed to a tree w/ sharp metal objects
i'll bring you up to speed if u didnt hear the news, my reps way violent
here's a current event: with you at the ocean floor gettin swept away by it
I rep my crew hard. but everything u utter it sucks
u aint part of the organization. u wack & ya wordings cluttered as fuck
s'like u brought a knife to a gunfight. i'll tim boot this loser
shoulda been packin, to make the transition out of the league go smoother

ok i gotta agree w/ bar on this
i've seen a LOT of burd's punches before.
ken came pretty solid this week
not really any haymakers, but enough to get the job done
good battle guys...

v/ kenny

[Jackie Moon]

you should take phlymo's advice u've no hope according to me,
cuz you got THAT Punch style. you know, forced, repetitive and boring to read.
yea the economy is awful. but ur so afraid of burd hitting bitch,
man no wonder construction is struggling at the rate that you're shitting bricks.
i win everywhere. i'm elite whether or not RB thought the same,
you gonna make the cut? yea.. just remember to go ACROSS the vein.
u could spit chat up lines. ur old stuff were neat plays,
but how could Ken get a date when every single Barbie wack these days.
look queer boy, ur not shit. your bars are lackin' some hot wit...
if anyone was hot on ur heels. u'd call him a bitch & put them back in ur closet.

STRONG VERSE ENJOYABLE TO READ MOST OF YOUR BARS WERE QUOTABLE
LIKE THOS ABOVE

VS.

i'll bring you up to speed if u didnt hear the news, my reps way violent
here's a current event: with you at the ocean floor gettin swept away by it
i see your reasoning, "quit while i'm ahead cuz i dont think that i'll last"
backpeddle now. cuz after i snap ya legs walking will be a thing of the past

O.K VERSE WASN'T THE BEST THOSE ARE THE BARS I WAS FEELING THE MOST THE LEGS AND ARM ONE HAD POTENTIAL BUT THE WORDING WAS EHHH,

V/BURD
STRONGER VERSE.

[Nick.]

yea the economy is awful. but ur so afraid of burd hitting bitch,
man no wonder construction is struggling at the rate that you're shitting bricks.
u could spit chat up lines. ur old stuff were neat plays,
but how could Ken get a date when every single Barbie wack these days
YOU DON'T GET BITCHES. have i made my point in this fine bout?
shiiit, anyone seeing u Noodle be so disgusted it'll make the new guy sign out.

vs.

i'll fold this queer. why fear 'em when even in his prime he's dry
Burds golden years could ruin its stock & have silver at an all-time high
shit. im just dropping by in this thread to tear the head off this maggot
in contrast, you're dropping bi in order to become a full fledged faggot

this was obviously a close battle.. the thing that decided this for me is consistency and i think burd had one or two more good punches than kenny. still, its extremely close.

vote - burd

[Hexzen]

kenny you need better concepts mine never will rattle,
how you gonna brainstorm? when you can't even weather this battle.
i win everywhere. i'm elite whether or not RB thought the same,
you gonna make the cut? yea.. just remember to go ACROSS the vein.
u could spit chat up lines. ur old stuff were neat plays,
but how could Ken get a date when every single Barbie wack these days.


VS


i see your reasoning, "quit while i'm ahead cuz i dont think that i'll last"
backpeddle now. cuz after i snap ya legs walking will be a thing of the past
s'like u brought a knife to a gunfight. i'll tim boot this loser
shoulda been packin, to make the transition out of the league go smoother
hate to shatter ya dreams but im rippin u apart like a bomb
i'd say pick up the pieces & keep it movin but thatd require legs & arms



Hmmm, really close here. Burd came consistent through out... the lines i didn't quote werent far behind the ones i did. As for Kenny the stand outs were above the rest. I think ima go with burden due to consistency. cool ass battle no doubt tho.



vote - burd.

[-Coop-]

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Burd
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kenny you need better concepts mine never will rattle,
how you gonna brainstorm? when you can't even weather this battle.
Uh huh
you should take phlymo's advice u've no hope according to me,
cuz you got THAT Punch style. you know, forced, repetitive and boring to read.
Dissing Punch more here imo
yea the economy is awful. but ur so afraid of burd hitting bitch,
man no wonder construction is struggling at the rate that you're shitting bricks.
Eh... I guess
i win everywhere. i'm elite whether or not RB thought the same,
you gonna make the cut? yea.. just remember to go ACROSS the vein.
I've seen this same concept before, just slightly reworded
u could spit chat up lines. ur old stuff were neat plays,
but how could Ken get a date when every single Barbie wack these days.
Barbie has been done before, as already pointed out, but this was cool
look queer boy, ur not shit. your bars are lackin' some hot wit...
if anyone was hot on ur heels. u'd call him a bitch & put them back in ur closet.
Nah, too much here
YOU DON'T GET BITCHES. have i made my point in this fine bout?
shiiit, anyone seeing u Noodle be so disgusted it'll make the new guy sign out.
Word, good
plus i'm vicious with wishes u'll get hung above bitch,
cuz the knife'll double-cross ur heart, like EVERY bitch u fell in love with.
Enough with the chick jokes already


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Kenny
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you got lucky last time we met. it wont happen again, i promise
if lightning strikes twice, its ok. u'll be nailed to a tree w/ sharp metal objects
A bit too wordy
i'll bring you up to speed if u didnt hear the news, my reps way violent
here's a current event: with you at the ocean floor gettin swept away by it
Uh huh.....
i see your reasoning, "quit while i'm ahead cuz i dont think that i'll last"
backpeddle now. cuz after i snap ya legs walking will be a thing of the past
Wasn't feeling the wording here
i'll fold this queer. why fear 'em when even in his prime he's dry
Burds golden years could ruin its stock & have silver at an all-time high
Nice, clever
shit. im just dropping by in this thread to tear the head off this maggot
in contrast, you're dropping bi in order to become a full fledged faggot
Decent
I rep my crew hard. but everything u utter it sucks
u aint part of the organization. u wack & ya wordings cluttered as fuck
Alright, but straightforward as hell
s'like u brought a knife to a gunfight. i'll tim boot this loser
shoulda been packin, to make the transition out of the league go smoother
Cool misdirection
hate to shatter ya dreams but im rippin u apart like a bomb
i'd say pick up the pieces & keep it movin but thatd require legs & arms
Eh...

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u could spit chat up lines. ur old stuff were neat plays,
but how could Ken get a date when every single Barbie wack these days.
YOU DON'T GET BITCHES. have i made my point in this fine bout?
shiiit, anyone seeing u Noodle be so disgusted it'll make the new guy sign out.

VS

i'll fold this queer. why fear 'em when even in his prime he's dry
Burds golden years could ruin its stock & have silver at an all-time high
s'like u brought a knife to a gunfight. i'll tim boot this loser
shoulda been packin, to make the transition out of the league go smoother
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Well, this one was damn near tied. I feel like one more good/quotable bar from either would push it in their favor by a long shot, but as it stands, I think Kenny gets this by a hair simply because Burd had more lines I actually didn't like as compared to just feeling indifferent about them.

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VOTE: KENNY
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