Bad

[Que-C]

Who put it in their head that I'm bad?
I might as well take up slingin,
it's gotten so bad that I wake up swingin.

I'm a mess with a mountain of ash,
debts got be countin my cash,
I'm oustin with an ounce in the dash.

Tryna pull a thousand out my ass,
while stayin high-drated cause the drought could last,
every chance is a blunt I'm not about to pass it,
I wanna cash out an intellectual trash mouth.

And even though most of my friends are cons,
any friend of a friend is a friend of mine,
and i'll defend the bond with no sense of time,
while others bust grapes some bend the vine.

Some don't know when to chill or when to grind,
they try to milk the game but they tend to spill,
there's no way to play pretend with skill,
they'll feel a real MC or get rendered blind.

[Que-C]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vy-387705.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...es-387420.html

[RiccaShay]

your shit's tight, just feel you could tighten up your rhymes on certain parts, but all in all this shit's hot. nyc drop man. 1

[The Genesis]

nice lil verse, solid use of multies, simple yet effective.

"Some don't know when to chill or when to grind,
they try to milk the game but they tend to spill,
there's no way to play pretend with skill,
they'll feel a real MC or get rendered blind."

^nice rhyme switch up

hit up my joint with some feed when you get a chance:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ne-387777.html

[Que-C]

good looks on the feed, up #1

[Treazun]

really liked the multies in this piece. Awesome work on them, interesting to read. Rhyme scheme was kinda simple, but simple isnt necessarily bad. Nice work on this Que-C.

[Isn't That rydinoldskool?]

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[Que-C]

why thats your name, dont sound notin old school, im pure old school, last up, good looks 1

[Crookshank]

Like I said to the other dude on his drop, change the record with the hardships shit... Trust me, i liked this drop a lot, rhyming was on point, shit was real, im assuming you've been through the things you rap about, n i like that. at the same time, people have been spitting about their hardships since rap came out n fortunately we live in a time where there's not much that hasnt been rapped about, so we are forced to come up with new shit constantly to stay up. i say fortunately because this makes us more creative lyricists in the end. like i said i liked your drop, just not too into the whole hardships thing, this being an exception because of your skill. rhyming was good, internal and end rhyming was on point, flow was good, a bit off in places but maybe thats how i read it. do me a favor n leave me some feed on "realm of the wicked & wise" thanks.. stay up