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    Re: Fight Night

    its very imaginative and very gory... i like it. good work.. but work on your multi rhyming scheme a lil

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    im liking this drop man the wording is good and the flow is sick, the topic is good aswel man.

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    you dont think you've got enough....

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    ^LOL!! I was joking around, but more is always welcomed....

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    and how that collab doing, how long do you think ill take you to finish it?

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    Sylablle count was perfect to me, and felt like a very versatile piece that would flow over a multitude of beats. Multi's were definately fine and the rhyme scheme was changed up enough to stop the piece dragging at all.

    Not really a whole lot in the way of depth but, definately, the story and technical aspects were strong enough to carry this piece by themselves.

    Normally i dont go for the whole "...and then he woke up" types of ending, but i really got on board with this as the fact that the protagonists goals for life are so violent, leads us to feel a sense of pity. I also took from this that the bad things at the start (poor financial state etc.) were infact true, which only enchances our empathy for him.

    Great story and technically flawless - i'd like to see something a little deeper next time though, maybe experiement with metaphor, symbolism and other techniques.
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    Re: Fight Night

    Shit dope as hell, flat out!

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    I thought that you did a very nice job with this bar. The imagery and everything was on point! nice job

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    really ain't much to say...everyones said it...lol

    dope...

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    I wasn't sure if this would make HOF to be honest,
    I'm not saying it's not a worthy piece, because it obviously is, but a lot of regular people who post in OM seem to a drop half decent piece and they make it into HOF and sometimes the newer people writing in here, get overshadowed.

    Good job man

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    It already made HoF dude, lol....

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    lol I know brother, that's why I'm saying congrats.

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    Oh shit, lol, I didn't read what you said right.. I thought you were saying you didn't know if it WILL make it, lol, but nah, my bad.. n thanx bruh....

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    It's ok bro, I just had another read of it since it was upped, mulit's were dope.
    Keep dropping brother.

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    this was dope bro it flowed rediculously the delivery was on point this was really solid man.The twist at the end is really good too props

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