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    Gangsta Life - Heavy Christo C

    Hey this was done pretty quick so it might not be that good, id appreciate feedback though.
    Thanks.

    Yeh, We got problems that gotta be solved on demand,
    no one comes in here n walks out after takin a stand,
    fuck with us n your life at end,
    dont treat us like your friend we'll put u to sleep,
    then bury u deep no police gonna understand, last time they saw u u was a DJ playin a shitty ass beat,
    we got battles 2 win, homies 2 shoot,
    n we da ones dealin with da pain within,
    as ma friend Tony went inta da crips n i went inta da bloods,
    da gang rivary put us at end like an ant at flood,
    this da gangsta life, we dont walk around with knives,
    more like pistols with night sight,
    yeh, blue n red, north south east n west,
    different gangs, dont expect 2 stop us with protests cuz we movin up with success,
    u bitches dont understand till u get shoot after givin it ur full best,
    blood stains on da wall, cops comin here, not gettin out without a fall,
    they call for back up but they got nuthin 2 back up,
    we 5 people n we still dont back down,
    this a war n u da rivary clown messin with our heads,
    threating 2 rip us inta shreds,
    but we dont give a fuck our bandannas red!
    urs are blue, 1 gonna be dead,
    F.B.I. up our asses trynna bribe people ta go undercover,
    but everyone scared of us cuz we their brother,
    like Young Jeezy, we put on for our city,
    n it dont matter if we end up in jail like Fity,
    he rote his raps in jail,
    did his 10 year jail sentence n went out to sell,
    look at that lucky bastard now, he doin pretty damn well,
    i started this rap shit by the internet,
    that shit didnt lead me ta-stress,
    workin ma way to da top, tryn ma-best,
    now im in da gangsta life goin ta jail for violence,
    but like Weezy, got stoped by a lady cop that told me i have da right to remain silence,
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    Re: Gangsta Life - Heavy Christo C

    i dig the direction but you got trouble gettin the points across smoothly, (wrote not rote, rivalry not rivary) thats first. now the rap itself has good meaning, youre conscious of what youre talkin about which is cool, but spit this to a beat it aint gonna flow smooth, some of your sentences are run on and some plain dont rhyme well, and the rhymes you use to tell the story are too simple try gettin a lil more complicated with your word play, and try to incorperate your ideas into the rhyme dont make the idea the rhyme (like Nas), its almost like you give people sometin to wait for when they read it but you just dont show any power kinda jus like ranting not rapping

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    Re: Gangsta Life - Heavy Christo C

    A wackass piece from a 14 year old canadian wangster lmao. This piece man you gotta work on it ALOT... nobody here needs to know you a G what's the point of it you know what I mean...

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    Re: Gangsta Life - Heavy Christo C

    thnx 4 da feedbacks.

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