The Lyricist 2 VS Vince

[The Lyricist 2]

when it comes to the displacin vince, I won't even make him wait
cuz like a bank during the current housing crisis, I'm ready to "take your place"
Even your crew wants you out, cuz with you they're sick of "getting fucked"
so when they found out it was you battlin, they told me quickly to set it up
I mean, Obviously it was pointless for you to drop your sorry rhymes
because my verse was 'spot on', meaning your spot was already mine!

^^^those 6 lines were made because I thought I was taking vince's spot if I won. So since I can't change my verse now, voters have to keep that in mind when reading those punches. Just think of it as if it actually was true.

[Jimi]

He doesn't like Valentine's day, if so thats his decision
I told him lets celebrate originality and he said, "It's against my religion!!"
Pretty weak for an opener
I rock Nike's and deposit checks you're not even a challenge
With zero dollars in ya bank account Lyricist needs a New BalanceI'm the big ticket, own clowns till its not even fun
Structure is horrible...and nike's suck.
He couldn't handle the Truth playing Paul Pierce one-on-one
Quit with the movie shit my punches are the looniest
Wow weak...
Heater got it in-fa-red...it could be a Crip enthusiast
I'm not prejudice or biased and I won't pretend to be
I don't frown upon Jungle Fever, I despise ya homo tendencies
Best bar so far, but still not a great bar.
I'll win this in all categories there's no stopping that
But Lyricist did have a higher percentage...of body fat
Not really a hard punch here
I'm not a psychiatrist but you came across a little mental
If less is more...your I.Q. must have infinite potential
couldve been more here if you worded it better.
I go hard when it comes to battles, you're a major goof
He'll stop at nothing to win...^^^even gave us a page of proof
calling somebody "a major goof" and stuff over and over is no way good...
Mad cause he can't get it my crew...yeah he's plenty active
But he heard the 11th Commandment and said, "Why, ain't I attractive?".
Weak
Tell Bar and RC it didn't take me must to wreck him
Wasted 20 lines...I won this battle when I checked in
Use a spell check or something. and please add a closer next time you battle...


vs

Ayo...I love destroying wannabe rappers, so RB watch me muder vince
so that we can say, "he got murked by Lyricist and hasn't been heard of since"
Ive heard it before, but its decent
You think this shit is an easy win? kid you couldn't be more dumb
you make the font in your verses white..
but theres no need to, they already stick out like a sore-thumb
Alright.
when it comes to the displacin vince, I won't even make him wait
cuz like a bank during the current housing crisis, I'm ready to "take your place"
haha, made me laugh.
Even your crew wants you out, cuz with you they're sick of "getting fucked"
so when they found out it was you battlin, they told me quickly to set it up
Kind of a filler, but not too bad.
u'll regret this soon enough, acceptin this challenge was a foolish message
cuz you "spit out so much filler", you should probably sue your dentist!
Good.
I read your old battles out of respect, but sadly wasn't that impressed
so if winning this is "food for thought", I've got this mastered like a chef
Kind of awkward, couldve worded it better in my opinion
vince is secretly on my nuts, he'd start slobbering even if I made my verse soft
N' If I said "I have a few tricks up my sleeve"
......This faggot would use it as an excuse to take my shirt off
Decent
It's good you don't lie to yourself, even this fucking faker knows he's losin
He even battles under an alter ego so that he doesn't get his reputation ruined!
Not great, but okay
This bastard is mine, plus his drops only make sense half of the time
He claimed he was "wastin a verse", yet decided to spit the maximum lines!
Worst bar so far...
I mean, Obviously it was pointless for you to drop your sorry rhymes
because my verse was 'spot on', meaning your spot was already mine!
Not a great closer, but much better than vince's

Overall The Lyricist 2 came much better.

vote/ Lyricist 2

[The Lyricist 2]

1-0 uppn..hopefully for some 11th commandment votes

[The Lyricist 2]

votes?

[Vince]

upping.

