Hey, im new to this, it's my first time posting i'd appreciate feedback.
Thanks.
I walk in ma hood, i c black n white,
ma homies are pullin up a fite,
blood vs. crips, yeah thats rite,
bullets flowin in evry direction,
gettin bullets thru ur head faster then infections,
i pull out ma gun, start shootin nuts, ma homies all ova da place,
with motha fuckin busted cuts,
keepin a special eye on Young Buck,
thats ma son, he aint gettin shot, ill protect him with ma life, he aint gettin caught,
i feel a sudden pain in ma chest,
da motha fuckin bullet musta went thru ma vest,
im kneelin on da floor, gaspin for breath,
blood comin outta my mouth, ma life flashes back, lookin at all ma regrets,
da time i sold drugs to a 5 year old, im thinkin it was meth,
da times i fought, dropped outta school,
doin all kinds of gangsta shit just 2 prove im cool,
Young Buck comin to ma rescue,
yellin 4 an ambulance, dont count on chance,
da last words i hear is may God bless u,
i wake up later, surrounded by people,
im in a bed, think im in a hospital, i touch ma chest,
burnin sensation, stitches on ma head,
da nurse comes in, givin me an explanation,
bla bla bla, repeatin da same shit she already said,
that im lucky to be alive, cuz i coulda been dead,
then Big G, da chief of da bloods comes in,
to gimme a death hug,
'' who da fuck died man?'' i said
'' sorry G, its a real loss to me to, im sorry to say, but Buck died trynna rescue u''
im dead shocked, speechless,
tears start rollin down from ma cheeks,
'' no man i dont belive this! this is all a joke, i dont need this! leave da fuck go!!''
Big G still grabbin ma t-shirt,
'' young homie, this was fate, dont talk to me like that, get ur fuckin head staright! now ill give u a break, get da fuck outta ma face or ill murder u fast,
but bitch, i wont let this shit pass!''
'' fuck u bitch, Buck died cuz of this! im tired of it all, im outta da hood BITCH!''
Thanks. Thats it. Id appreciate feedback.
Redside167
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