The Edge Of Reality - Nah & XM

[Nahlidge]

Nahlidge
XM

What`s life? But a dream that`s waitin` to come true
That breaks in to come thru & start takin` it from you
We try shapin` to un-do whatever`s not fittin` the mold
In with the new, hopin` not to get a whiff of the old
Pictures have told a greater story, the scene is perfect
To the point I wish I could bring these dreams to surface
Stitch seams, on purpose they tried to shatter the thread
Reality`s now an obstacle standin` in the back of my head
Passion is dead, death gives birth to the greed and wants
Runnin` past what I need, but my needs are what haunt
Grantin` me nightmares, become clear & turn into day dreams
Started on rocky roads, but eventually started to pave these
Smooth run courses, forcin` me to try to erase
Memories of the woman I`m stuck with while tryna amaze
The one I want, but is she a woman or metaphor?
Either way, it still seems like I met her before
So I`m jealous, tryna piece together the shards I`m left with
Makin` shapes outta nuthin`, moldin` them to perfection
Question, what comes from a dream? But what we miss in life
Until I awake, then they become the things I miss at night

In the midst of this cold sweat seems this dream has repeated
My imagination will wander I wonder where I should keep it
For every moment my eyes close I tend to see her reflection
Since my mind is perfection building I'm in need of an exit
Hence my plea of aggression guess'n I hope it's denial
But with these steps that I take leaves prints to open a smile
These many notions are foul almost an obvious trend
Aim'n for you and a kin like Obi's out for revenge
Feels like my brain is collasp'n because this fatal attraction
So if I play with the passion it'll probably save me the rations
Cuz my relation's a hasbeen maybe my brain is just crash'n
In my heart she's half of me which makes a dangerous fraction
But this lady from back when with the lastest of fashion
Stays on the tip of my mind while my dangles are gasp'n
Oh how I favor reactions she'll probably see what saying..
..but never hear what I say if I keep thinking in captions
Drove my will to go flat out on a whim and retire
Hell we've been friends for years still a secret admire
So when im speak'n required silence she'll notice the haste
I'm at the brink of my sanity dreamin holds it in place

[Nahlidge]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...es-393116.html
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[Crookshank]

Some good shit man, I was really feelin this. Multis were on point, rhyming was up there. I was definitely feelin the content in general on this man... I liked your verse the best.

Pictures have told a greater story, the scene is perfect
To the point I wish I could bring these dreams to surface
Stitch seams, on purpose they tried to shatter the thread
Reality`s now an obstacle standin` in the back of my head

^^ my favorite lines right here man

overall, good shit. Flow seemed a bit off in some parts, maybe not tho. Either way it was raw, i liked it. Leave me some feed on A State of Dismay, I'd appreciate it.

[Nahlidge]

Thanks for the feed.

[Soule]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...so-393327.html



This, unlike the piece I just read.. it Hall of Fame. Then again, should we really be surprised that such a dope piece from two AI members deserves the nomination? Nah opened this shit flawlessly dude, I love how you have this lazy wording but it still sounds so fucking dope. The flow is just insane, and your message and content strike me man. Malice, no sign of rust.. came in here and played his weight well. Loved this piece, keep it up guys.. hit me for a collab sometime soon.

[Rosetti Frost]

flowed nice................rhymes were good........complex enough

multis were all there...............

content was very good......

overall good shit........I like it alot........

nobody seemed to outshine the other......which made for a good read because if one is off even a little it makes for a bad read......but this shit was nice from both of you

[Cody Nash]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...so-393327.html
^^byberry asylum, feed it guys.. not for me but for my crew..




guys this was dope. not bad. some nice lines, I liked the Obi line, that was pretty dope. you both did soundly, and I can't complain about the read. pretty fresh, concept was aiight but the flow I think made this read for me because you both had such a similar style.. blended almost perfectly imo... nice read my dudes...


nah, get at me about a collabo.. been wantin' to do one with ya bruh..

[Oranges]

your verses definitely worked very well together, and I enjoyed the read. nice vocab, great multis/flow. easy to look at, well formed. I especially liked:

So I`m jealous, tryna piece together the shards I`m left with
Makin` shapes outta nuthin`, moldin` them to perfection

Feels like my brain is collasp'n because this fatal attraction
So if I play with the passion it'll probably save me the rations

[XM]

uppin love'n the feed keep'em coming and i'll RTF links no prob

[Nazgul]

nice work.

I think nah. had a better flow. and he started off the piece well.. had alot of solid content kinda drew me in. X followed up nicely, and had a pretty nice verse aswell. overrall nice drop

Grantin` me nightmares, become clear & turn into day dreams
Started on rocky roads, but eventually started to pave these
Smooth run courses, forcin` me to try to erase
Memories of the woman I`m stuck with while tryna amaze
The one I want, but is she a woman or metaphor?
Either way, it still seems like I met her before
^I liked that part alot. It was on point.

And I agree with cry, X's obi line was pretty nice to.

[XM]

weill be RTF'n when i get off work

[Daz]

nigga this shit is hot. Nah, your verses are always perfect to me cuz we have basically the same style of writing topicals. That peices of nothing/molding into perfection line was pure fire nigga. But i won't sit here and tell you what lines were hot cuz i like the entire verse honestly. XM, you got that audio/topical style as opposed to me and Nah's Topical/audio style. Which is dope too. You verse was fire too. The obi line was dope. took me a second cuz i was just reading lol but you really turned it up from fatal attraction till the end of that rhyming word. shit was hot fellaz.

Definately HOF.

RTF on my newest song hoes. Jackin For Beats

[XM]

Uppin

[Woganeen]

no complaints about this...i enjoyed reading it...lines that struck a chord to me are as follows:

What`s life? But a dream that`s waitin` to come true
That breaks in to come thru & start takin` it from you

Question, what comes from a dream? But what we miss in life
Until I awake, then they become the things I miss at night

For every moment my eyes close I tend to see her reflection
Since my mind is perfection building I'm in need of an exit

Oh how I favor reactions she'll probably see what saying..
..but never hear what I say if I keep thinking in captions

dunno what is was, but they caught my attention the most. can't really give elevation tips as you's are above me and i'll happily admit it.

all i can say is, good read...i enjoyed it, keep it up.

keep posting shit up

(i'm not good at feed)

[XM]

Uppin...and Nah we made HOF shun lol...on to the next