[The Lyricist 2]

uppn

[The Archetype]

He doesn't like Valentine's day, if so thats his decision
I told him lets celebrate originality and he said, "It's against my religion!!"
eh...
I rock Nike's and deposit checks you're not even a challenge
With zero dollars in ya bank account Lyricist needs a New Balance
eh...
I'm the big ticket, own clowns till its not even fun
He couldn't handle the Truth playing Paul Pierce one-on-one
ok...
Quit with the movie shit my punches are the looniest
Heater got it in-fa-red...it could be a Crip enthusiast
self glory...
I'm not prejudice or biased and I won't pretend to be
I don't frown upon Jungle Fever, I despise ya homo tendencies
ok...
I'll win this in all categories there's no stopping that
But Lyricist did have a higher percentage...of body fat
eh...
I'm not a psychiatrist but you came across a little mental
If less is more...your I.Q. must have infinite potential
lol... good...
I go hard when it comes to battles, you're a major goof
He'll stop at nothing to win...^^^even gave us a page of proof
ok...
Mad cause he can't get it my crew...yeah he's plenty active
But he heard the 11th Commandment and said, "Why, ain't I attractive?".
eh...
Tell Bar and RC it didn't take me must to wreck him
Wasted 20 lines...I won this battle when I checked in
ok...

vs

Ayo...I love destroying wannabe rappers, so RB watch me muder vince
so that we can say, "he got murked by Lyricist and hasn't been heard of since"
ok...
You think this shit is an easy win? kid you couldn't be more dumb
you make the font in your verses white..
but theres no need to, they already stick out like a sore-thumb
eh...
when it comes to the displacin vince, I won't even make him wait
cuz like a bank during the current housing crisis, I'm ready to "take your place"
ok...
Even your crew wants you out, cuz with you they're sick of "getting fucked"
so when they found out it was you battlin, they told me quickly to set it up
ok...
u'll regret this soon enough, acceptin this challenge was a foolish message
cuz you "spit out so much filler", you should probably sue your dentist!
i've used shit like this before... played concept...
I read your old battles out of respect, but sadly wasn't that impressed
so if winning this is "food for thought", I've got this mastered like a chef
self glory...
vince is secretly on my nuts, he'd start slobbering even if I made my verse soft
N' If I said "I have a few tricks up my sleeve"
......This faggot would use it as an excuse to take my shirt off
lol... good...
It's good you don't lie to yourself, even this fucking faker knows he's losin
He even battles under an alter ego so that he doesn't get his reputation ruined!
ok...
This bastard is mine, plus his drops only make sense half of the time
He claimed he was "wastin a verse", yet decided to spit the maximum lines!
eh...
I mean, Obviously it was pointless for you to drop your sorry rhymes
because my verse was 'spot on', meaning your spot was already mine!
ok...

sorry Vince... i liked TL's more... lol...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...eo-390044.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-389817.html

[DramaJones]

Hmmm, both joints were tight. Neither one stood out that much more than the other. If I could vote, I would give it to L2. He came just a tad bit harder IMO.

[The Lyricist 2]

2-0 uppn

[Barcotic]

Vince
He doesn't like Valentine's day, if so thats his decision
I told him lets celebrate originality and he said, "It's against my religion!!"
Nah, pretty gay if you ask me..
I rock Nike's and deposit checks you're not even a challenge
With zero dollars in ya bank account Lyricist needs a New Balance
Nah..
I'm the big ticket, own clowns till its not even fun
He couldn't handle the Truth playing Paul Pierce one-on-one
Decent, but what's the truth?? you just said he couldn't handle somethin you didn't even say, LOL..
Quit with the movie shit my punches are the looniest
Heater got it in-fa-red...it could be a Crip enthusiast
Nah, sorry, coulda worked if his name had "red" in it..
I'm not prejudice or biased and I won't pretend to be
I don't frown upon Jungle Fever, I despise ya homo tendencies
Not feelin..
I'll win this in all categories there's no stopping that
But Lyricist did have a higher percentage...of body fat
Coulda been done WAY better but, ok..
I'm not a psychiatrist but you came across a little mental
If less is more...your I.Q. must have infinite potential
Decent..
I go hard when it comes to battles, you're a major goof
He'll stop at nothing to win...^^^even gave us a page of proof
Decent..
Mad cause he can't get it my crew...yeah he's plenty active
But he heard the 11th Commandment and said, "Why, ain't I attractive?".
Nah..
Tell Bar and RC it didn't take me must to wreck him
Wasted 20 lines...I won this battle when I checked in
Weak.. overall I've seen WAY better from you Vinny.. this was a poor showing to say the least in my opinion.. iunno whether you just didn't try at all or didn't take your time or whatever, but you only had like 2 decent bars n 1 iffy one.. other than that I wasn't feelin it man, iunno..

