FL Champ: Punch Vs. R.A.S jr (Punch wins)

[Spoken]

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[Barcotic]

10 lines..
I'm too into LLL rite now to do more than that so too bad....

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[RAS.]

Sure told you Il be Here

[RAS.]

Blah,Blah half assed 12 Lines as agreed bar


This the champ match bitch Ras here came to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election

12 easy..bitch

[RAS.]

Blah,Blah half assed 12 Lines as agreed bar


This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election

12 easy..bitch


edit

[Barcotic]

I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..

[The Lyricist 2]

This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement

pretty good opener

Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down

lol nice

You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it

rediculously played. i'm pretty sure barcotic even said something like this in his last FL HW match

Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins

played as well. ok tho

Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead

ok

Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election

could've been worded into a better punch, but ok


I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..

lol I get it, but its pretty bad wordplay

I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..

pretty good

Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..

fake personal. ok tho

You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..

lol nice

I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..

no

You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..

nothin special

Overall this battle was pretty even. Barcotic had a good flow as always which made his punches sound better than they are, as always. Surprisingly though ras came with the harder punches so he's getting my vote

Vote-R.A.S. jr

[country]

ras
This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
i would say bar lines i splayed, but i really liked this

Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
blah, no , cvome on ras after a nice opener this shouldnt be here

You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
umm u do realize this is kinda like bitin to me?

Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
concept was nice

Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
this was ok man

Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
this was clever i thought




BAR
I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
lmao dude desert n center dont ryhme

I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
lmao this was nice man

Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
ughhh

You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
lol this was nice

I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
no

You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
fuckin loved this line



aight to me with ras its like he is on the verge of droppin somehting sick each line, but he doesnt, like his buildup is sick, but then he follows thru with nothing,

bar, dawg u had 2 good bars, but u could of come alot better


AND u stole a concept man, it was almos like biting, esp since it happened to be in the collab i was in


vote:bar


RAS watch ur concepts man as i said, its almos like u bit

[RAS.]

ok my bad I'll watch it

[Bakkie]

ras
This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
...not bad man..

Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
...lol was aiight..

You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
...played i've seen this before...

Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
...not bad could of come harder on this...

Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
...nice..

Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
...was set up nice like the obama bit but just ended weak..




BAR
I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
...was set up nice man wordplay was sweet just the ending dint go..

I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
..haha sick...

Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
...nah...

You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
...lol nice man...

I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
...hmm not bad seen better from you..

You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
...sick man flow and wording sick...

iv seen better from you both, but MY VOTE = Barcotics simply 'cause his personel and punch's only a couple hit harder than R.A.S iv seen better from you bars tho. R.A.S i think your set ups wear tight just at the end of the bar was just ending up a weak hit.

[The Apparition]

Ras Jr

This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
Nice opener

Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
Good play on words but weak punch

You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
Meh kinda reminded me of what Canibus said to LL....a little played

Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
Nice

Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
Meh

Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
Weak Closer

Barcotic

I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
Lmfao WoW nice opener

I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
lol nice

Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
it was okay but kinda played, defiantly not a hard punch at all

You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
Blah

I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
Good play on words, but i think you stumbled w/ the delivery

You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
Nice Closer


Overall it was a pretty close match Ras was more constant in his verse with more constant punches...Bar threw some crazy Hailmarries in the beginning but later fell off towards the end.

VOTE BAR

in the end bar bad better concepts and more clever/hard hitting punches

[Vaskez]

This the champ match bitch Ras here came to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
^^pre-internet type played
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
^^played
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
^^too basic to be good
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
^^nah played, spit's done it better
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
^^ok
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
^^see what you tried to do, needed better wording

vs.

I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
^^kinda forced, ok
I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
^^not too bad
Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
^^nah, played
You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
^^nah, seen much better plays on wearing the belt
I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
^^meh
You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
^^meh

you both used too many ideas Ive seen before

still I think Bar just edged it, has slightly better wording

v/Bar

[Barcotic]

4-1 me..^^

[Vaskez]

^^how did you work that out? You cheater, you looked at the poll didn't you?!

[..Compa..]

R.A.S. jr

This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
..decent actully 2.3/5 opener..

Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
..played concept..

You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
lol not bad

Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
..not bad here, liked it..

Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
..lol nice..

Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
..decent but could've been better 2/5 ender..


Barcotic


I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
..lol nice nameplay liked this concept and this did rhyme, ya need to sound it out if you dont see it 2.7/5 opener..

I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
..lol very niceee..

Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
..ok, but could've been better here..

You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
..lol funny bar here..

I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
..ha not bad actully..


You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
..lol decent ender 2.5/5..

overall vote- Barcotic bit close here, but i felt bar edged it with 2 nice bar's.. this was a better hw match then tha last one bar had imo