Life

[TopCityHeat27]

I wake up and PRAY FOR THIS BLESSING//
Because tomorrow isn't promised please deLAY ALL THIS STRESSING//
I'm lucky no overdose TOOK ME IN THE PAST//
The pills fucking SHOOK ME FROM THERE WRATH//
Popping them while playing HOOKY DURING CLASS//
Fuck the text books I LEARN ON MY OWN//
Because they can't teach every TURN IN LIFES ROAD//
I feel blessed for my family I hope they always GOT MY BACK//
I'll never STOP FROM RAP it's been there when I was shattered like a SHOT THROUGH GLASS//
Been through dark times then GOT ON TRACK but still at a LOSS FOR CASH//
Wish I new the FEELING OF RICHES instead of DEALING WITH BITCHES//
I look up to the sky like the CEILING IS MISSING//

[Sting3r]

two links, topcity..

welcome to RB also..

You know me as lefty.. le coq.. j.admin

one of the many..

[TopCityHeat27]

Right on..let me start feeding then.

[TopCityHeat27]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...if-387889.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-388014p2.html

[TopCityHeat27]

Upping.

[Crookshank]

This was alright man, a lil short, but to the point. This topic has been played so many times... change the record. People talking about their hardships is usually real shit but ive heard it so many times im just not feelin it that much. Your rhyming was alright, could be improved but you had some internal rhyming so it definitely wasn't bad. keep writing, keep rapping and you will improve over time, it's inevitable. stay up

[heartints]

Not really good but not really bad either, it was okay. Nice for a first drop though