Barcotic Vs Smoke

[Barcotic]

10 lines, due tomorrow by 8 PM EST, n Bartender isn't to bring his stupid ass in this battle thread, let alone vote, lol....

[Barcotic]

http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...n/untitled.png

[therealsmoke]

if you're ready we can drop right now

[therealsmoke]

*harlem shakes off the rust*

you're not hot, have you eatin dirt like chop blocks
i'm stompin on these squares, you can call it hop scotch
challenged n popped shots, now i gotta slay her
surprised you accepted, expected a Mighty Duck from a hockey player
say you wanna compare verses, here's the best description
i'm eatin Bar's, like i got a xanax prescription
i flex on writtens, you comin harder? i doubt it
you'll never win in Toronto, ask Vince Carter about it
and if you DO win this shit, i can see ya tricks
just call in CSI to dust the voters' dicks for Bar's fingerprints

[Barcotic]

Compare both our styles, crowds will never miss the dope,
but they'll buy nicotine patches cuz they're gettin sick of Smoke's..
This fag'll meet his maker but he'll still be flowin after death,
when I leave him 'lost at C'.... like he didn't know the alphabet..
This bitch might have the Drive to win but na, he can't stop Mike,
cuz in this battle Smoke trails without the thirty year old exaust pipe..
You write rhymes but why dawg? you clearly rhyme soft,
the only way you'd be allRight is if I cut your whole left side off..
Damn, I just burried you alive dawg, but now I wonder,
I know you're not Australian but how's the land down under??

[Barcotic]

Come on, can we get some good votes or what??^^

[The Lyricist 2]

you're not hot, have you eatin dirt like chop blocks
i'm stompin on these squares, you can call it hop scotch

not very good

challenged n popped shots, now i gotta slay her
surprised you accepted, expected a Mighty Duck from a hockey player

not very good

say you wanna compare verses, here's the best description
i'm eatin Bar's, like i got a xanax prescription

ok

i flex on writtens, you comin harder? i doubt it
you'll never win in Toronto, ask Vince Carter about it

pretty good

and if you DO win this shit, i can see ya tricks
just call in CSI to dust the voters' dicks for Bar's fingerprints

your best line. pretty good. unoriginal though



Compare both our styles, crowds will never miss the dope,
but they'll buy nicotine patches cuz they're gettin sick of Smoke's..

Nice

This fag'll meet his maker but he'll still be flowin after death,
when I leave him 'lost at C'.... like he didn't know the alphabet..

ok

This bitch might have the Drive to win but na, he can't stop Mike,
cuz in this battle Smoke trails without the thirty year old exaust pipe..

pretty good

You write rhymes but why dawg? you clearly rhyme soft,
the only way you'd be allRight is if I cut your whole left side off..

Nice, never heard this concept used

Damn, I just burried you alive dawg, but now I wonder,
I know you're not Australian but how's the land down under??

lol sick



Vote-Barcotic. He took this pretty easily. The flows were about even, but smokes verse was way more simplistic. Bar had the much wittier and harder hitting lines, which made him take this. But my vote doesn't count anyway, so whatever

[DramaJones]

i flex on writtens, you comin harder? i doubt it
you'll never win in Toronto, ask Vince Carter about it
Smoke this was ya hottest line, but wasnt hard enought to get you the win.


You write rhymes but why dawg? you clearly rhyme soft,
the only way you'd be allRight is if I cut your whole left side off..
This was a very hard hittin line. Really the only one in the whole ryhme. With that I think you took this one Bar. If I could vote, Id give it to Bar.

[Ghetto Balla]

haha hot, but I cant vote yet

[Barcotic]

Word, uppin for some votes that heads can actually poll..^^

[Barcotic]

..........

