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knocc~out~artist
Subterranean
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checc~mate
^Originally Posted by knocc~out~artist
I peeped ya battle wid 228 and that was the wackest shit I ever seen,
honestly, the best part about your bars... were the spaces in between,
wining this is a cinch, bitch nigga gon get tarred feathered and lynched,
cuz all it takes is 1 bar 2 knock~out~"Artist", like I sucka punched Prince!
this battle proves who the true knock out artist is, after I land hits,
cuz when I KO this bitch, your body gon look like a blood splattered canvas,
you got merked 2 easily, this match is like a UFC fight with no referree,
cuz I already knocked you out, and I"m still mercilessly raining blows heavily,
I'm keeping 9's by waist, pullin gats like magicians do tricks out they sleeve,
watch this bitch get popped more than champagne bottles on New years eve.
*let em have it...typing.....*
results of diz battle iz tragic cuz diz kid soft like fabric
honestly i seen 'doper lines' from cracc attics
ya shit weak dog practice n get a lil tighter
broke nigga..da passenger side of da car da only time he a westide rider
if ya thinkin ya winnin id advize to ya stop makin bad predictions
cuz ya punches 'neva connec't like bad weave extensions
im sicc but im bout to show ya da hole ya dug
n watch slugs open ya chest like vapor rub
cum hard? plz on wen he watchin porn
n wen its time to fight his sexuality transform
{transformer}
^good battle dawg, lets see what the voters think. uppin.
I'll highlight best lines
Sub
I peeped ya battle wid 228 and that was the wackest shit I ever seen,
honestly, the best part about your bars... were the spaces in between,
^^lol good personal
wining this is a cinch, bitch nigga gon get tarred feathered and lynched,
cuz all it takes is 1 bar 2 knock~out~"Artist", like I sucka punched Prince!
^^ok
this battle proves who the true knock out artist is, after I land hits,
cuz when I KO this bitch, your body gon look like a blood splattered canvas,
^^lol,ok
you got merked 2 easily, this match is like a UFC fight with no referree,
cuz I already knocked you out, and I"m still mercilessly raining blows heavily,
^^ok
I'm keeping 9's by waist, pullin gats like magicians do tricks out they sleeve,
watch this bitch get popped more than champagne bottles on New years eve
^^Nah weak close
knoc
results of diz battle iz tragic cuz diz kid soft like fabric
honestly i seen 'doper lines' from cracc attics
^^nah,played
ya shit weak dog practice n get a lil tighter
broke nigga..da passenger side of da car da only time he a westide rider
^^LOL,decent
if ya thinkin ya winnin id advize to ya stop makin bad predictions
cuz ya punches 'neva connec't like bad weave extensions
^^nah,played
im sicc but im bout to show ya da hole ya dug
n watch slugs open ya chest like vapor rub
^^nah
cum hard? plz on wen he watchin porn
n wen its time to fight his sexuality transform
^^imao,ok closer
sub had more quotables knoc ya did ya thing you can afford to put more word in ya lines to get out what ya sayin makes ya punches go harder k
Vote:sub
No Hate...
RTF ON my FIRST DOPE BATTLE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-387242.html
smh, both ya'll got a long way to go but it wasn't that horrible. Based on talent and more experience sub got this. Knocc just came to played. "more dope in crack attics???" nah, come more original man.
v/subway
I peeped ya battle wid 228 and that was the wackest shit I ever seen,
honestly, the best part about your bars... were the spaces in between,
That was a pretty good personal..
Vs.
Played shit..
This battle wasn't very good.. Sub, I wasn't feelin anything other than your opener.. n knocc, all your shit was played or weak.. so basically Sub wins for having 1 decent quotable, better structure n not comin played..
\\//ote: Subterranean
Don't forget to RTF ASAP....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ix-387178.html
Knocc~Out~Artist
result'll say da son is wacc dont even kno y im battlin diz dum cat
bars'll kill em n 'nuttin ona guy spine' da only way he can cum bacc
Weak opener
diz iz my win diz fucc nigga in da danger zone
mods checc his post cuz diz kid bite like mike tyson wen da pressure on
Played concept
ya linez wont faze but my 2 bars got diz man ina daze
he got no defense so ima showin diz nigga da 'shotgun' like football plays
Ok leaning on to weak
da win ya cant have it so lika 3yr old kid he poutin
so i let da sharp lines cut off his head n turn his necc to a bloody water fount
More of a rant than a punchline I didn't see no concept
Subterranean
peeped ya battle wid 228 and that was the wackest shit I ever seen,
honestly, the best part about your bars... were the spaces in between,
Weak Opener
wining this is a cinch, bitch nigga gon get tarred feathered and lynched,
cuz all it takes is 1 bar 2 knock~out~"Artist", like I sucka punched Prince!
OK....
this battle proves who the true knock out artist is, after I land hits,
cuz when I KO this bitch, your body gon look like a blood splattered canvas,
A Rant with no concept
you got merked 2 easily, this match is like a UFC fight with no referree,
cuz I already knocked you out, and I"m still mercilessly raining blows heavily,
OK...
I'm keeping 9's by waist, pullin gats like magicians do tricks out they sleeve,
watch this bitch get popped more than champagne bottles on New years eve.
Played
Vote - Subterranean
This battle was close, Sub got punchlines slightly by a half-a-millimeter, and he incorporated more personals.
I Need Votes In This Battle: Better Days vs. TheInkredible
^Wtf, lmfao.. that wasn't even knocc's verse dawg....
Sub
I peeped ya battle wid 228 and that was the wackest shit I ever seen,
honestly, the best part about your bars... were the spaces in between,
lol REAL nice
wining this is a cinch, bitch nigga gon get tarred feathered and lynched,
cuz all it takes is 1 bar 2 knock~out~"Artist", like I sucka punched Prince!
meh
this battle proves who the true knock out artist is, after I land hits,
cuz when I KO this bitch, your body gon look like a blood splattered canvas,
ok
you got merked 2 easily, this match is like a UFC fight with no referree,
cuz I already knocked you out, and I"m still mercilessly raining blows heavily,
filler
I'm keeping 9's by waist, pullin gats like magicians do tricks out they sleeve,
watch this bitch get popped more than champagne bottles on New years eve
ok closer
knoc
results of diz battle iz tragic cuz diz kid soft like fabric
honestly i seen 'doper lines' from cracc attics
little played
ya shit weak dog practice n get a lil tighter
broke nigga..da passenger side of da car da only time he a westide rider
lol nice
if ya thinkin ya winnin id advize to ya stop makin bad predictions
cuz ya punches 'neva connec't like bad weave extensions
ok
im sicc but im bout to show ya da hole ya dug
n watch slugs open ya chest like vapor rub
too basic
cum hard? plz on wen he watchin porn
n wen its time to fight his sexuality transform
meh
yeh knocc add more words to your lines, cause their too short. But your definitely getting better homie.
V/Sub
can u guys hit me back ASAP-any of these
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-387125.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-387265.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-387258.html
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