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    Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    previously on The Superheroes..

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...es-388479.html


    and now....

    MAD MEN PRESENTS...
    THE SUPERHEROES II



    The Mastermind: Part 2
    by Silhouettes

    It was a regular day, I was getting ready my J
    As a call came heading my way, my head disarrayed
    My girl called as my world falled, "I'm getting a baby,
    you should be setting the J free", "I'll let it go, maybe"
    So I smoked my last, broke my past into smoke and ash
    Awoke my task with hope and cash, but my slope got vast
    Couldn't cope with trash, my lady was stressing me out
    played me, addressing her doubts, shady, caressing my mouth
    Took my hand on her stomach, getting me anxious
    said her angst was unimportant since she had her mans trust
    So I started Pidgeot flying in secret, the high, I would seek it
    fire techniques sits embedded as I fry this to freak it
    a liar that sneak shit just to acquire those deep hits
    turned to lions, left sheep split by iron that speed quick
    So I took X & some speed shit, 2 digits I chewed trough
    blue midgets just grew, dude, I went from nude pigeons to Mewtwo
    Flying by telekinesis, my powers took away my sanity
    Tease shit, straight devoured crooks and sprayed whole families
    Recoil damage ignored, seeing things I shouldn't discover
    advantages vanished, booms in my head, I couldn't recover



    The Prayer, Episode 3

    by Spaz Incendio
    go to ( http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...de-388397.html) for Episode 1 and the previous Mad Men collab for Episode 2

    "I need you flying, and I'll show that dying
    Is living beyond reason, sacred dimension of time
    I perceive every sign, I can steal every mind"

    Well the wish of the Prayer was showing true, he erupted from the ground in a glowing blue
    Using his strength, to such a length, as to read minds, as he thinks and speeds time
    Rewind, the time, to see lines, where we find, the humans waiting...debating
    As they enter atomic safes, they're minds on a chronic strafe, does the Prayer con their faith?
    The very name, the very presence, the very essence,
    of his "create all destroy all" mind
    the power to reverse, to see worse, and halt it, it's hard to call it, he foils all signs
    Kill his mother if he cries, revive her if he dies, is it a demented game by President Joe?
    tyranny, the fear of the, just because one man said it so, something so powerful let go
    The cult that worshiped, was on U.S. warships, they diverted course, the sight of worse
    Was the Prayer wrecking the ship on T.V., the press all reacted feebly, as they see he
    The mind's he read, starting saying "It's mine instead", as they ripped control, from the sole
    It was coordinated, by a thought subordinated, kill our hero, the reaction of fear knows
    As a government spy opens documents, President Joe never thought to sent

    "You can kill the Prayer"

    And the thought put the Prayer on the ground and he was on his knees in Time Central
    President Joe never thought it cause he believed the invention, had good intentions, lying mental
    Just to save his best production, he risked destruction, but now everyone became a sayer
    "We wish death to our saviour, by we the slayers," and that was repeated by all kings and mayors
    Until they a saw a spark and the desolation of his blue flare
    And they put their hands together for the death of the Prayer


    The Villain's Death
    by Phazed*

    ...Then a bullet touched her brain, but she lived on
    A Strong-Arm ideal fittin on wrists like Live-Strong
    With winds drawn, voices supressed, a weapon attachment
    An ideal was born and grown until it detached men
    It snatched skin, something similar to snake acid
    From the peaks in Kenya to the depths of Lake Placid
    With cake mastered, her objective was successful
    Materialism led her to the stream of a cess pool
    A downfall soon to arise listen to tunes of the wise
    Look up! Reminders of justice in the moon and the skies
    But the shrewd darkness enveloped Crime's Proud Lover
    Just an endowed mother blurred out that night by cloud cover
    Government lit a torch'n then just let her scorch'er skin
    And it's finally come full-circle- now the Meta morph is his! (Metamorphosis)
    A change of pace derranged her face, transferring the burden
    From villainess to villainous- had lands luring in murder
    Curing the server of sickness put a cease to existence
    Structure snapped 'n mouths dropped revealing pieces of chin splints
    Jawbreakers couldn't sweeten this situation, a true hero was lost
    Collapsing society into oblivion to build new- zero of cost


    White Lightening II
    by The Soul

    *And suddenly our hero stopped to pray, because from blocks away she heard our villainous monster say...*

