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    Family Reunion (peep)

    HAAHA its CONSTRUCT


    fuckin family reunion


    (VerbalWeaponz)

    I rip emcees---viciously---with verbal weapon wizardry---

    Snatch your soul from your body with force physically-

    A spiritual abortion leave your corpse dead--- visibly-

    Another fatality ---a string of flawless victories---

    You get played --- live online like xbox 360’s

    the construct---crew is family--- like this was Sicily---

    I am hip hop---your net rep---don’t mean shit to me---

    I’m the promise of death with your neck in the guillotine---

    A blow torch that blows heat til your whole street is sizzling

    If writing rap and spitting rhymes is being righteous---

    weaponz is 90 times as nice as Jesus Christ is--

    I’m the kind of guy you want on your side in a crisis--

    Like using mastercard --the outcome will be priceless-

    I pound your cranium like the sound you get from nitrous-

    I’m the feeling coming back--like a million little icepicks-

    Well that about covers all the “who am I ?” shit-----

    Your board is locked--come and get it ---out of verbalweaponz vice grips----





    haha lion tell em dogg


    (keebmaster flash)
    Ayo my dogs keep it hot like the Hounds of Hell
    I spit flames that'll burn you to the ground as well
    The Construct don't fuck around, we a pack of wolves
    Packin' axes and bats that'll crack ya skulls
    And the fact that we back shows the end is near
    The Horsemen and the Angel of Death are here
    So ya fear's finally realized, no hope in screamin'
    'Cause we're feedin' on ya souls, bitch it's open season
    Oh believe it, hopefully ya won't be needin'
    Ya motherfuckin' heads 'cause we trophy seekin'
    So ya better hit ya knees and fuckin' pray for survival
    'Cause every one of us is iller than the plagues of the Bible
    The foundation of The Construct was built on the backs
    Of all the wack opposition that's faced our attacks
    So get ready for ya squad to get bloodied and torn
    'Cause the unit's mobilized and we hungry for war, motherfuckas...



    (SMOKE)
    i designed your fate.. every line i make annihilates
    and puts the minds of late philanthropists into a violent state
    my time's a waste if the divine don't say i'm rhymin great
    i'm dracula with an immunity to light and stakes
    and my mistake if you can't tell the kid hold the llamas
    a potent bomber, totin chrome under the golden armor
    you know the God's morbid wit flows, i slam scripts
    soon as your clan spit, i'm holdin your skull like Hamlet
    i'm the man, stick dick to different bitches you can't get
    approach from all angles, until you co-sign my tangents
    white lotus clan shit, brochures and pamphlets
    construct a machine that drains your blood's plasma and cans it
    your lord damns it, for the sacreligious intentions
    if you aint rappin vicious your cap gets shifted and dented
    too demented, strangle an angel with the mic cord
    encrypted inscriptions left on the wall at the psych ward








    (country)
    HA its tha dark knight, SCAR MICS, u know what tha barks like
    raw text, give you all death , when tha bars bite
    start fights, fuck this, hard lines, WHAT BITCH
    sharp ryhmes, cut wrists, discard lives, u see who i RUN WIT
    known ta SON KIDS, we got them daddy flows
    a pimp, when i spit, lyrics that fuckin slap these hoes
    cant match me yo, im from tha dirt stupid
    i'll rip your scripts, post a pic, n write a fuckin verse to it
    end ur nerve movement, these dudes barely can rap
    put a shovel in tha forum tools, ima fuckin BURY THESE CATS
    dont need ta carry tha gat, n since i got tha fuck off tha streets
    i can ignition, you bitches, get you fuckin shut off with tha keys
    off top ima beast, drop wit tha heat, my dawgs gotta eat
    we swarming, tha forums, dont get caught in tha feast
    im hot in tha least, on tha real your shit is worthless cus
    when we step, u need more then a thread, ta sew ur fuckin verses up


    CONSTRUCT








    (ecliptik)

    Desert eagle, eagle eye, multiply, equalize..
    drop the clip and spit a round, get spun around and tramatized..
    loser, the black burnah's Punky get spunky - im the bass line bully, tell your girl to come and jump me - and you can bet its getting ugly when shes cancelled like Punky Bruised-her(Bruster)..
    Abstract flow abuser, amusing, subdued structure ate..
    Training my thoughts to focus my train of thought not to punctuate..
    I still be on that dissin shit, random bi-polar spits..
    Twistin words and flippin scripts to rip a bitch, period..
    You aint sonnin, period, im diss-missed mentally..
    You CONSTRUCT inferior, ya skill was ya penalty..
    The names ecliptik, battle flows is too sik..
    Cause when i spit, i flick a rhyme harder then razor ramon toothpick





    CONSTRUCT







    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ck-387768.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nd-388000.html
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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    10/10

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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    oh fuckin' damn... it's like we never left lol... DOPE... Smoke has really elevated too... this came together ill, flowed nice, sick multies all around... good to fuckin' see y'all again...


