Young T - Someone's gonna' die tonight

[Rappa Young T]

Young T
Someone’s Gonna’ Die Tonight


( Talking ) Hahahahahahaha … Thought chu’ could get away huh? Hahaha!

( Rapping ) Yo, Yo, this guy hea’ thinks he’s so hard,
Poppin’ ma’ dawg on 37th street blvd.
He thinks he’s so hard, tha’s ok,
Beat him up … any other day.
Get ma other dawgs, on his tail,
Hit that motha’fucka’ with a big ass flail.
Trap him in a room, give him a toy,
He’ll shout ‘ Momma, I’m paranoid! ‘
She’ll shout back ‘ Young T’s better than you! ‘
I hear this shoutin’, kick him with ma shoe,
I’m so happy he got his lesson, not to mess with a G,
I’m a G, don’ mess with me! Y-T, remember me.


(Women) Someone’s gonna die tonight… (Young T) Yeah Yeah.
(Women) Someone’s gonna die tonight… (Young T) Gonna give em’ a fright.
(Women) Someone’s gonna die tonight… (Young T) Last Chance!
(Women) Someone’s gonna die tonight… (Young T) Ahh yeah…

( Go through twice ( Chorus ))


UNFINISHED

[Rappa Young T]

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[Orc]

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[Lasix]

I liked it, but I had a hard time getting past 37th street bvld. It sounds fake and takes away from the rest of it IMO.

I would suggesting making it a street or a bvld.

[Rappa Young T]

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[country]

i thought it had a cornyness about it


like something id hear a 12 year old running around rapping

after hearing fifty cents "somebody gon die tonight"


keep spittin tho

[Heavy Christo C]

its good, just try ta structure it more.... the corus was into the verse, seperate it.

[Que-C]

first problem, all other problems aside its too short. if you make it longer and get a substantial point across then you can get away with a lot of faults.

the faults . . . your vocabulary is poor, your rhyme scheme is too simple and the ideas are played out, you could have built better off shit happenin to your boy but you could have taken these lines and put them in any murder rap song, you gotta make each line belong to the verse its in or it becomes generic and cliche.

lastly seperated or not, the chorus should not be a quarter of the length of a verse let a alone the whole track.