Assintion of character: peep dis!!!!

[fazeT]

Try as you might, my personality is too strong to die tonight,
pass around the beers, roll up and pass me the lighter light,
I dont mind haters, Im just expressing my right to write, iight??
Im on site, wit the sight of an Eagle, Im too bright and lethal,
to be mistreated like a beagle, and be shit on like a sea gul,
Wait till I get on the mic people, Polished, you'll get demolished,
I'll expose the anerexic body benith your clothes till its ovous,
even Religious followers will wish and pray that I drop this bitch,
Your the reason I developed a twitch, which'll be your demise,
Isnt it ironic, you created this demonic, cronic, enemy to size,
Introduced me to frendly guys, then sent me to the other side,
Never Left me alone, I almost smothered my own brother, why?
He had under cover lies, Never gave me a chance, To inhance,
My true ability, Prove my inner me, there's a snatch in ur pants,
you think you can dance, haha, haha, hell no, Receive a Elbow,
Im hot to melt snow, I'll send you heat you never felt B fo, FOE!!

[Steven William]

Learn to spell, get links and present your writing in a formal manner and then someone might "peep dis"

[IconIQ]

lol, that seconding that ^^

massive influx of people dropping 2-3 pieces a day and not feeding shit. stop it, seriously.

also one thing thats kind of irritating, i notice you get plenty of feed, but seem to pretty much ignore all of the advice you get in it. most people drop for feed to build on their weaknesses, maybe you should too.

[The Genesis]

this one wasn't half bad actually, but I still can't take your shit serious, aint you like 26 or some shit? and your joints still barely make sense and the spelling is horrible my dude, I told you once but I guess you don't listen, present yourself seriously and professionally, if you want to be taken as so, or don't be surprised if people take you as a joke.

[fazeT]

pssssssssssssst. what ever fuckers
I leave feed as often as I can
If you dont understand the fuck im talkin bout cuz of where I grew up then thats fine
I duno what you dudes expect
for real

[IconIQ]

pssssssssssssst. what ever fuckers
I leave feed as often as I can
If you dont understand the fuck im talkin bout cuz of where I grew up then thats fine
I duno what you dudes expect
for real

are you serious? shut the fuck up dude, you're from fuckin canada.

and you tryna say this piece is bout ya difficulties or some shit tryna grow up? aiight lets see..

to be mistreated like a beagle, and be shit on like a sea gul,

^^ shit mang, does all dogs be treated badly as them poor beagles in canada? shit.. i feel for em, lets get the rspca up in this..

Your the reason I developed a twitch, which'll be your demise,

^^ yo, i heard they can treat retarded peeps these days. i think they might even be able to do somethin for that twitch yo. hit up a doctor, for real.

Isnt it ironic, you created this demonic, cronic, enemy to size,

^^ damn, i knew i didn't flush properly last time i went to the toilet... my bad guys, this awful rap may be all my fault...

Introduced me to frendly guys, then sent me to the other side,
Never Left me alone, I almost smothered my own brother, why?

^^ was it cause he called you out on bein wack too?

He had under cover lies, Never gave me a chance, To inhance,
My true ability, Prove my inner me, there's a snatch in ur pants,

oh shits, his superhuman ability is seein through pants! don't let motherfucker round ya children, ya hear?

you think you can dance, haha, haha, hell no, Receive a Elbow,
Im hot to melt snow, I'll send you heat you never felt B fo, FOE!!

fe fi fo fum.. i smell the blood of a dumb canadian.

never drop again dude, you're the worst motherfucker on this site.

EDIT: OH YO DAWG, I JUST GOT IT!! the title of ya piece... i get it. yo character jus got assassinated. get the fuck out

[fazeT]

NO
you so quick to jump the gun
This peice is about someone I Knew, who used to be my best friend, but now turned enemies. If you knew him, me and our situation you'd have a completely different outlook on this!
YOur perception would revolve, evolve and the problem would be solved!
I duno how else I can put it
ps. If your gonna be so blatiently ignorant then I dont value your input
nuff said!!!

[fazeT]

Yes man, ever house around here has them dogs left outside in all weather, they're never loved or taken care of! you speak on shit you know nothin of. educate your self a bit son
dude ur dumb
stop typing
Im sayin he's a bitch, aka a girl, cuz there's a snatch in his pants, ya know, a pussy dip shit, not me!
man ur dumb
plz dont post in my threads anymore!
your are so ignorant
word up!!!
Fuckin children!!!

[IconIQ]

hahahahaha you're a clown my man, of the highest order. you were wack on the capital, you are wack here, and you'll stay wack wherever you go next.

your are so ignorant

for real, i are ignorant, am'nt i? you're either dyslexic or retarded.

also, guess what, we don't know you, or your friend, or the situation - and you didn't even put it across well at all in this awful drop. so nothing is going to evolve, which is a goddamn shame for the future of your brain. i hope you don't curse another generation by reproducing.

[fazeT]

hahahahaha you're a clown my man, of the highest order. you were wack on the capital, you are wack here, and you'll stay wack wherever you go next.

your are so ignorant

for real, i are ignorant, am'nt i? you're either dyslexic or retarded.

also, guess what, we don't know you, or your friend, or the situation - and you didn't even put it across well at all in this awful drop. so nothing is going to evolve, which is a goddamn shame for the future of your brain. i hope you don't curse another generation by reproducing.

why are you quoting me, your not even doin a good job. I didnt say are ignorant or am'nt, I looked. quit actin like your some rap god or sum shit dude, fa real! you only make ur self look stupid for brining shit up, word!
my bad for not Brakin it down simple for you, all u had to do was ask, not get on like a lil bitch. n e way. other than that, quit spammin!

[fazeT]

this one wasn't half bad actually, but I still can't take your shit serious, aint you like 26 or some shit? and your joints still barely make sense and the spelling is horrible my dude, I told you once but I guess you don't listen, present yourself seriously and professionally, if you want to be taken as so, or don't be surprised if people take you as a joke.

I Hate having to explain my self evertime!
for example, if someones say sum shit, I never hurd, oh im ignorant. but if I say sumthin you guys dont understand, Im ignorant??
I guess
Mabye I need help structuring my shit, but its not like anybodys helping me. but to say my shit is horrible, is stupid, cuz its not. I lisin to rap allllll dayyyyy!
If ur not gonna help dont comment, word up!
you tell me to use things in my enviornment, so I do, then you dont understand what they are. so wtf??
like I said, if your gonna pick apart my spelling?? dude, I type 100 words per min, ezzz, I dont have much time on the pc, so I have to say what I gotta say quick. if your gonna pick out silly shit like that instead of waht im actually sayin and help me improve..is any of this makin sence? or am I still speaking french??

[IconIQ]

wow... you really didn't understand me did you? you have the comprehension abilities of a monkey.

you don't type 100 words per minute, or you'd be the PA to some CEO, so don't use shitty excuses for your awful grammar and spelling.

listening to rap all day does not make you a good rapper, you utter idiot. thats like saying, "oh yo, i eat every day, im a GREAT chef".

you're not speaking french, just shit. now, battle me, fag.

[fazeT]

halarious dude
I can actually type that fast
I dont wana type for a living, bad for the wrist, you should know that much, from your gay homo actions, flappin your hand and what not
what you keep forgetting is I filter everthing you say, nothin you type affect me dude!
Set up the battle
Plzz
Id like to see it

[IconIQ]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...69#post6812769

^^ gotta respond before i can set it up

[Heavy Christo C]

yo man this was gd good flow n good vocab......expt a little ccramped up, try ta space it out a lil bit. 4/5