Barcotic Vs Smoke

[therealsmoke]

^^ good vote

i dont think netcees watch much basketball

[Vince]

TRS-



i flex on writtens, you comin harder? i doubt it
you'll never win in Toronto, ask Vince Carter about it
LOL...funny shyt.





I think Bar won it cause Smoke had alot of humor....but Bar mixed humor with complexity which was dope.

I got that line....you were saying Vince didn't win much on the Raptors....that shyt was hilarious and everyone knows Bar is a hockey nut.

[..Compa..]

Barcotic

Compare both our styles, crowds will never miss the dope,
but they'll buy nicotine patches cuz they're gettin sick of Smoke's..
..lol good personal here 2.7/5..

This fag'll meet his maker but he'll still be flowin after death,
when I leave him 'lost at C'.... like he didn't know the alphabet..
..decent wordplay not bad..

This bitch might have the Drive to win but na, he can't stop Mike,
cuz in this battle Smoke trails without the thirty year old exaust pipe..
..lol nice..

You write rhymes but why dawg? you clearly rhyme soft,
the only way you'd be allRight is if I cut your whole left side off..
..dopeness like this concept punch..

Damn, I just burried you alive dawg, but now I wonder,
I know you're not Australian but how's the land down under??
..lol good way to close this verse 2.8/5..

therealsmoke

you're not hot, have you eatin dirt like chop blocks
i'm stompin on these squares, you can call it hop scotch
..ok but your not dissin at tha 2nd line its more self glory 1.3/5 opener..

challenged n popped shots, now i gotta slay her
surprised you accepted, expected a Mighty Duck from a hockey player
..lol ok..

say you wanna compare verses, here's the best description
i'm eatin Bar's, like i got a xanax prescription
..dope personal funny..

i flex on writtens, you comin harder? i doubt it
you'll never win in Toronto, ask Vince Carter about it
..lol good personal..

and if you DO win this shit, i can see ya tricks
just call in CSI to dust the voters' dicks for Bar's fingerprints
..lol good closer 2.8/5..


overall vote- Barcotic..damn at first by reading both verse's i thought bar had this one-sided but smoke came bit funny and also personal but his opener is what lossed my vote, good battle though

[therealsmoke]

I got that line....you were saying Vince didn't win much on the Raptors....that shyt was hilarious and everyone knows Bar is a hockey nut.

i was talkin bout the other voters, you're the only one who got it

[verbalweaponz]

lmmfao. at this rate I'll be able to vote in like 10 years. this was pretty even, smoke that fuccin vince carter line was real nice, Bar, that fuccin patch/sick of smoke line was ill too.

[Wordz AhGod.]

challenged n popped shots, now i gotta slay her
surprised you accepted, expected a Mighty Duck from a hockey player
and if you DO win this shit, i can see ya tricks
just call in CSI to dust the voters' dicks for Bar's fingerprints

vs

Compare both our styles, crowds will never miss the dope,
but they'll buy nicotine patches cuz they're gettin sick of Smoke's
meh, not too hard but I like the wording some what.
You write rhymes but why dawg? you clearly rhyme soft,
the only way you'd be allRight is if I cut your whole left side off..
very old but again, I liked your wording.
Damn, I just burried you alive dawg, but now I wonder,
I know you're not Australian but how's the land down under??
Same as the last bars.. old but a good flip that I dont think Ive seen before on this concept.

Well, Smoke did a cool drop but most of his bars weren't too hard hitting and his nameplays felt a bit forced. Barcotic, your wording is way better now and that'll get you further then having the tightest concepts but you need to work on not trying to bring back 05' when you think of concepts. Ive seen all of them before but your wording was pretty good so I quoted them. You basically got my vote for consistancy, so keep that in mind for your next battle.

V/Barcotic.