[The Commisioner]

and if you DO win this shit, i can see ya tricks
just call in CSI to dust the voters' dicks for Bar's fingerprints

vs

Compare both our styles, crowds will never miss the dope,
but they'll buy nicotine patches cuz they're gettin sick of Smoke's..
This bitch might have the Drive to win but na, he can't stop Mike,
cuz in this battle Smoke trails without the thirty year old exaust pipe..

some played stuff from barcotic but more than enough to win it, smoke had bad wording and only 1 non-mangled idea

smoke work on putting together harder punches

v/ bar

vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...66603&posted=1

[Carpe Diem]

you're not hot, have you eatin dirt like chop blocks
i'm stompin on these squares, you can call it hop scotch

^^ o.k

challenged n popped shots, now i gotta slay her
surprised you accepted, expected a Mighty Duck from a hockey player

^^ nah didnt like this

say you wanna compare verses, here's the best description
i'm eatin Bar's, like i got a xanax prescription

^^^ mmmmm

i flex on writtens, you comin harder? i doubt it
you'll never win in Toronto, ask Vince Carter about it

^^^ o.k

and if you DO win this shit, i can see ya tricks
just call in CSI to dust the voters' dicks for Bar's fingerprints

^^^ not a bad closer

OVERALL - not a great verse, just sort of steadily moved along without making me go 'wow' or 'nice concept', just o.k.




Compare both our styles, crowds will never miss the dope,
but they'll buy nicotine patches cuz they're gettin sick of Smoke's..

^^^ nice opener

This fag'll meet his maker but he'll still be flowin after death,
when I leave him 'lost at C'.... like he didn't know the alphabet..

^^^ liked this a lot, neva heard that concept

This bitch might have the Drive to win but na, he can't stop Mike,
cuz in this battle Smoke trails without the thirty year old exaust pipe..

^^^ mmmmmm... o.k

You write rhymes but why dawg? you clearly rhyme soft,
the only way you'd be allRight is if I cut your whole left side off..

^^^ nice, good bar

Damn, I just burried you alive dawg, but now I wonder,
I know you're not Australian but how's the land down under??

^^^ solid closer, heard this sorta thing before but o.k.


OVERALL - good verse, some really noticeable bars....comfortable victory.


VOTE - Bar

[Barcotic]

WOW, wtf is this shit.. 4 fucking votes n NO polled votes that actually count.. I appreciate everyone who actually voted n shit, but because you don't have 100 posts yet, instead of being 4-0, it's 0-0 still.. this shit is so annoying.. I fucking hate Front Lines I swear....

[Vince]

TRS-


you're not hot, have you eatin dirt like chop blocks
i'm stompin on these squares, you can call it hop scotch
Pretty funny.
challenged n popped shots, now i gotta slay her
surprised you accepted, expected a Mighty Duck from a hockey player
Funny.
say you wanna compare verses, here's the best description
i'm eatin Bar's, like i got a xanax prescription
O.k.
i flex on writtens, you comin harder? i doubt it
you'll never win in Toronto, ask Vince Carter about it
LOL...funny shyt.
and if you DO win this shit, i can see ya tricks
just call in CSI to dust the voters' dicks for Bar's fingerprints
LOL...nice closer.


Vs.


Bar-


Compare both our styles, crowds will never miss the dope,
but they'll buy nicotine patches cuz they're gettin sick of Smoke's..
LOL...nice opener.
This fag'll meet his maker but he'll still be flowin after death,
when I leave him 'lost at C'.... like he didn't know the alphabet..
Niceness...
This bitch might have the Drive to win but na, he can't stop Mike,
cuz in this battle Smoke trails without the thirty year old exaust pipe..
Dopeness.
You write rhymes but why dawg? you clearly rhyme soft,
the only way you'd be allRight is if I cut your whole left side off..
Sickness.
Damn, I just burried you alive dawg, but now I wonder,
I know you're not Australian but how's the land down under??
Dope closer....

I think Bar won it cause Smoke had alot of humor....but Bar mixed humor with complexity which was dope.