Palamoon's now lvl 3!!!

[Trey Songz]

Level 1 - Everyone starts at level 1.... crap.

Level 2 - Heyyy.... I finally got my drums to compliment my melody. (With ok melodies)

Level 3 - Now I can make sick melodies that compliment my drums.

So check it out. I feel like this is something people can actually say is really hot by me. You be the judge.

Go Nuts:
[soundclick]7196107[/soundclick]

Club beat.

Download:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7196107


Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-386018p2.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...me-386031.html

[JAZZSCAPEZ]

"and i got what it takes to rock the mic" same snare sequence lol but you already kno how i feel about synths but i think this is a cool little beat you should change up the melody more or change to a diffrent instrument cuz i cant distinguish the chorus from the rest and the synths are probly too heavy to rap over....maby im wrong id like to see someone spit over it

[Trey Songz]

There's a synth in the chorus. It's only in the chorus. Thanks for feed.

[Troy Murray]

ahh i like this.
really clubb scot storch feel to it.. i think u should keep the part with the strings throughout the whole verse.
add sum other stuff on the 2nd half of the verse..
and go crazy on the hook
maybe sum drum switches would b nice too
but this is a real nice start man.. props u gettin better.

[Trey Songz]

Thanks man.

[Bad News]

its aight

[Russia]

i hate how you flaunt the fact that this "beat" was designed for a "club".

try making an old school beat and i'll say something nice about it.

[Trey Songz]

1) Not my style

2) I'm pretty sure more artists are looking for club beats than anything else. (At least I think)

[Troy Murray]

ur right Pala artists cant blow up with old skool production.. well its possible but highley unprobable. keep making the club joints u shine on em dude

[Trey Songz]

Thx my man. Couldn't of done it without that tag.

[Bad News]

ur right Pala artists cant blow up with old skool production..

thats the reason why hip-hop keeps goin downhill...cause people like who u seem to think that artists cant blow unless they have club beats...

[Kris Cain]

thats the reason why hip-hop keeps goin downhill...cause people like who u seem to think that artists cant blow unless they have club beats...

or is it because of people like you, who label every CHANGE in the sound of hip hop as "wack" or "destructive"... because you are selfish and under the impression that hip hop belongs to you as a listener, and your personal preference of hip hop should be the only accepted sound.

Don't point fingers unless your ready to look in the mirror.


and the hard truth about the industry is that a artist is not going to "blow up" unless their work touches down and connects with alot of different types of people in alot of different types of venues.

A artist "blowing up" without having a song that is gettin bumped HARD in clubs... is unrealistic.
it's called promotion. No one blows up without it, and in 9 out of 10 cases, a "club" is involved in that process.

and the radio determines what a "club beat" is... not the club.
Also for the record, it's nothing wrong with making a beat that would get people movin in the club.
wtf is wrong with dancing? Did i miss the hip hop rule that stated it was against all things "hip hop" to dance?

i wasnt aware of this coming from a genre that spawned from DJ shoutouts at house partys.

[Kris Cain]

and wtf are you doing Palamoon? lvl 3?

you just figured how to make drums compliment a melody... let's try lvl 1... nothing higher than that for right now.

[Bad News]

did i say that my personal preference of hip hop should be the only accepted sound?

no

[Chris Black]

I like it. Sounds west coast.