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my cursed rhymes burst minds first sign drama in the worst kind
i search times lookin 4 earth guys that birthed lies and cursed lives
u aint worth rides so i will surf tides lurch size tell i here church cries
murk spies jerk dimes tell the clerk finds condoms with germs dryed

put aside these

wack quotes that lack votes couldent get my flow if u back stroked in a battle u get whipped like black folks attack brokes for packed smokes broken dreams and cracked hopes i jack coke from rat jokes like hunters i stack doe

for ever

send letters 2 trend setters like u weak geaks couldent bend feathers im hot as wearin ten sweaters make it rain so much i offend weather my pen severs

brig losin when never cause

my mic get em strikes venom leave these pussy blue like dykes denim




if u got any pointers ways 2 help me elavate let me no if this is alright or shit i took a brake 4 a while just gettin back in the mood of textin tryin 2 get better let me no thanks

thanks

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shit i forgot 2 whole bars o well whatever

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wack quotes that lack votes couldent get my flow if u back stroked in a battle u get whipped like black folks attack brokes for packed smokes broken dreams and cracked hopes i jack coke from rat jokes like hunters...

I like this man, but you should write more verses. I think you should like try choosing a topic and writing about it. It was kind of hard to understand the message in some lines.

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yeah thanks alot man this was just a multie verse i did but respect for peepin it i now it looks really sloppy 2 lol

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your multies are real good and like imposy said above i would like tto see you take hold of just one topic... keep working....

"im hot as wearin ten sweaters make it rain so much i offend weather
that shit was dope