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Mauvais Loup
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aiight , checkin in.
..awe get raw ? no kiddin. flow is `midfuckinevil` & everythin' i spit is crack..
mau see me..i'll have this nigga jumpin out the `window` like a ron browz track.
..no mattah how hard u come u got no chance in this `dance`. my spit's is piff..
shucks is `ridic`..ima hand this man his first initial of his last name like a damn christmas gift.
..i'm the prince of dis rap shit. stop callin yahselves `writers`..
my philosophy is ill. goin `jaws` on em by the way i'm eatin up these civil 'biters'!.
..flow right to left , swing jabs hard. `hopkins` in the ring. with the floyd may flow..
loup beatin awe ? hell no. you'd think he was on real chance of love by the way i'm bout to introduce him to KO.
..last bar for shucks. sucks for mau. this is the bar of death , yah shakin in yah boots i bet..
hop on an elevator like flo-rida and try tah hurry..cuhs u ain't even on awe's level yet.
bar 1 : Ron Browz made a song called jumpin out the window haha. peeep it ! shit's hot lols
bar 2 : his last name initial is L , which i'm about to hand em.
bar 3 : his little rap crew , self explanitory.
bar 4 : the bitch on the show named ko. self explanitory if u have a brain
bar 5 : self explanitory , quick spit.
20 min key shit. scream @ me
i'ma corvet cat, you just another fuckin' minivan queer, i swear
coz niggas always pop ya trunk and shove all of their junk in there
you ain't fresh, on the real, no one on the corner have swagger like Awe
but then again....he's the only dude wearin' pink panties and a matchin' bra
how you gon' come at me without knowin' how to punch, ya not fire
coz when asked to put ya dukes up...you just pulled your daisie's up higher
ya face is absolutely horrific, there's no words to describe or explain
you scarecrows 'n pigeons and since i'm not a wizard, you'll never get brain
you should bow down before me, no way you're winning this dawg
coz my own hands are praising me the way i leave them in Awe
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ugh , uppin.
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ML won this becouse he came down harder and wit better metaphors n vocab over all a bettr verse,AweShucks try harder not impressed...
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that's not even an explained vote...didn't u read the rules.
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your vote will be dq'ed..
uppin
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uhm...uppppin again ?
0-0. need some votes !
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..awe get raw ? no kiddin. flow is `midfuckinevil` & everythin' i spit is crack..
mau see me..i'll have this nigga jumpin out the `window` like a ron browz track.
//// not a bad opener but i thought your structure could've been more solid
..no mattah how hard u come u got no chance in this `dance`. my spit's is piff..
shucks is `ridic`..ima hand this man his first initial of his last name like a damn christmas gift.
/// good dilivery but your flow wasnt there
..i'm the prince of dis rap shit. stop callin yahselves `writers`..
my philosophy is ill. goin `jaws` on em by the way i'm eatin up these civil 'biters'!.
/// good
..flow right to left , swing jabs hard. `hopkins` in the ring. with the floyd may flow..
loup beatin awe ? hell no. you'd think he was on real chance of love by the way i'm bout to introduce him to KO.
//// weak delivery homie step it up
..last bar for shucks. sucks for mau. this is the bar of death , yah shakin in yah boots i bet..
hop on an elevator like flo-rida and try tah hurry..cuhs u ain't even on awe's level yet.
/// i wasnt feelin that 1
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i'ma corvet cat, you just another fuckin' minivan queer, i swear
coz niggas always pop ya trunk and shove all of their junk in there
// tight opener
you ain't fresh, on the real, no one on the corner have swagger like Awe
but then again....he's the only dude wearin' pink panties and a matchin' bra
/// hahah fuckin clownin
how you gon' come at me without knowin' how to punch, ya not fire
coz when asked to put ya dukes up...you just pulled your daisie's up higher
//// that was FIRE
ya face is absolutely horrific, there's no words to describe or explain
you scarecrows 'n pigeons and since i'm not a wizard, you'll never get brain
// that was ok but you came harder the rest so go HARD
you should bow down before me, no way you're winning this dawg
coz my own hands are praising me the way i leave them in Awe
//tight
\\// vote ML
thanx for the vote.
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Nuttin
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you should bow down before me, no way you're winning this dawg
coz my own hands are praising me the way i leave them in Awe
Cool closer by ML.. Other than that, nowun came wit anything.. ML gets my vote due to 1 bar n a better structure.. \\//ote: Mauvais Loup
thanx for the vote man.
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