nice piece, I'd give it a 6.5 outta 10, I'm a big joe budden fan too, and this had that feel too it. I've not read any of your other posts but I'ma have to check them out. I think this post had a decent flow but it was the emotion that stands out for me.
fuck outta here... im all for crit... but if what u drop aint as good as mine... u can suck my dick with that rating... nigga drop a POINT 5...to make it seem official... lol
iBeast
decent imagery, good multis..
overall a sollid peice.
preciate it...upps
iBeast
This was a decent read....packed with lots of emotion...I felt the word choices coulda been better in some spots...flows like it would make a nice audio track....you had some good metaphors thrown in there..some relatable scenarios...Strong voice and a strong closer I thought....keep it up man...Peace....
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