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Dan cliff? Nigga, you got man tits. Or are those just implanted?
Cuz the way you keep puffin out ya chest, i think i'm misunderstandin it
Bitch, I'll paint a clue! throw it high in the air and yes I'll aim at U,
I aint gotta be serious.. you're just the dumbest fucker alive who AINT a mute
Dan Cliff people hate your shit, so before you think you've POSSIBLY aced scorin',
..I heard you came in this battle to wreck, so I made it the safest place for it.
So I suggest you face the danger, meaning next time I toss dude the pitch,
It'll be just really hard to find you Stranger.. When everyone knows you a bitch.
This broad is boring, in broad form, All I see is pussy, when the Dom be back?
I'd prolly be too tired to read your verse dan even if I was an insomniac...
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Dude where you @? Its been longer then an hour.
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srry man i had a couple chops to make.
L.M. you got no Lyrical Meaning, only a Lazy Mind/
I know you Like Men, no mayb’s , so now your Ladies Mine/
You something like a baby nine, getting your ass cocked/
Nobodies popping gats! but you still taking back shots/
Makin gay porns, been performin in sex scenes/
Im a fuckin nightmare, you aint shit but a wet dream/
I stay getting greens, while your parked at the red lights/
Your rap career stuck right here on this web site/
U stay striking out, cuz my rhymes is like fast balls/
You rushin through your bars like u heard it was last call/
uppin this. i will return the favor with honest vote. Thanks!
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Votes???
LM.-
Dan cliff? Nigga, you got man tits. Or are those just implanted?
Cuz the way you keep puffin out ya chest, i think i'm misunderstandin it
Dope opener.
Bitch, I'll paint a clue! throw it high in the air and yes I'll aim at U,
I aint gotta be serious.. you're just the dumbest fucker alive who AINT a mute
Nice one.
Dan Cliff people hate your shit, so before you think you've POSSIBLY aced scorin',
..I heard you came in this battle to wreck, so I made it the safest place for it.
O.K.
So I suggest you face the danger, meaning next time I toss dude the pitch,
It'll be just really hard to find you Stranger.. When everyone knows you a bitch.
No.
This broad is boring, in broad form, All I see is pussy, when the Dom be back?
I'd prolly be too tired to read your verse dan even if I was an insomniac...
Played concept.
Vs.
Dan Cliff-
L.M. you got no Lyrical Meaning, only a Lazy Mind/
I know you Like Men, no mayb’s , so now your Ladies Mine/
Dope opener...alliteration.
You something like a baby nine, getting your ass cocked/
Nobodies popping gats! but you still taking back shots/
Good punch.
Makin gay porns, been performin in sex scenes/
Im a fuckin nightmare, you aint shit but a wet dream/
Funny line.
I stay getting greens, while your parked at the red lights/
Your rap career stuck right here on this web site/
Harsh shyt.
U stay striking out, cuz my rhymes is like fast balls/
You rushin through your bars like u heard it was last call/
Nice closer.
This was a god battle but my vote goes to Cliff for being harsher....LM might've been more creative slightly.
LM
Dan cliff? Nigga, you got man tits. Or are those just implanted?
Cuz the way you keep puffin out ya chest, i think i'm misunderstandin it
eh
Bitch, I'll paint a clue! throw it high in the air and yes I'll aim at U,
I aint gotta be serious.. you're just the dumbest fucker alive who AINT a mute
True but wack
Dan Cliff people hate your shit, so before you think you've POSSIBLY aced scorin',
..I heard you came in this battle to wreck, so I made it the safest place for it.
OK
So I suggest you face the danger, meaning next time I toss dude the pitch,
It'll be just really hard to find you Stranger.. When everyone knows you a bitch.
nah
This broad is boring, in broad form, All I see is pussy, when the Dom be back?
I'd prolly be too tired to read your verse dan even if I was an insomniac...
no
LM
L.M. you got no Lyrical Meaning, only a Lazy Mind/
I know you Like Men, no mayb’s , so now your Ladies Mine/
Nice name play liked the bar
You something like a baby nine, getting your ass cocked/
Nobodies popping gats! but you still taking back shots/
ok
Makin gay porns, been performin in sex scenes/
Im a fuckin nightmare, you aint shit but a wet dream/
played
I stay getting greens, while your parked at the red lights/
Your rap career stuck right here on this web site/
I think you're being generous giving him a career in rap
U stay striking out, cuz my rhymes is like fast balls/
You rushin through your bars like u heard it was last call/
I liked the concept, and word play, but it didn't hit for me...
Cliff had better everything but didn't drop in time.
Votes for LM because of DQ.
are you guys kidding me, wow?
fl' has definately gone downhill, if you think Dans verse was better
*takes mentil note to never battle in fl again*
up 2.
Last edited by Civilized Rebel; January 28th, 2009 at 06:03 PM
whos verse?
LM
Dan cliff? Nigga, you got man tits. Or are those just implanted?
Cuz the way you keep puffin out ya chest, i think i'm misunderstandin it
Decent idea, executed poorly.. good set up tho..
Bitch, I'll paint a clue! throw it high in the air and yes I'll aim at U,
I aint gotta be serious.. you're just the dumbest fucker alive who AINT a mute
Nah..
