FL Champ: Punch Vs. Accurit Phacts (Punch wins)

[Verbal Hologram]

Bar ur lucky..completely forgotten bout this league so i had to hurry and key
While ur album's so "played out"..not even "playback's" will do it for "free
ok heard similar b4 tho
You the champion? and You beg for votes a bit,You suck and thats it
Come on Barcotic like ur "CDs are in quality of feces" no one "buys ur shit"
ok attmept....played line
Bar's disses 'Hit me' like 'Nickel Bags' Little to No effect you're so Perplexed,
My Flows'll wreck, wit a force that'll have you hittin' the Oceans Deck
meh
I've arose to Flex, Roast ya' text like barbeque'n toasted Hens so bet
But i noticed whenever you see my name your so upset you show as Guest
wording could have been better but still good
Barcotic you suck! Dont Try it See.the only way I'd lose, I might Conceive
Is if you cut my hands off, and Started writing my Rhymes For Me
nice one
Brag?You beat random? Lmao, yeah with all your personal nigas, Just choke
I got banned for freeposting,But You got banned For postin, asking for votes
lol...not bad
Say i Hide from dude? Your just Mad that my nigs from 'Sctso' Fried ya Crew
Offered us to THE FAM, Barcotics a little mad all the good heads rejected you
ok
The fam's Dead, And I killed it, Ima crazy btch so to them Im Hanibal Lector
This verse will disect ya,
......................And leave your grave Behind a set Like a Movie Director.
meh

vs

Your drops are lackin sickness, stop the rapper mission,
last time I saw a line like that.... a veloca raptor sniffed it..
ok
Listen, how the hell you gonna go to war with no weapons dude?
yeah I said you're Russian.... your boyfriend to have sex with you..
not bad
Get to steppin dude, I'm number 1, you're runner up, another punk,
tried readin your rhymes with my nakid eye.... but I had to cover up..
wasn't feeling it
I rep Canada, Ireland, Scotland n Sweden, however I don't talk Swedish,
but I WILL have an Acc-sent.... to his mother's front door in small pieces..
ok
Listen Kanye wannabe, if I don't kill you I'll give you a real scare,
n Jesus won't walk with you.... but he might push your wheelchair.
lol nice one.
Bitch, Smoka IS a Joka for settin this match, remember our last fight?
he's got me lookin like a nerd.... runnin through the same Phacts twice..
another nice one
Act right, you thought you'd eat me? well I guess I'm kinda starvin ya,
cuz if winning was your Maine goal.... you're somewhere in Antarctica..
good
I'm done ripping you, this is the net which is why you're still living dude,
but you're still cryin uncle.... aunt, father, mother n your siblings too.........
meh...wasn't feeling it

Good battle guys. But I think Barcotic came harder.

V/Barcotic

[Supernat]

can i vote or would you take it as crew vote? always an honest voter so let me know.

[Supernat]

barcotic said i could vote....


Bar ur lucky..completely forgotten bout this league so i had to hurry and key
While ur album's so "played out"..not even "playback's" will do it for "free
nah, stay away from played out lines.
You the champion? and You beg for votes a bit,You suck and thats it
Come on Barcotic like ur "CDs are in quality of feces" no one "buys ur shit"
meh,
Bar's disses 'Hit me' like 'Nickel Bags' Little to No effect you're so Perplexed,
My Flows'll wreck, wit a force that'll have you hittin' the Oceans Deck
ok, if you tried harder on the harshness of the punch then the flow this could of been better with wording.
I've arose to Flex, Roast ya' text like barbeque'n toasted Hens so bet
But i noticed whenever you see my name your so upset you show as Guest
ok, not hard but okay
Barcotic you suck! Dont Try it See.the only way I'd lose, I might Conceive
Is if you cut my hands off, and Started writing my Rhymes For Me
seen it before
Brag?You beat random? Lmao, yeah with all your personal nigas, Just choke
I got banned for freeposting,But You got banned For postin, asking for votes
this personal was weak
Say i Hide from dude? Your just Mad that my nigs from 'Sctso' Fried ya Crew
Offered us to THE FAM, Barcotics a little mad all the good heads rejected you
ok
The fam's Dead, And I killed it, Ima crazy btch so to them Im Hanibal Lector
This verse will disect ya,
......................And leave your grave Behind a set Like a Movie Director.
too stretched man, concept was bad to.

overall you had some ok hits, if you really did key this up that's cool but i would of took more time on a match like this. so yeah, stay away from using "your so played" concepts, the cd's line didn't appeal to me. oceans deck line could have been good with better wording. the comparison between getting banned was a basically a personal statement. the show as guest like was average in my opinion, so yea not bad verse just put more time and you'll do alot better.

