Waiting for vengeance.

[InkD]

I'm over this stupid, ho goin home with a new kid, 'cuz he throwin some loot with a monotone when he goin at music
so i posted a new thread, so hopefully i could blast some holes in some new threads, with some dopeness, i'm fluent
they unknowing i'm a huge threat, showin and provin, niggaz know what i'm doing, takin some clothes when i'm lootin
although i'm not known for producin, my flow is pollutin, like you got metal shoes, the chrome will get boosted
if i take the chrome, then i'm shootin, when you're at home and you're snoozin, retreat back to my throne when i do it
you retreat back to your prime...
when you could actually rhyme and you were ready for prime time, like it's the 90s, and you're watchin home improvement
life's a bitch, and for real? i hope i lose it. because i don't need some weak cocksucker to tag along and follow me while i'm in the zone, intrudin.

[Echelon]

This is actually really good, you have a refined taste -- like a veteran at writing raps.

GOOD WORK with the rhyme schemes and multi-syllabic rhymes placed organicly.

Kicking it OLD SKOOL, good work!

[mynameageef]

Loved the flow of this.

I can relate to it too, nice keyboard dash.

[Lady Poet]

This is one best piece on here
Thie flow unique
tight