Dan Cliff people hate your shit, so before you think you've POSSIBLY aced scorin',
..I heard you came in this battle to wreck, so I made it the safest place for it.
Decent concept, done OK, coulda been better..
So I suggest you face the danger, meaning next time I toss dude the pitch,
It'll be just really hard to find you Stranger.. When everyone knows you a bitch.
LOL, I'm guessin this was the best bar of the battle..
This broad is boring, in broad form, All I see is pussy, when the Dom be back?
I'd prolly be too tired to read your verse dan even if I was an insomniac...
Played..
Dan
L.M. you got no Lyrical Meaning, only a Lazy Mind/
I know you Like Men, no mayb’s , so now your Ladies Mine/
Wtf, no..
You something like a baby nine, getting your ass cocked/
Nobodies popping gats! but you still taking back shots/
Played as fuck..
Makin gay porns, been performin in sex scenes/
Im a fuckin nightmare, you aint shit but a wet dream/
Wtf, that's horrible.. you just called your opponent a wet dream.. AND DIDN'T EVEN SAY "NO HOMO", lmfao..
I stay getting greens, while your parked at the red lights/
Your rap career stuck right here on this web site/
Weak..
U stay striking out, cuz my rhymes is like fast balls/
You rushin through your bars like u heard it was last call/
Decent.. but sayin he's rushin through bars isn't really a hard diss..
Flow: Tie
Punches: LM
Wordplay: Blah
Personals: Blah
Structure: LM
Creativity: LM
Consistency: LM
\\//ote: .LM.
Dan Cliff
L.M. you got no Lyrical Meaning, only a Lazy Mind/
I know you Like Men, no mayb’s , so now your Ladies Mine/
..could've been much hard not a good opener 1/5..
You something like a baby nine, getting your ass cocked/
Nobodies popping gats! but you still taking back shots/
..ok..
Makin gay porns, been performin in sex scenes/
Im a fuckin nightmare, you aint shit but a wet dream/
..could've worded this shit better yo, not feelin this bar..
I stay getting greens, while your parked at the red lights/
Your rap career stuck right here on this web site/
..lol now that's decent..
U stay striking out, cuz my rhymes is like fast balls/
You rushin through your bars like u heard it was last call/
..good ender 3/5..
.LM.
Dan cliff? Nigga, you got man tits. Or are those just implanted?
Cuz the way you keep puffin out ya chest, i think i'm misunderstandin it
..lol nice bein creative 3/5 opener..
Bitch, I'll paint a clue! throw it high in the air and yes I'll aim at U,
I aint gotta be serious.. you're just the dumbest fucker alive who AINT a mute
..forced multies homie kinda've weaken tha punch..
Dan Cliff people hate your shit, so before you think you've POSSIBLY aced scorin',
..I heard you came in this battle to wreck, so I made it the safest place for it.
..decent..
So I suggest you face the danger, meaning next time I toss dude the pitch,
It'll be just really hard to find you Stranger.. When everyone knows you a bitch.
..nice punch..
This broad is boring, in broad form, All I see is pussy, when the Dom be back?
I'd prolly be too tired to read your verse dan even if I was an insomniac...
..this ender could've been worded better 2/5..
intro/outro- LM
flow- DC
multies-DC but bit forced from both at some bars
metas- DC
personals- n/a
creative- LM
punches- LM
overall vote- LM came constant with punches in his verse more then dan, dan i seen better from you, but you had a couple bar's that wasnt as hard hitting, ok battle..
uppin.
actually... DC didn't even check in yet... so he wasn't really late... LM shouldn't have dropped til he did... but anyway...Originally Posted by Lasix
Dan cliff? Nigga, you got man tits. Or are those just implanted?
Cuz the way you keep puffin out ya chest, i think i'm misunderstandin it
decent...
Bitch, I'll paint a clue! throw it high in the air and yes I'll aim at U,
I aint gotta be serious.. you're just the dumbest fucker alive who AINT a mute
weak...
Dan Cliff people hate your shit, so before you think you've POSSIBLY aced scorin',
..I heard you came in this battle to wreck, so I made it the safest place for it.
eh...
So I suggest you face the danger, meaning next time I toss dude the pitch,
It'll be just really hard to find you Stranger.. When everyone knows you a bitch.
bad set up... decent punch...
This broad is boring, in broad form, All I see is pussy, when the Dom be back?
I'd prolly be too tired to read your verse dan even if I was an insomniac...
eh...
vs
L.M. you got no Lyrical Meaning, only a Lazy Mind/
I know you Like Men, no mayb’s , so now your Ladies Mine/
nice alliteration... weakish punch...
You something like a baby nine, getting your ass cocked/
Nobodies popping gats! but you still taking back shots/
eh...
Makin gay porns, been performin in sex scenes/
Im a fuckin nightmare, you aint shit but a wet dream/
weak...
I stay getting greens, while your parked at the red lights/
Your rap career stuck right here on this web site/
good...
U stay striking out, cuz my rhymes is like fast balls/
You rushin through your bars like u heard it was last call/
eh...
nothing too great... nothing to bad... a closer battle than i thought it would be... but i give it to LM by one better bar...
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