House Rules
due: 1hr
12 lines
Kontext.
Jayemm
House Rules
due: 1hr
12 lines
word...Innery
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
Verse me? your on thin ice, lets watch him fall skating
When i put kons Life On Hold, it aint Psychics With Call Waiting
think ur hot, as for me: Ill be DAMNED! & call me a sinners
im given you a 'Reality Check' not talkin a VH1 winners
He actually thinks he'll win, let alone stay alive
Thats a Bigger Leap Of Faith than a Catholic High Dive
Your flow lacks, his shit never makes anyone get out there seat
Unless I Pin Ya Heart to My Car.. maybe then he'll ride a beat
people dont like u, u cant handle Dis TRUCK Son.. stick to cars
only time voters says 'oOo' Before K is rating his bars (just ok)
I may not know u, but meet my friend...the guns chrome
Leave him smoking,..let kon, vent simaliar to a nuns home
ehem.
You ready B?, Ya text is weak & i Murder wit steady Speech
Cuz Jay-Emm....
.........is just a reminder of a level u'll neva reach
This kids a Peach....droppin Garbage, But shit!, thats nothin New
I juss joined Sctyso...... that still makes you the whackest in the crew
Imma smack you inna Few, Jay be dope? that juss cant be True
So i'll knock you off your High Horse......then laugh while it tramples you
J's a Damnit fruit, Sweet as a peach The type to stay on da creep
& Run da Streets.......lookin for food n a place to sleep
So face it Geek, get the fuck out da crew! Guyz! i'm willin to pay him
So Peep the fly shit!, before i swat the fuck outta Jayemm
So skate quick, cuz Kon be bout ready to break shit, King me like its checkers
& catch a wave of defeat, So i guees you can Hang 10...more losses on yha record
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
word...lets get some good votes
J
Verse me? your on thin ice, lets watch him fall skating
When i put kons Life On Hold, it aint Psychics With Call Waiting
ok opener but not hitting for me
think ur hot, as for me: Ill be DAMNED! & call me a sinners
im given you a 'Reality Check' not talkin a VH1 winners
felt a little forced, but I like it
He actually thinks he'll win, let alone stay alive
Thats a Bigger Leap Of Faith than a Catholic High Dive
funny and nice flow but been reading a lot along that theme recently
Your flow lacks, his shit never makes anyone get out there seat
Unless I Pin Ya Heart to My Car.. maybe then he'll ride a beat
LOL Best line of the battle imo
people dont like u, u cant handle Dis TRUCK Son.. stick to cars
only time voters says 'oOo' Before K is rating his bars (just ok)
unique
I may not know u, but meet my friend...the guns chrome
Leave him smoking,..let kon, vent simaliar to a nuns home
unique play on words
V
Kon
You ready B?, Ya text is weak & i Murder wit steady Speech
Cuz Jay-Emm....
.........is just a reminder of a level u'll neva reach
It's late in NY... but did you just write JM is a level you'll never reach???
This kids a Peach....droppin Garbage, But shit!, thats nothin New
I juss joined Sctyso...... that still makes you the whackest in the crew
eh
Imma smack you inna Few, Jay be dope? that juss cant be True
So i'll knock you off your High Horse......then laugh while it tramples you
ok
J's a Damnit fruit, Sweet as a peach The type to stay on da creep
& Run da Streets.......lookin for food n a place to sleep
ok multies but not feeling the hurt
So face it Geek, get the fuck out da crew! Guyz! i'm willin to pay him
So Peep the fly shit!, before i swat the fuck outta Jayemm
Again late... but you're willing to give up cash to him does not seem dissin'
So skate quick, cuz Kon be bout ready to break shit, King me like its checkers
& catch a wave of defeat, So i guees you can Hang 10...more losses on yha record
nice closer. Nice word play
I am going to hold off on voting because it's late and i want to make sure that the corona's not effeccting my reading abilities too much... however if I am not that drunk....
each had good flow and lines. J more creative Close battle but K seemed to drop 2 bars that did not hit, but hinted at a complement to J... I need to reread when I wake up...
