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[Trey Songz]

[soundclick]7428911[/soundclick]

Download:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7428911

Enjoy.

EDIT: I think I'ma tweak the mix just a bit this weekend.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php/westcoast-392750.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-g-392724.html

[SHAKE JUNT!]

actually at one point you got like 3 different melodies going at once which is dope layering. the drum beat is tight perfect tempo, the drums sound a lil generic sounding but they ain't harsh sounding or nothing which i like or too noisy. definatley here some Dre influence which is cool, but i'd say try to switcch up the swag more so it don't sound like a Dre beat cuz it will be more original sounding then. overall good beat.

[II]

This kinda reminds me of your earlier beats... I like the melodies, but all of those synths are too thin for my taste... Drums do sound kinda generic.... Overall this aint bad, just those few things i didnt like

lol
What, you on holiday or smth to drop beats every day?

[Trey Songz]

Lol... I see you read my little msg. Nahhh.... I just went beast status and dropped 2 beats in one weekend!!!

Thanks for feed man.

[D. Josey]

Your best one yet.

[Trey Songz]

Thanks man.

[MGthefuture]

The best i heard so far in terms of thump...the melody could of used some more depth...but im not the one to complain..do your thizzle

[Joe Maloof]

this sound like a mac dre beat
i like it one my favs

[JAZZSCAPEZ]

not bad not bad moon......needs harder drums....but its def. a cool lil beat i like the hits those help alot....nice drop.