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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    lol this was a str8 read right here..everyone held they own..be glad i read all of this cause i usually don't read text AT ALL..not even when cats ask me to..

    anyways smoke held it down the most..i was feelin his shyt, nice rhyme scheme and flow..he pretty much killed it to me but everyone else had pretty nice verses too..

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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    -yo it's been a while since i've checked out a text joint....

    -but i must honestly say.... that you just made me have to take a peek every now and then....

    -overall nice drop....

    -Sha


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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    Wtf, where the fuck was I for this shit.. some family reunion, lol....

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    this shit was nice, I'm feeling like Smoke came the hardest on this, although Country came with those nice rhyme and flow switch ups, which was dope, yall just need to work on the flaws, such as counting bars, most of yall came with an even 16 bars, some came with 12 and 17 though, which takes away from the authenticity of the piece and it doesnt feel official and/or professional, also rhyming about "we're the sickest rappers on an internet forum" is a laughable concept, my only crit' is to try to write your shit so you could spit it in real life, where as rapping about online shit would make you sound foolish if you ever tryed to spit it in real life, other than that, some hot shit.

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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    Quote Originally Posted by The Genesis
    this shit was nice, I'm feeling like Smoke came the hardest on this, although Country came with those nice rhyme and flow switch ups, which was dope, yall just need to work on the flaws, such as counting bars, most of yall came with an even 16 bars, some came with 12 and 17 though, which takes away from the authenticity of the piece and it doesnt feel official and/or professional, also rhyming about "we're the sickest rappers on an internet forum" is a laughable concept, my only crit' is to try to write your shit so you could spit it in real life, where as rapping about online shit would make you sound foolish if you ever tryed to spit it in real life, other than that, some hot shit.
    You mean LINES, lol....

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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    um, I DO spit my shit in real life homie... this the first text I've dropped in 5 years... thanks for the feed though, honestly... peep the soundclick though, see what you think... thanks...


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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    Quote Originally Posted by The Genesis View Post
    this shit was nice, I'm feeling like Smoke came the hardest on this, although Country came with those nice rhyme and flow switch ups, which was dope, yall just need to work on the flaws, such as counting bars, most of yall came with an even 16 bars, some came with 12 and 17 though, which takes away from the authenticity of the piece and it doesnt feel official and/or professional, also rhyming about "we're the sickest rappers on an internet forum" is a laughable concept, my only crit' is to try to write your shit so you could spit it in real life, where as rapping about online shit would make you sound foolish if you ever tryed to spit it in real life, other than that, some hot shit.


    really really appreciate the feedback

    but peep this

    we been doing this for years

    we rap bout online shit, when we're spitting online

    this is an "internet" forum dawg


    so we rap net shit, offline we spit offline ryhmes


    easy to switch up topics n flows u know



    but yo on the real


    THANX

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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    Ayy cuntry, thanx for ignorin my 1st post, lol....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post
    Ayy cuntry, thanx for ignorin my 1st post, lol....
    lmao watch it dawg

    we good but we aint THAT good

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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    verbal- ummmm, the structure was horrid, but the flow was nice, you was dishing out some pretty clever and fresh material. really a beasty verse, I thought it was noob shit at first glance, well thanks for proving me wrong.
    big keebs- sounds like you definitely wrote this as intended for an audio drop, tight whined flow, and a couple of nice bars in there. an easier read, seems like you'd do a good job twisting this topic to a flex piece.
    smoke- so far i thought you did the best job, the 1st bar was a bit shaky about where you were going with your verse, but a lot of funny and dope lines came out of it, dracula immunity and hamlet lines were hilarious. keep on that page, flow and every thing was right (except overdoing it in that 1st bar). I'm looking foward to another one of your drops
    country- flow wise, definitly was original, I liked the way you set up your rhymescheme in the beginning, unique way to write, but everything didn't catch my interest, i was hoping for more thought out lines, still a cool drop.
    ecliptik- the start of your verse was nice, but as it went on it started lagging, lots of potential and a pretty fresh rhyme scheme, i'm thinking maybe it was wrote in a similar way to the other drops, flow was cool, style seem kind of gutta shorty, keep improving

    overall, cool read, nice crew drop. holla
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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    Quote Originally Posted by country View Post
    lmao watch it dawg

    we good but we aint THAT good
    Wtf you mean watch it, lmao.. n yo, you still ain't answered me yet.. why didn't include Vic in this shit.. I didn't even know ya'll was doin a collabo....

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    Re: Family Reunion (peep)

    uuuuuuuuuuupppppppppp

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