vs

Your drops are lackin sickness, stop the rapper mission,
last time I saw a line like that.... a veloca raptor sniffed it..
played out, you know this
Listen, how the hell you gonna go to war with no weapons dude?
yeah I said you're Russian.... your boyfriend to have sex with you..
seen that wordplay so i can't give you credit here
Get to steppin dude, I'm number 1, you're runner up, another punk,
tried readin your rhymes with my nakid eye.... but I had to cover up..
meh, you said you closed ur eyes readin his verse. not feelin
I rep Canada, Ireland, Scotland n Sweden, however I don't talk Swedish,
but I WILL have an Acc-sent.... to his mother's front door in small pieces..
[this was good, best bar so far.
Listen Kanye wannabe, if I don't kill you I'll give you a real scare,
n Jesus won't walk with you.... but he might push your wheelchair.
decent.
Bitch, Smoka IS a Joka for settin this match, remember our last fight?
he's got me lookin like a nerd.... runnin through the same Phacts twice..
okay
Act right, you thought you'd eat me? well I guess I'm kinda starvin ya,
cuz if winning was your Maine goal.... you're somewhere in Antarctica..
i wrote a punch like this and made it better but still flipped decent.
I'm done ripping you, this is the net which is why you're still living dude,
but you're still cryin uncle.... aunt, father, mother n your siblings too.........
nah, if you re-read this line bar you'll know its statement ish after

overall decent verse i guess, thought you'd be better but still enough to grab the win here, so i didnt like your played ass line about sniffing a line, i've seen the russian wordplay before so didn't like that at all, naked eye/cover up was bland, small pieces line was creative, good hit. havn't seen that wheelchair line so i gave you credit for that, flipped the goal line not too bad either way, your closer tho son, you just sucked balls for a closer and thats supposed to end him with those closers. neways...

decent battle...

vote - Barcotic

[Sting3r]

Bar ur lucky..completely forgotten bout this league so i had to hurry and key
While ur album's so "played out"..not even "playback's" will do it for "free

No sting on this punch, useless concept

You the champion? and You beg for votes a bit,You suck and thats it
Come on Barcotic like ur "CDs are in quality of feces" no one "buys ur shit"

This was pretty bad, I wont lie to you..


Bar's disses 'Hit me' like 'Nickel Bags' Little to No effect you're so Perplexed,
My Flows'll wreck, wit a force that'll have you hittin' the Oceans Deck

There's no flip here, just flat out saying the punch...

I've arose to Flex, Roast ya' text like barbeque'n toasted Hens so bet
But i noticed whenever you see my name your so upset you show as Guest

No you didn't, I'd never sleep with you.. I don't really get this


Barcotic you suck! Dont Try it See.the only way I'd lose, I might Conceive
Is if you cut my hands off, and Started writing my Rhymes For Me


... terrible

Brag?You beat random? Lmao, yeah with all your personal nigas, Just choke
I got banned for freeposting,But You got banned For postin, asking for votes


personal, but no real punch or flip.. cmon duke

Say i Hide from dude? Your just Mad that my nigs from 'Sctso' Fried ya Crew
Offered us to THE FAM, Barcotics a little mad all the good heads rejected you

no flip.. to the.. person..al..


The fam's Dead, And I killed it, Ima crazy btch so to them Im Hanibal Lector
This verse will disect ya,
......................And leave your grave Behind a set Like a Movie Director.

I get it, but it's a simple simile.. ur best line i'd say..

Vs.

Your drops are lackin sickness, stop the rapper mission,
last time I saw a line like that.... a veloca raptor sniffed it..

pretty funny and random.. not a great one..

Listen, how the hell you gonna go to war with no weapons dude?
yeah I said you're Russian.... your boyfriend to have sex with you..

I've had my fill of russian word plays this decade..

Get to steppin dude, I'm number 1, you're runner up, another punk,
tried readin your rhymes with my nakid eye.... but I had to cover up..

I liked this flip.. haven't really seen it used.. good punch

I rep Canada, Ireland, Scotland n Sweden, however I don't talk Swedish,
but I WILL have an Acc-sent.... to his mother's front door in small pieces..

god, that wordplay is shat

Listen Kanye wannabe, if I don't kill you I'll give you a real scare,
n Jesus won't walk with you.... but he might push your wheelchair..

lmao.. even with out the kanye thing, this concept still woulda got a laugh out of me..

Bitch, Smoka IS a Joka for settin this match, remember our last fight?
he's got me lookin like a nerd.... runnin through the same Phacts twice..

ehh, nameplay.. decent

Act right, you thought you'd eat me? well I guess I'm kinda starvin ya,
cuz if winning was your Maine goal.... you're somewhere in Antarctica..

good concept.. hate the wordplay, but this is cool

I'm done ripping you, this is the net which is why you're still living dude,
but you're still cryin uncle.... aunt, father, mother n your siblings too..........

I love these flips.. extended metaphores.. great closer

Pha: work on flipping your personals into creative punches, your bars were to plain and missed. You could add some multi's into your longer bars also, just keep battling.. you have the formula for a bar, the rest is experiences.

bar: couple funny lines, some were filler bars.. keep doing what you're doing.. don't be afraid to give up a punch or set up for a bit of self glory or better multi's.. it adds to enjoyment.

Categories wise, I can't say that pha took any decisively.. Barc, took all the major factors n' cats.

Vote/ bar..

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No offense, but for a title match..
the bar count was low, and pha was out matched.

Flaws of points based battling?

I'd say so.

person with most time on there hands goes to the finals.