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    Standin still alone for some reason still thinking of you
    Minds full of many memories, when I知 blinkin their true
    She unlocked, unlatched my heart, playin the keys like Ray Charles
    All those emotions she played with, a gift, she値l pay for those
    We start in the end then again its just as much my fault
    For trusting bitches, McEnroe on the line yellin, bunch of thoughts
    Seein stright through the lies by the truth hidden in your eyes
    Same way man saw the sun solvin the riddle of the rise
    Bid then on the tides, how they shift, a gift, automatic
    Dj turned the tables, for her it became problematic

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    Re: new...tryin to get some feed back

    not bad at all for a first post, keep em coming

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    Re: new...tryin to get some feed back

    simple concepts... easy rhyming

    come up with a topic, then write about it..

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    but you need to get 2 links of feed back b4 this gets closed.
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