If all holds V/J
Return the favor.
^^^thats the shit i mean wit Fl u gotta dumb everything down for you guyz....Blah to hell with it....& for future references dont vote on any of my battles if u dont get my bars...No hate
& dont drink and write...Geez
anywho uppin
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
jayemm
Verse me? your on thin ice, lets watch him fall skating
When i put kons Life On Hold, it aint Psychics With Call Waiting
uhh this was ok for an opener, i always expect the opener to grab n pull u in, this was a verge line
think ur hot, as for me: Ill be DAMNED! & call me a sinners
im given you a 'Reality Check' not talkin a VH1 winners
u flipped the vh1 line, but dawg in itself reality n vh1 is really really played
He actually thinks he'll win, let alone stay alive
Thats a Bigger Leap Of Faith than a Catholic High Dive
lol this was nice man, wasnt really funny, but original
Your flow lacks, his shit never makes anyone get out there seat
Unless I Pin Ya Heart to My Car.. maybe then he'll ride a beat
hated this line, it made me feel like u was out of ammo, n just grabbin at things
people dont like u, u cant handle Dis TRUCK Son.. stick to cars
only time voters says 'oOo' Before K is rating his bars (just ok)
illest like of ur verse, this was nice man
I may not know u, but meet my friend...the guns chrome
Leave him smoking,..let kon, vent simaliar to a nuns home
lmao this is a raw ass closer
kontext
You ready B?, Ya text is weak & i Murder wit steady Speech
Cuz Jay-Emm....
.........is just a reminder of a level u'll neva reach
lmfao thats an opener, it drew me in and i EXPECTED him tog o for the jay emm shit
This kids a Peach....droppin Garbage, But shit!, thats nothin New
I juss joined Sctyso...... that still makes you the whackest in the crew
blah, its personal, its ok, u could do much much better tho
Imma smack you inna Few, Jay be dope? that juss cant be True
So i'll knock you off your High Horse......then laugh while it tramples you
lmfao this was raw man,
J's a Damnit fruit, Sweet as a peach The type to stay on da creep
& Run da Streets.......lookin for food n a place to sleep
lmfao also funny, this was nice
So face it Geek, get the fuck out da crew! Guyz! i'm willin to pay him
So Peep the fly shit!, before i swat the fuck outta Jayemm
see ur clever with your lines, this is clever
So skate quick, cuz Kon be bout ready to break shit, King me like its checkers
& catch a wave of defeat, So i guees you can Hang 10...more losses on yha record
nice finisher,original, hittin, its nice
ok , jayemm your flow was cool, but battles isnt about flow its about punches and met4s n shit, and i think ur 'on ur way" to being nasty battle wise, i just dont think uve reached that plateu yet, kontext your verse was nice man minus the one bar cuz it sucked ass lmao but u both is nice
i didnt really know what to expect out this battle but its better then i assumed, kontext ur raw wit battling, jayemm, ur on ur way up
take it or leave it
ohhh jayemm, i think u have NICE ideas for punches, or met4's but i think u dont word em right or put em together right, i think thats what i see the problem being, but ur ideas is nice
vote: kontext easily
Jay
Verse me? your on thin ice, lets watch him fall skating
When i put kons Life On Hold, it aint Psychics With Call Waiting
Decent, a little simple tho..
think ur hot, as for me: Ill be DAMNED! & call me a sinners
im given you a 'Reality Check' not talkin a VH1 winners
Played concept..
He actually thinks he'll win, let alone stay alive
Thats a Bigger Leap Of Faith than a Catholic High Dive
Cool, I'm feelin that.. one of your better bars in any of your verses bruh.. just work on multie syly rhymes at the end instead if only rhyming "live" with "drive", feel me??
Your flow lacks, his shit never makes anyone get out there seat
Unless I Pin Ya Heart to My Car.. maybe then he'll ride a beat
Nah, forced concept..
people dont like u, u cant handle Dis TRUCK Son.. stick to cars
only time voters says 'oOo' Before K is rating his bars (just ok)
Decent, but take the vet's advice bruh.. we tell you every time.. STOP THE EXPOS!! lol..