[Governor]

Barcotic;
Compare both our styles, crowds will never miss the dope,
but they'll buy nicotine patches cuz they're gettin sick of Smoke's..
Nice flow/multi's, nice set up & execution, mad played np is all that was bad about it. 2.5
This fag'll meet his maker but he'll still be flowin after death,
when I leave him 'lost at C'.... like he didn't know the alphabet..
Not bad, never hit as hard as expected, seen better. 2
This bitch might have the Drive to win but na, he can't stop Mike,
cuz in this battle Smoke trails without the thirty year old exaust pipe..
This was a better n/p. NOT played. Nice pun. Nice all round bar. 3
You write rhymes but why dawg? you clearly rhyme soft,
the only way you'd be allRight is if I cut your whole left side off..
PLAYED! I can't believe no1 else has seen this. 2 (seen it done WAY better)
Damn, I just burried you alive dawg, but now I wonder,
I know you're not Australian but how's the land down under??
Nah, australian down under punch's are PLAYED wen used as a personal. 1

Overall, consistency lacked here. Finishin' bar was wack. Wtf, don't even use punch's like that to australians, it's PLAYED. Had 1 stand out bar, the rest was played though. 10.5/25

Smoke;
you're not hot, have you eatin dirt like chop blocks
i'm stompin on these squares, you can call it hop scotch
Meh, more pun , less hype & this woulda been better. 1.5
challenged n popped shots, now i gotta slay her
surprised you accepted, expected a Mighty Duck from a hockey player
Flow was OFF. w/p was nice & personal though (pun hit). 1st line was nah though. 2.5 (potential 3.5 wit a better 1st line)
say you wanna compare verses, here's the best description
i'm eatin Bar's, like i got a xanax prescription
Nah. Seen what u tried to do, but complexity never executed the pun. 2
i flex on writtens, you comin harder? i doubt it
you'll never win in Toronto, ask Vince Carter about it
I unno why ur hypin' this up. Not as good as u think it is. flow was edgin' OFF, but it had lil pun wit the personal. 2
and if you DO win this shit, i can see ya tricks
just call in CSI to dust the voters' dicks for Bar's fingerprints
Coulda been worded to get the .5 in. 1st line was ok too, overall nothin' special or stand out. 2 10/25

So far,
Barcotic;10.5
Smoke;10

Categories;

Punch's;[1] Bar
Multis;[.5] Bar
Flows;[1] Smoke
Personals;[1] Smoke
Consistency;[1] Bar (closeish)
Wp/Np;[.5] Bar
Complexity/Vocab;[.5] Smoke (could go either way though)


Total scores;

Barcotic;13.5
Smoke;12.5


Overall, close ish. Both had bars which coulda been worked a lil more to get more outta them. Felt like bar had the upperhand until a few played lines & poor last bar screwed up a standard verse, but smoke never capitalised on it, hype on the 1st bar brought him down a point (which is all he lost out on) & throughout his verse had no stand out puns or personals. Decent battle though.


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[Barcotic]

..........

[Wordz AhGod.]

Smoke.. RTF too you bitch ass dude before I lose my fucking marbles up in here nigga.

[therealsmoke]

Smoke.. RTF too you bitch ass dude before I lose my fucking marbles up in here nigga.

lmao

I don't have 100 posts you jackass

[Bakkie]

TRS-


you're not hot, have you eatin dirt like chop blocks
i'm stompin on these squares, you can call it hop scotch
...nah weak...
challenged n popped shots, now i gotta slay her
surprised you accepted, expected a Mighty Duck from a hockey player
not bad..
say you wanna compare verses, here's the best description
i'm eatin Bar's, like i got a xanax prescription
....not bad could of had better wording..
i flex on writtens, you comin harder? i doubt it
you'll never win in Toronto, ask Vince Carter about it
....effective...
and if you DO win this shit, i can see ya tricks
just call in CSI to dust the voters' dicks for Bar's fingerprints
...nice bar man...


Vs.


Bar-


Compare both our styles, crowds will never miss the dope,
but they'll buy nicotine patches cuz they're gettin sick of Smoke's..
....nice....
This fag'll meet his maker but he'll still be flowin after death,
when I leave him 'lost at C'.... like he didn't know the alphabet..
...sick man....
This bitch might have the Drive to win but na, he can't stop Mike,
cuz in this battle Smoke trails without the thirty year old exaust pipe..
...not bad...
You write rhymes but why dawg? you clearly rhyme soft,
the only way you'd be allRight is if I cut your whole left side off..
...sick bar....
Damn, I just burried you alive dawg, but now I wonder,
I know you're not Australian but how's the land down under??
nice finisher...

Not a bad battle but my VOTE goes to BARCOTICS...he came better most bars where sick.