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    I've beat your idol ill nik-A's Avatar
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    a walk's oxygen

    a second of darkness lies within every blinking eye,
    w/ the vision's in ties with the future's living disguise,
    swimming in cries, as help denies instincts implied,
    sinking in lies, it's not our world, we just visiting life,
    cuz friction's our pride...going head to head w/ truth,
    reason my actions spreads its use, & sheds abuse,
    tell me who, the hell can prove...we live for a reason,
    own enough sins to dry out the leafs of our seasons,
    it may be I've been cheated...out of a happy journey,
    cuz I hurdle joy for anger & keep the laughing buried,
    & I challenge worries...to restrain me from full force,
    as all frustrations & thoughts killed my cool's source,
    the rule's war...& I'm plotting my attack on success,
    change for the better's trapped between life & death,
    I infest, as I make breathing hide behind its threats,
    so I suggest, to carry the years to take time to rest,
    cuz I've been stressed...in this unforbidden creation,
    it's nature, wounding my mind, bleeding its patience!!
    You listen to that Aesop shit dont u, roflz...u fuck ass backpacking geek

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    MDB
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    yo i like this flow makes me wanna go to church!

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    Tha Linez Drawn
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    Do you need enlightenment...PM me...this piece was good...liked your multies in tha first verses...don't be lost, be found...

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    this piece was good, I also liked the multies they kept it interesting to read so nice piece i hope to see more like this
    Holler

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    I've beat your idol ill nik-A's Avatar
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    thx for the feedback
    You listen to that Aesop shit dont u, roflz...u fuck ass backpacking geek

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    what up ill nik knightshade from hhh hows it going dog
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    sap

    up^^^
    You listen to that Aesop shit dont u, roflz...u fuck ass backpacking geek

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    damn dat wuz hotta than hot
    sh!t went 2getha like a lyrical puzzle..fit jus right na'mean
    I aint seen ill shit from newbie like dis fo awhile.U dont need ne pointers,u got dat on lockdown.Hope to see more from ya and welcome to tha board.Stay ^
    -Avi




    ^^^^uppin it 4 ya

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    I've beat your idol ill nik-A's Avatar
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    heh,
    thx but I'm not a newbie though
    some know me, some dont
    You listen to that Aesop shit dont u, roflz...u fuck ass backpacking geek

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    Atetrack define'
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    nice spit ill nik...has the illogic type of feel to it,nice ass flow deep shit going on,nice multis,tight verse all round...liked it much propz,peep my shit sometime if you ge tthe chance...
    bismillah

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