I may not know u, but meet my friend...the guns chrome
Leave him smoking,..let kon, vent simaliar to a nuns home
Decent idea but it came out as a weak diss.. overall this was a decent verse bruh.. you had a nice bar, being the faith/sky diving shit.. that was pretty cool.. other than that you had a couple decent hits, nothing too special tho.. I like how you're no longer trying to fill your verse up with forced wordplay bruh, that made your verse step up a level.. some people just can't do wordplay and/or it takes them time n practice to get it right.. so until then, learn from people who can, n keep writing verses like this one n improving on what you CAN do right, na mean?? anyway, all in all you had 1 forced line n 1 that didn't work as a diss.. other than that, some decent shit here.. keep it up, you're improving.. work on multies/better flow tho..
Kon
You ready B?, Ya text is weak & i Murder wit steady Speech
Cuz Jay-Emm....
.........is just a reminder of a level u'll neva reach
I dunno if you saw it, but some1 JUST used this concept on him.. very similiar too bruh.. n when he used it, it stuck our to me as a nice one, but seeing this makes it lose a lil flavor, feel me??
This kids a Peach....droppin Garbage, But shit!, thats nothin New
I juss joined Sctyso...... that still makes you the whackest in the crew
LOL, kind of simple but I liked the play on words here.. decent personal..
Imma smack you inna Few, Jay be dope? that juss cant be True
So i'll knock you off your High Horse......then laugh while it tramples you
Damn you, I'm using a high horse line vs Chrit/Bartender you prick, n I already have the bar, lol.. none the less, this was pretty cool fucker, I guess great minds think alike..
J's a Damnit fruit, Sweet as a peach The type to stay on da creep
& Run da Streets.......lookin for food n a place to sleep
LOL, cool..
So face it Geek, get the fuck out da crew! Guyz! i'm willin to pay him
So Peep the fly shit!, before i swat the fuck outta Jayemm
LMAO, nice one again..
So skate quick, cuz Kon be bout ready to break shit, King me like its checkers
& catch a wave of defeat, So i guees you can Hang 10...more losses on yha record
A little more than decent finish I'd say.. overall this was a pretty good verse.. your multies at the end of your lines n at times like all through the first bar were certainly better than J's.. not that that wins battles, but it makes your shit flow better for sure.. all in all your first bar was played.. if I know you tho I'm pretty sure you didn't see it n just thought of the nameplay around the same time the other dude did, cuz I don't think you'd recycle concepts.. other than that, your verse was nice bruh.. some cool concepts, wordplay n punches in there with a touch of personals.. keep it up..
Punches: Kon
Wordplay: Kon
Personals: Kon
Structure: Tie
Creativity: Jay
Consistency: Kon
Flow & Multies: Kon
This was a cool little battle guys.. Jay, I liked some of your verse this time, lol.. you're improving, n facing guys like Kon will only make you improve faster.. Kon, in the battle, was just too much for you.. his shit was nice n clean, n came more consistent with a few better hits bruh....
\\//ote: Kontext.
Jay
Verse me? your on thin ice, lets watch him fall skating
When i put kons Life On Hold, it aint Psychics With Call Waiting
....not bad...
think ur hot, as for me: Ill be DAMNED! & call me a sinners
im given you a 'Reality Check' not talkin a VH1 winners
...not bad bit weak tho...
He actually thinks he'll win, let alone stay alive
Thats a Bigger Leap Of Faith than a Catholic High Dive
....lol good meta...
Your flow lacks, his shit never makes anyone get out there seat
Unless I Pin Ya Heart to My Car.. maybe then he'll ride a beat
...not bad man could of been wordered better...
people dont like u, u cant handle Dis TRUCK Son.. stick to cars
only time voters says 'oOo' Before K is rating his bars (just ok)
..nah...
I may not know u, but meet my friend...the guns chrome
Leave him smoking,..let kon, vent simaliar to a nuns home
nah weak.
Kon
You ready B?, Ya text is weak & i Murder wit steady Speech
Cuz Jay-Emm....
