Kristian. .vs gimmecookie

[Civilized Rebel]

10.
Due in no more than 45 minutes

[gimmecookie]

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[Civilized Rebel]

Son, i see how you frontin the cake' dog, you fake as hell
Give you a cookie? Tha fuck u think this is nigga a bake sale?
I get angry and pray to God to keep me patient, & heal my hurten forgotten soul,
You're soft enough to bake cookies & put cinnamon with swirls of frosting on rolls
You'll run in last, then leave first. same fashion when I'm in a trial for a beatin',
I'll feed you straight spice, and you won't even spit hot, fiery, OR seasoned..
And you're not smart at all. Jokes got you think you're dope at rappin' son?
if I got 2 read slow 2 understand ur verse its 'cuz ”Time flies when you havin' fun“
And I aint busting your dad, wife, cousin or ya younglings,
But your writing train is so wack-on-wheels it needs an auto replacement of Nothing

[gimmecookie]

this lame a same shit like other rap-twins, no differences between
then its so weird that some has given this cat votes to win
man you are back, you have raised up, but who cares?
skillz aint raised up, your lyrics still slides downstairs
so ya beating me in this battle? it has never been heard of
only way you could kill me is if you had my flow & rhymes could murda
your best competition's this warmup battle, or you wanna sign your rap?
they only way you'd make a song is if you highjacked tracks
after that i gotta say you have a half-bad verse
but wait a minute while im readin other half, shit, its becomin worse

[gimmecookie]

lets get some votes :|

[Civilized Rebel]

^lol wow that was weak dog. I thought you were someone else, i figured this would be an ok battle.....but....anyways uppin. will rtf

[..Compa..]

gimmecookie


this lame a same shit like other rap-twins, no differences between
then its so weird that some has given this cat votes to win
..NO this was not even a punch lol weak opener 0/5..

man you are back, you have raised up, but who cares?
skillz aint raised up, your lyrics still slides downstairs
..not bad..

so ya beating me in this battle? it has never been heard of
only way you could kill me is if you had my flow & rhymes could murda
..nope..

your best competition's this warmup battle, or you wanna sign your rap?
they only way you'd make a song is if you highjacked tracks
..so-so..

after that i gotta say you have a half-bad verse
but wait a minute while im readin other half, shit, its becomin worse
..ok best bar in your whole verse though 1.6/5 ender..



Kristian.


Son, i see how you frontin the cake' dog, you fake as hell
Give you a cookie? Tha fuck u think this is nigga a bake sale?
..lol good personal 2.6/5 opener..

I get angry and pray to God to keep me patient, & heal my hurten forgotten soul,
You're soft enough to bake cookies & put cinnamon with swirls of frosting on rolls
..ok..

You'll run in last, then leave first. same fashion when I'm in a trial for a beatin',
I'll feed you straight spice, and you won't even spit hot, fiery, OR seasoned..
..bit played at tha end but you made it work..

And you're not smart at all. Jokes got you think you're dope at rappin' son?
if I got 2 read slow 2 understand ur verse its 'cuz ”Time flies when you havin' fun“
..decent..

And I aint busting your dad, wife, cousin or ya younglings,
But your writing train is so wack-on-wheels it needs an auto replacement of Nothing
..better ender tha cookie 1.9/5..


overall vote- KRIS had a constant verse throughout, cookie's first bar was just tha start of a choppy verse only 2 decent bars from cook, while kris had 4 that was good and better



RTF

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[Vince]

Kristian-


Son, i see how you frontin the cake' dog, you fake as hell
Give you a cookie? Tha fuck u think this is nigga a bake sale?
Funny shyt.
I get angry and pray to God to keep me patient, & heal my hurten forgotten soul,
You're soft enough to bake cookies & put cinnamon with swirls of frosting on rolls
Funny.
You'll run in last, then leave first. same fashion when I'm in a trial for a beatin',
I'll feed you straight spice, and you won't even spit hot, fiery, OR seasoned..
Creative lines.
And you're not smart at all. Jokes got you think you're dope at rappin' son?
if I got 2 read slow 2 understand ur verse its 'cuz ”Time flies when you havin' fun“
Not really a diss is it?.
And I aint busting your dad, wife, cousin or ya younglings,
But your writing train is so wack-on-wheels it needs an auto replacement of Nothing
What?.


Vs.


GC-



this lame a same shit like other rap-twins, no differences between
then its so weird that some has given this cat votes to win
Funny.
man you are back, you have raised up, but who cares?
skillz aint raised up, your lyrics still slides downstairs
O.K.
so ya beating me in this battle? it has never been heard of
only way you could kill me is if you had my flow & rhymes could murda
Nah...
your best competition's this warmup battle, or you wanna sign your rap?
they only way you'd make a song is if you highjacked tracks
what?.
after that i gotta say you have a half-bad verse
but wait a minute while im readin other half, shit, its becomin worse
No.

V/ Kristian had more creative shyt and outnumbered gimme in punches.

[Civilized Rebel]

^uppin. thanks for the votes, will rtf now.

[gimmecookie]

thanks fo votes

2kristian i didnt go seriuosy for dat, just kinda freestyle, got a lil bit of time

[Civilized Rebel]

uppin.

[Civilized Rebel]

DAMN! uppin 4 on this shit. please vote, will rtf