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    ...Dusting Ice Off A Freesing Flow...

    Yo can catch me on the block watchin weed get sold
    To G’z, weaks, freaks and hoes
    I don’t do it…but I need my smoke
    So you know im weeded, breathing O’z
    Its nothing im something like sixty nine seasons old
    Fucking right you can find me…breaching zones
    Crushing micz, rhyming fire, feeling cold…
    Dusting ice off a freezing flow
    You feel it……………………….No?
    Like numb slugs from a feature chrome greeting domes off weakened foes
    Young thugs im eating whole!!
    Fuck beef…the teeths piercing bones, thru gristle
    A missile from the pistol leaves grieving homes
    Lyrics is locked!! But they say im needing flow??
    Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!
    A boss in beast mode makin shits seem easy tho im bleeding poems;
    Releasing received strain to the brain
    Revealing pain, obtained mental beatings
    From people unnamed…remained aftermath…
    Its evident im seeking sane!!!!!
    Im too young…I don’t fucking need this mayn!

    So I holla at my brutha from anutha mutha pass the dutch
    Ribs touchin so clips bussing tho u know im fat as fuck
    Who called him fatty……………………………….what??
    Get gun butted, nutted im cutting thru and up…
    Leave em lookin like a pussy pushin no longer pregnant prostitute slut
    The surgeon serving em caesareans and sum im severally severely severing in half!
    Signatured, im signing em off…………….
    Satan take em…sincerely the boss………….
    For real what the fuck was they thinking saying they want a part of me?
    Some joke-ish, do em muhfukaz like moses and part they seaz/sees…
    Expose the path to the core, lyrics is exploding that fa sure
    Adore mine and elevate yours…
    While im listening to his, tryna elevate more

    Shit he’s on some dope-ish again
    Spittin fire at dudes hoping to reign
    But he’s openly going insane
    Breathing weed;
    He’s pleading please ease and stop provoking the pain
    Naah
    He’s healing, heading advice
    Suicide vibes subsided but he stay bleeding; wielding knives


    fuck outta here, niggaz closing my shit cuz its too short lol
    iBeast

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    Re: ...Dusting Ice Off A Freesing Flow...

    smh at the fucking typo...

    link 1 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...er-390693.html

    link 2 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...fe-390354.html

    link 3 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ye-390245.html

    ^ iunno which ones i done used already, if i have tell a muthafuka first like you do with erry1 else...faggot
    iBeast

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    Re: ...Dusting Ice Off A Freesing Flow...

    boss in beast mode makin shits seem easy tho im bleeding poems;


    lmfao i knew u was one of these poetic dudes



    this was raw, u know it is


    So I holla at my brutha from anutha mutha pass the dutch
    Ribs touchin so clips bussing tho u know im fat as fuck

    thats sick


    Crushing micz, rhyming fire, feeling cold…
    Dusting ice off a freezing flow
    You feel it……………………….No?

    thats kinda poetic lmao


    aye edgar allen esco


    this was fuckin raw


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    Re: ...Dusting Ice Off A Freesing Flow...

    lmao bastard, shit aint even poetic just cuz i dropped that one line...das fucked up lol

    appreciate the loox... by the way i wrote this when i was 15 roflmao
    iBeast

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    Re: ...Dusting Ice Off A Freesing Flow...

    the bleeding poems line was the best one...but i ain't gonna make any poet assumptions unlike my broham...lmao

    anyways....for 15...shit was dope...i wanna take a wild guess and say you've been doin the text thing since then cause the structure of the rhyme was pretty proper...only sayin that cause usually EVERYONE (including myself) really has/ had shitty structure until they hop on a board and build thier own....anyways...shit was nice though...good read...
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    naah, been doin this text for what...bout a year lol appreciate tha feed son

    uppin
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