.........is just a reminder of a level u'll neva reach
...like it...
This kids a Peach....droppin Garbage, But shit!, thats nothin New
I juss joined Sctyso...... that still makes you the whackest in the crew
..lol not bad...
Imma smack you inna Few, Jay be dope? that juss cant be True
So i'll knock you off your High Horse......then laugh while it tramples you
...cool could of come harder..
J's a Damnit fruit, Sweet as a peach The type to stay on da creep
& Run da Streets.......lookin for food n a place to sleep
...nah..
So face it Geek, get the fuck out da crew! Guyz! i'm willin to pay him
So Peep the fly shit!, before i swat the fuck outta Jayemm
lol nice ..
So skate quick, cuz Kon be bout ready to break shit, King me like its checkers
& catch a wave of defeat, So i guees you can Hang 10...more losses on yha record
haha good finisher...
good battle guys was some good bars in there...
My Vote = Kon, he came better on his verse had better wording and better personals.
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All chicks ain't shit, ain't no such thing as Miss Right,
So we can never be a couple hun
Fuck love, all I got for ho's is hard dick and bubble gum. - Big L
Jayemm-
Verse me? your on thin ice, lets watch him fall skating
When i put kons Life On Hold, it aint Psychics With Call Waiting
Nice...
think ur hot, as for me: Ill be DAMNED! & call me a sinners
im given you a 'Reality Check' not talkin a VH1 winners
Dope punch.
He actually thinks he'll win, let alone stay alive
Thats a Bigger Leap Of Faith than a Catholic High Dive
Nah, homie.
Your flow lacks, his shit never makes anyone get out there seat
Unless I Pin Ya Heart to My Car.. maybe then he'll ride a beat
What?.
people dont like u, u cant handle Dis TRUCK Son.. stick to cars
only time voters says 'oOo' Before K is rating his bars (just ok)
Nice line.
I may not know u, but meet my friend...the guns chrome
Leave him smoking,..let kon, vent simaliar to a nuns home
Dope closer.
Vs.
Kontext-
You ready B?, Ya text is weak & i Murder wit steady Speech
Cuz Jay-Emm....
.........is just a reminder of a level u'll neva reach
O.K.
This kids a Peach....droppin Garbage, But shit!, thats nothin New
I juss joined Sctyso...... that still makes you the whackest in the crew
Lol....funny.
Imma smack you inna Few, Jay be dope? that juss cant be True
So i'll knock you off your High Horse......then laugh while it tramples you
Good line.
J's a Damnit fruit, Sweet as a peach The type to stay on da creep
& Run da Streets.......lookin for food n a place to sleep
Harsh punches.
So face it Geek, get the fuck out da crew! Guyz! i'm willin to pay him
So Peep the fly shit!, before i swat the fuck outta Jayemm
Nah...
So skate quick, cuz Kon be bout ready to break shit, King me like its checkers
& catch a wave of defeat, So i guees you can Hang 10...more losses on yha record
No.
V/ Kontext dropped harder in this one.
thanx for the votes guyz...uppin #2
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
3rd uppinery
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
people dont like u, u cant handle Dis TRUCK Son.. stick to cars
only time voters says 'oOo' Before K is rating his bars
I may not know u, but meet my friend...the guns chrome
Leave him smoking,..let kon, vent simaliar to a nuns home
Vs.
You ready B?, Ya text is weak & i Murder wit steady Speech
Cuz Jay-Emm....
.........is just a reminder of a level u'll neva reach
GOT DAMN DOPE
Imma smack you inna Few, Jay be dope? that juss cant be True
So i'll knock you off your High Horse......then laugh while it tramples you
So face it Geek, get the fuck out da crew! Guyz! i'm willin to pay him
So Peep the fly shit!, before i swat the fuck outta Jayemm
I thought this was really good for a FL battle props Scytso still doing our damn thang! I thought this battle was really close but Kontext had that opener that was dope as hell and stood out louder than anything in this battle so I have to give this to him. You both had great concepts and rhyming but that opener edged my decision.
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