    Yeah you thought you had me bitch, had my riches earned
    Thought you had burned all my bridges, while my bridges burned
    Thought I’d inhaled my last Christmas, while my missus yearned
    Amid concerns, her husband was a listless worm
    My kids would squirm too – unaware of my alter ego
    That was all but feeble, dormant in people, squanderin needles.
    “Will Powers” is the name, clad all in black lycra
    That can split through the white knight in dark times to white ta
    Be pure. Be sure, that ya heroine’s not so heroic
    She’ll take you away to a better place for the moment.
    Potent. Potent as hell. Hells where the line ends.
    No train. Just cloaked pain that defines men, a fine trend.
    And she gave you bags of crystals, and the ice she was offerin
    Will give you the cold, that’ll lead you right to the Coughin’
    And she’ll have pills to cure THAT – so they feel hyped in the mornin’
    Ready for another Pro session with the Pipes they affordin.

    All i can do is...

    take her sharp weapons, replace ‘em with blunts
    ‘Cause I’m just a man...how can I be in a million places at once?

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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    pfft...my lines would be the longest and not fit into the space provided (sigh)

    but I like where it is...

    anyway..links coming soon...feed and part one is in the link above the boldfaced title...

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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    good shit

    i really like how all of u continued the stories established in ur previous verses

    before i leave proper feed i need to read this n the previous drops again

    but i promise it will come soon

    very nicely done tho

    thats all for now

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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    Quote Originally Posted by Spaz Incendio View Post
    pfft...my lines would be the longest and not fit into the space provided (sigh)

    but I like where it is...

    never satisfied

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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    wooord, uppin. (and spaz:O two links:O)
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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    oh lol..the two links...fuck....after I eat...don't trip mods, they're coming.

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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    i didnt think this was as good as the last installment

    mastermind.. verse was technically sound, content was good also.. i reaaaallly didnt like this part though

    My girl called as my world falled, "I'm getting a baby,
    you should be setting the J free", "I'll let it go, maybe"

    shouldn't force multi's so much.. or at least spend some extra time to see if you can word it better

    the prayer.. honestly i didnt like yours too much.. lines were too stretched.. content was pretty nice though

    the villain.. shit was decent..

    A change of pace derranged her face, transferring the burden
    From villainess to villainous- had lands luring in murder

    i liked that, except the lands lurin in murder part.. didnt really get it.. prolly one of those "fuck it, its a multi" things

    and the white lightening.. you and the mastermind had the best verses on this, you had some pretty good shit

    And she gave you bags of crystals, and the ice she was offerin
    Will give you the cold, that’ll lead you right to the Coughin’
    And she’ll have pills to cure THAT – so they feel hyped in the mornin’
    Ready for another Pro session with the Pipes they affordin.

    that was tight..

    anyways

    spaz, since youre shits about to get closed down, maybe you should rate this

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-389544.html

    thanks

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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    lol @ me ducking spaz's drops.

    any ways, spaz..
    you're always doing your musical pieces.
    but this whole collab was executred nicely, like the last 1

    koko, you had nice flow as i'd usually expect from your drops..
    you always bring nice content.

    spaz.. ur flow is to long.. seriously shorten the bars a bit.. lol
    but ur content wasn't half bad.



    phazed, that live strong bracelet was a nice line
    you took a bit of a different pov in ur verse.. it was refreshing after the first 2.

    soul, u did a nice job as usual
    multi's were on point..

    nothing totally stood out, but it was worth the long read..
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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    it was a pretty good drop.......

    I've never read anything from you guy before so I guess I will look out for you more......

    pretty decent collab........you all meshed well and no1 was really left behind.........

    all flowed aight........Phazed had nice multis thrown in there as did Soul.......

    overall a nice collab......keep writing and stay up..........I will look for more of your drops....
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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    Thanks for the feed... lookin for some more

    Leave links I will return the feed
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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    *leaves link*

    Quote Originally Posted by therealsmoke View Post
    spaz, since youre shits about to get closed down, maybe you should rate this

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-389544.html

    thanks

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    Oh, I didn't see it smoke... I'll feed that ASAP
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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    Nice ass collab. Pretty consistent equally which is good too see. Not 1 of those piece's wer i'd rather read Phazed over The Soul (just examples). A long read, but it was a nice topic which I haven't seen done before & it was executed well. Good drop fellas.

    Linkage; http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ce-389918.html

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    Re: Mad Men: The Superheroes II

    thanks for feed everyone
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