16 lines
due by midnight monday night eastern
Consider this my check.
16 lines
due by midnight monday night eastern
Consider this my check.
I'm about to drop, and I see you still didn't even check. I'm not wasting my time on another no-show.
Been up for 24 hrs, going to bed.
If you drop I'll drop tomorrow (tuesday).
srry, i didnt know what u meant by check... so here i am
srry for the wait, i had some bizness to deal with.
anyway, im writin this to: PAPER TOUCHIN' by: Red Cafe
yo,
U a POEM type faggot, worst fear is an OPEN MIC. /
Tryna challenge me in FRONT LINES, LOL! U jokin right!/
How is it you cant rap, commin from the home of hip hop? /
You claimin’ New York! But assholes love the shit talk! /
Dan Cliff the slip knot, im twisted like gang signs/
U get lynched, like Vince, be expectin some hang time/ (vince carter)
FRONTIN like u bang nines, lie! n it BACK fires/
I hope you have a GOOD YEAR, rollin on flat tires/
Youll never get ahead, rap carrers on a treadmill/
You jog your memory, n run your mouth till your dead, still! /
I symbolize the RED PILL,… spittin at lasix/
You tryna dodge my bullets, you aint fit for the matrix/
Ride dicks on some gay shit, u flirtin with hoes? /
Last time u was undercover, u was workin with po’s/
Saw your number on a wall, in a bathroom stall/
Said you suck a good dick, now im givin u a call/
Originally Posted by Dan Cliff
I read ya first battle, man you are the worst
Your opponent was a no show and you still got the loss.
You wanted to drop 16 lines. How long to post your score?
All you managed was to drop a check and ya had 24.
Get some common sense, you really had no inclination
to read the post for the battle – I fucking hate retardation.
Not trying to attack ya character or embarrass ya
Just stating a fact, you the stupidest kid in all America.
This was brought on all by ya self unprovoked.
You got less moves than a quadrapalegic who stroked.
Style's lacking more than brains in this kid.
The only thing this dick ever spits is ejaculate.
That was ill the way you kill - for challenged, let me rephrase
The only thing your stupid ass is good for spreading AIDS.
Don’t brag about some made up gangsta shit.
Do us all a favor and jump off a DAmN CLIFF.
i aint from America lol.
Uuppppppiiiiinnnnnn!
I call you a dumb, fag with AIDS. And you correct me for stating your location in America. YOU ARE REALLY THAT STUPID!
yeah... those kind of rhymes are meant to be said in a battle... but the POINT IS! im NOT FROM AMERICA! so if u think im THAT DUMB! then i guess that makes u 'Ride dicks on some gay shit' and 'suck a good dick' too, cuz i dont see u defending yourself against those FUCK FACE!
Uuupppppiiiiinnnn!!!
damn cant a britha get some votes?
come on yall, where the votes at?
I read ya first battle, man you are the worst
Your opponent was a no show and you still got the loss.
didnt really rhyme, funny though
You wanted to drop 16 lines. How long to post your score?
All you managed was to drop a check and ya had 24.
-lol,ok
Get some common sense, you really had no inclination
to read the post for the battle – I fucking hate retardation.
lol, ok personal
Not trying to attack ya character or embarrass ya
Just stating a fact, you the stupidest kid in all America.
-wack
This was brought on all by ya self unprovoked.
You got less moves than a quadrapalegic who stroked.
-meh
Style's lacking more than brains in this kid.
The only thing this dick ever spits is ejaculate.
no
That was ill the way you kill - for challenged, let me rephrase
The only thing your stupid ass is good for spreading AIDS.
lol,ok
Don’t brag about some made up gangsta shit.
Do us all a favor and jump off a DAmN CLIFF.
nice personal
vs
yo,
U a POEM type faggot, worst fear is an OPEN MIC. /
Tryna challenge me in FRONT LINES, LOL! U jokin right!/
-no,no
How is it you cant rap, commin from the home of hip hop? /
You claimin’ New York! But assholes love the shit talk! /
-...nah
Dan Cliff the slip knot, im twisted like gang signs/
U get lynched, like Vince, be expectin some hang time/ (vince carter)
-lol,nice
FRONTIN like u bang nines, lie! n it BACK fires/
I hope you have a GOOD YEAR, rollin on flat tires/
-no
Youll never get ahead, rap carrers on a treadmill/
You jog your memory, n run your mouth till your dead, still! /
-lol,ok
I symbolize the RED PILL,… spittin at lasix/
You tryna dodge my bullets, you aint fit for the matrix/
-meh
Ride dicks on some gay shit, u flirtin with hoes? /
Last time u was undercover, u was workin with po’s/
-no
Saw your number on a wall, in a bathroom stall/
Said you suck a good dick, now im givin u a call/
-no...and gay as hell
v/ Lasix. Dan u had sum good lines but Lasix came harder wit personals and worded his shit better
RTF?....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...er-388758.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...13-388752.html
Cliff could u hit this up...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ig-388702.html
upppiiinnn.
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