L
Ayo...I love destroying wannabe rappers, so RB watch me muder vince
so that we can say, "he got murked by Lyricist and hasn't been heard of since"
Nah..
You think this shit is an easy win? kid you couldn't be more dumb
you make the font in your verses white..
but theres no need to, they already stick out like a sore-thumb
Not feelin..
when it comes to the displacin vince, I won't even make him wait
cuz like a bank during the current housing crisis, I'm ready to "take your place"
Cool, I like it..
Even your crew wants you out, cuz with you they're sick of "getting fucked"
so when they found out it was you battlin, they told me quickly to set it up
I know what you meant by it.. it was decent..
u'll regret this soon enough, acceptin this challenge was a foolish message
cuz you "spit out so much filler", you should probably sue your dentist!
Decent.. woulda been 'cool' if I haven't seen concepts like this before, but still, decent..
I read your old battles out of respect, but sadly wasn't that impressed
so if winning this is "food for thought", I've got this mastered like a chef
Not a diss, more self glory shit..
vince is secretly on my nuts, he'd start slobbering even if I made my verse soft
N' If I said "I have a few tricks up my sleeve"
......This faggot would use it as an excuse to take my shirt off
LOL, funny but kinda stretched.. I don't like the 3 line style crap for a bar.. still funny tho, so decent..
It's good you don't lie to yourself, even this fucking faker knows he's losin
He even battles under an alter ego so that he doesn't get his reputation ruined!
Meh..
This bastard is mine, plus his drops only make sense half of the time
He claimed he was "wastin a verse", yet decided to spit the maximum lines!
LOL, now THAT'S funny n true..
I mean, Obviously it was pointless for you to drop your sorry rhymes
because my verse was 'spot on', meaning your spot was already mine!
Blah.. overall this was nothin specail, but it was a decent verse I guess.. couple cool lines, couple played, couple decent, couple meh, couple weak.. I'd say this was your average FL verse for sure, but you did enough to win here with less crap bars..

Punches: L
Wordplay: Blah
Personals: L
Structure: Vince
Creativity: Both
Consistency: L
Flow & Multies: Vince

\\//ote: The Lyricist 2

[III]

First guy was a joke, weak as fuck punches and his flow was sloppy
- sorry it's the truth.
Need to make a big improvment before you battle again,
hit up 'text battles' on google and get a pen and pad.


Second kid murder him with a simple/half weak verse,
Had some good punches but really if you hadn't shown you'd still deserve the win here.
Bit more practice on the site and you'll be on fire man

V/ Lyricist, other kid was shocking

[XM]

I'm not a psychiatrist but you came across a little mental
If less is more...your I.Q. must have infinite potential
I go hard when it comes to battles, you're a major goof
He'll stop at nothing to win...^^^even gave us a page of proof

vs.

vince is secretly on my nuts, he'd start slobbering even if I made my verse soft
N' If I said "I have a few tricks up my sleeve"
......This faggot would use it as an excuse to take my shirt off
when it comes to the displacin vince, I won't even make him wait
cuz like a bank during the current housing crisis, I'm ready to "take your place
This bastard is mine, plus his drops only make sense half of the time
He claimed he was "wastin a verse", yet decided to spit the maximum lines

v-TL; more consistant and slightly harder hit'n punches n personals