pageflow vs. Dan Cliff

[pageflow]

no biting or recycling tray o KO or first to 5 votes

whatever else rule you want.

[Dan Cliff]

BEAT: 'Discipline' by Jadakiss

You’re the type to get raped n pillaged/
Then decapitated for bein late tryn to escape the village/
Im a clip that gets clapped, u a bitch that gets slapped/
Irritatin like an itch, so u quick to get scratched/
By this stage, you really should be actin ya age bro/
Been on for how long? u FLOWed less than a PAGE yo/
N i dont mean to hurt ya feelings/
But your talk is cheap, thoughts is weak n aint worth revealing/
Ima hurricane.. brainstorm commin together/
I be writing lightning n thunder, your just under the weather/
When im rhyming, I shine homes, u aint reached the surface/
Im a diamond you rine stone, I defeat ya purpose!/

[Dan Cliff]

yo better hurry, due dates today.

[pageflow]

My bad, I was helping my old man translate something.

Youre a fool at the party, like those who overdrink egg-nogg
Your bubblegum ‘clifford’, they should call you ‘big red, dawg’
I’ve beaten g.o.a..t’s, it’s a magnus opus when I spit deep quotes
While you get the dumbed down version when you read ‘cliffs’ notes’
It’s nothing to defeat weak foes, I hurt feeling but don’t get soft bitch
He gets set off quick, must be suicidal the way you ‘fell off, cliff’
This vet’s lost it, its rape how I deflower this bitch hard
I got the power to reach far, cuz I devouring ‘cliff’s bars’


clifford the big red dog is a cartoon character by the way evertyhing else is self explanatory, peace

[Dan Cliff]

uppin

[Dan Cliff]

???

[Dan Cliff]

YOOO...where the votes at?????

[C.A.M]

best bar (in my opinion):
Ima hurricane.. brainstorm commin together/
I be writing lightning n thunder, your just under the weather/
cliff youre verse was sloppy, you had a lot of filler and even though you had the best bar you weren't consistent.

pageflow's verse was more consistent and contained more punches directly aimed at his opponent

v/ page for having the overall better battle verse

please rtf:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-388166.html
or
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-388530.html

[Dan Cliff]

yeah, about the spaces... if u HEAR my flow, then u would agree that its was well written, and about the punches, well, i think they were TUFFF!

[Vince]

Dan Cliff-


You’re the type to get raped n pillaged/
Then decapitated for bein late tryn to escape the village/
No.
Im a clip that gets clapped, u a bitch that gets slapped/
Irritatin like an itch, so u quick to get scratched/
O.K.
By this stage, you really should be actin ya age bro/
Been on for how long? u FLOWed less than a PAGE yo/
Haha...funny.
N i dont mean to hurt ya feelings/
But your talk is cheap, thoughts is weak n aint worth revealing/
O.K.
Ima hurricane.. brainstorm commin together/
I be writing lightning n thunder, your just under the weather/
Alright.
When im rhyming, I shine homes, u aint reached the surface/
Im a diamond you rine stone, I defeat ya purpose!/
O.K.

Vs.

Pageflow-


Youre a fool at the party, like those who overdrink egg-nogg
Your bubblegum ‘clifford’, they should call you ‘big red, dawg’
Haha...nice.
I’ve beaten g.o.a..t’s, it’s a magnus opus when I spit deep quotes
While you get the dumbed down version when you read ‘cliffs’ notes’
O.K.
It’s nothing to defeat weak foes, I hurt feeling but don’t get soft bitch
He gets set off quick, must be suicidal the way you ‘fell off, cliff’
Funny punch.
This vet’s lost it, its rape how I deflower this bitch hard
I got the power to reach far, cuz I devouring ‘cliff’s bars’
O.K. closer.

V/ Cliff cause he tried to be more creative and consistent...Page had too many Cliff punches.

[Dan Cliff]

Uppppiiiinnnnn!!!

