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    Getting Ready To Make History!!!

    Feel Me...diz All Me..killbill Style...!lol,uno..off T.o.p!!!


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    Im Here To Stay! Im Taking All Feed You Can Give!

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    Re: Getting Ready To Make History!!!

    You got potential for sure man. The rhyming is there, I'm feelin the multis too. But sometimes it feels like you rhyme just to rhyme... work on that. try to make every line on point and relevant to the topic. Like i said though, your rhyming is fine, im feelin the multis too, try telling a story or sticking to a particular topic. Stay up man

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    Re: Getting Ready To Make History!!!

    yeah this shit has potential, the multies were present, yet basic. just keep practicing with those and stay elevating.

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    Re: Getting Ready To Make History!!!

    thx feed will be taking & elevated!!

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