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    A Day In Paradise

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...songID=7211993

    a different type beat.....sweet ethnic style beat, choir, synths, and bangin tribal drums

    no samples

    took peoples advice and tried to be creative.....

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    [soundclick]7211993[/soundclick]

    This is a lot better than your other stuff man. You don't sound like a typical soundclick beat on this one. That pad needs to be lowered. I'm not a fan of the clap. Melodies are decent. This is real cool and laid back. I would've used a different distorted guitar. Overall, this is cool ish. Keep doing beats like this man.

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    Damn, you got what it takes to be original..

    Percussion is crazy one here, yes, clap could be a little dirties...
    Those pads, flutes, pianos and whatever the hell it is sound really nice..
    The guitar could be a little different..

    FTW?? It cut out so fast.. Change that.. keep the guitar or whatever and fade it out nicely...

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    i dont usually fade out my beats, i leave that for the artists and i like the guitar but i think im gonna make i a lil quieter.....

    the beat was made with omnishphere, Symphonic orchesrtra, and RA......RA is an amazing program, it did all the percs...

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    This is ill...loving the pads man.....not a clap fan but do ya thing.....oh wow this chorus is ill .... the piano sounds excellent .... this dosent sound like a typical soundclick producer to me.... so i too take my comment back.....this could be so many things....a love song a deep story telling track.... maby even a club banga lol good shit



    edit.... wow at that guitar
    [YOUTUBE]UGIi5Y6bfh4[/YOUTUBE]

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    is that guitar bad or good?


    but thanks man, i took everyones comments to heart lmao

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    sounds a lil distorted but it was sick
    [YOUTUBE]UGIi5Y6bfh4[/YOUTUBE]

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    yea, i made it heavily distorted, i actually played that live and i put the distortion up...

    this was my first guitar recording too

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    That shit is LIVE...niggas will buy that...the radio would play it...


    all it needs is the writer emcee(s)


    nice shit man...

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    did u quantasize(how ever u spell that) ya kick??
    sounds a tad off.
    pads are cool
    i like the synth work
    the percussion sounds like sum timbo influenced ur blood
    i like the piano work
    this is one of ur better ones bro
    keep @ it

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    quantizing is for losers

    anyways, beat is pretty cool real laidback...i like the drums

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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    This sounds good. It's something about it! Some small tweaks here and there and it woulde be great!
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    Re: A Day In Paradise

    I like this... I like it alot. Appropriatly titled, its what i feel when i listen to it. It's mellow and serene. If this is you stretchin your creative legs then i approve.
    "9 to 5 is how you survive//
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