Notez (1-1) vs. Paradox (2-0)

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Contender: K

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[Notez]

Check.......

[Dox Phonic]

Checka

[Notez]

He's Already Dead! Thats Not A PAradox, Cuz I Really Am Sendin a Pair a Shots
N Nothing Could 'Cover' ya Blood Loss Fast Enough Even if u had a 'Pair of Docs'
(Docs-Doctors or Doc+Cover clothing=Dockers)

[Dox Phonic]

I drop a divine line plague, insane and bubonic
I destroy with my style, you just take Notez on it

[soberSE0ULja]

He's Already Dead! Thats Not A PAradox, Cuz I Really Am Sendin a Pair a Shots
N Nothing Could 'Cover' ya Blood Loss Fast Enough Even if u had a 'Pair of Docs'
(Docs-Doctors or Doc+Cover clothing=Dockers)

Make your line simpler man, the capital letters, the random puncuation made me automatically hate your line w/o even reading it. and a bar that has to be explained at the end sucks already man. you don't have to explain shit that we would have gotten man, it takes away from the power of your punch. next time just write it simpler like this and it'll be just as good.

He's already dead! thats not a paradox, cuz i really am sending a pair of shots
And nothing could cover ya blood loss fast enough......
.......even if you had a 'pair of docs

regardless, your multies were cute and the wordplay wasn't bad. the pair a docs line i dont think i've heard before and you delivered it alright.

I drop a divine line plague, insane and bubonic
I destroy with my style, you just take Notez on it

Can't really say much. It was just simple, and the notez line is probably as played as you can get. Try to think of something away from the obvious next time.




vote/Notez

[Josh M.]

Haha... I've heard the pair a docs line b4...
along with
pair a cocks
pair a docks
pair a jocks
pair a clocks
and...
wait for it...
pair a smocks...
haha... my name is stupid.

i think the rule says you can't post after you throw your punch out.

but anyways, i didn't like either but Notes tried doing too much i feel like and it backfired.

vote dox

[Star.]

v/ Paradox. Even though his was played and very simple, it was still much better than Notez. He at least had a nice flow to it. Notez was very forced and needs MUCH rewording. and please stop with the caps letters and unnecessary apostrophies. the mods already went over this....we are supposed to be elevating...not ignoring.

[it's Cento]

Paradox's didnt really make sense to me - i understand the nameplay, but if ya read the punch its kinda odd - notez was pretty played out, but i think dude had a better overall punch.

v/ Notez

[The_Phantom]

notez - im sorry that was horrid, it seems like u tried wayyyy 2 hard...i think u shud have changed the whole rhyme.

paradox - ok the notez thing i can see why ppl wud say its played but i think it was good enough to take this one


vote - paradox

[cK-]

Close battle

\/=para wasnt feelin notes as much

[nolonger]

notez - dont explain ure punch, people should get it...far to unwitty tho

para - not great but enough to win

vote para!

[Kontext]

Notez--no need for expo's we're not retarted...well some of us arent.....but still not that good

dox-your wording fucked up everything......cool try tho


vote-Paradox, Pair of sock, pair of cocks..& wait for it....para STOp


vote on me v.s bartender if you havent already

[Abo 3amter]

i think notez had it, because his bar was a bit more complex...i didnt really think Para had anything......


V/ Notez.. plz dont explain ur bar it was OBVIOUS

[White-Winter]

notez-ur punch was cool but the cap lock thing is old skool....u had some nice multies and a good punch

paradox-ur punch was simple and it did flow very well

v/notez for a harder and more complex punch