[..Compa..]

close battle actully

Dan Cliff

You’re the type to get raped n pillaged/
Then decapitated for bein late tryn to escape the village/
..ok opener 2/5..

Im a clip that gets clapped, u a bitch that gets slapped/
Irritatin like an itch, so u quick to get scratched/
..ok u got meta on this not bad..

By this stage, you really should be actin ya age bro/
Been on for how long? u FLOWed less than a PAGE yo/
..lol alright..

N i dont mean to hurt ya feelings/
But your talk is cheap, thoughts is weak n aint worth revealing/
..so-so could've been better..

Ima hurricane.. brainstorm commin together/
I be writing lightning n thunder, your just under the weather/
..not bad creative punch..

When im rhyming, I shine homes, u aint reached the surface/
Im a diamond you rine stone, I defeat ya purpose!/
..so-so ender could've tried a personal here 1/5..


pageflow

Youre a fool at the party, like those who overdrink egg-nogg
Your bubblegum ‘clifford’, they should call you ‘big red, dawg’
..damn could've been better personal/nameplay not a good opener 1/5..

I’ve beaten g.o.a..t’s, it’s a magnus opus when I spit deep quotes
While you get the dumbed down version when you read ‘cliffs’ notes’
..ok..

It’s nothing to defeat weak foes, I hurt feeling but don’t get soft bitch
He gets set off quick, must be suicidal the way you ‘fell off, cliff’
..lol ok nameplay..

This vet’s lost it, its rape how I deflower this bitch hard
I got the power to reach far, cuz I devouring ‘cliff’s bars’
..this bar seem'd mad forced with tha nameplay mayne 2/5 ender..


intro/outro- TIE

punches- Dan

flow- page

personals- page

word/nameplay- page

creative- Dan

metas- Dan

mulities- page but forced

enjoyed- Dan

overall vote- D-CLIFF had a creative verse with his punches, yo page really came personal but forced it with all tha nameplay and mulities mayne, liked page's flow but dan still take's this, decent battle in a way

[Lasix]

DC

You’re the type to get raped n pillaged/
Then decapitated for bein late tryn to escape the village/
Eh

Im a clip that gets clapped, u a bitch that gets slapped/
Irritatin like an itch, so u quick to get scratched/
Good flow,

By this stage, you really should be actin ya age bro/
Been on for how long? u FLOWed less than a PAGE yo/
OK

N i dont mean to hurt ya feelings/
But your talk is cheap, thoughts is weak n aint worth revealing/
didn't like that one

Ima hurricane.. brainstorm commin together/
I be writing lightning n thunder, your just under the weather/
good

When im rhyming, I shine homes, u aint reached the surface/
Im a diamond you rine stone, I defeat ya purpose!/
An earth science refrence dissing on RB .... aweful idea for a finish. No offense.


pageflow

Youre a fool at the party, like those who overdrink egg-nogg
Your bubblegum ‘clifford’, they should call you ‘big red, dawg’
No

I’ve beaten g.o.a..t’s, it’s a magnus opus when I spit deep quotes
While you get the dumbed down version when you read ‘cliffs’ notes’
OK

It’s nothing to defeat weak foes, I hurt feeling but don’t get soft bitch
He gets set off quick, must be suicidal the way you ‘fell off, cliff’
OK

This vet’s lost it, its rape how I deflower this bitch hard
I got the power to reach far, cuz I devouring ‘cliff’s bars’
Too much cliff... didn't like the ending

I liked the creativity in pages cliff refrences, but there was nothing more than that and ok flow.

Overall I liked Cliff's more. Nothing was overwelmingly great, but it was good all around and didn't seem forced.

V/Cliff

[pageflow]

thanks for voting,

I do like personals, and since were both new I really had nothing but nameflips.

I thought yall would like the "cliff notes" line better though. that was my favorite haha.

peace

[Dan Cliff]

thanks alot for the votes... criticism is the best way to help out for future battles, keep your eyes peeled