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    Re: As long as she doesn't forget me.

    yeah, its an old piece that I was hoping to get shit of the week with but I guess it wasn't good enough for it.
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    Re: As long as she doesn't forget me.

    up.
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    Re: As long as she doesn't forget me.

    i dig the writing on this , but i got a strong spite for suicide
    my life been hard since the get go, and i shoulda commit suicide 25 times by now
    but i dont got it in me to give up when i still got breath to try,
    and even though it gets hard some times
    (especially when you got fucked up emotional shit)
    suicides a pussy option
    all them fuckers need to get help or pull the trigger
    they dont got my sympathy unless they
    got a terminal disease that causes intense pain
    (not the boo hoo type)

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    Re: As long as she doesn't forget me.

    mayn that was good...but im sick of all this poetic shyt...not just u ...ALOT of fukerz round here just write bout they feelingz n shyt...i aint with all that...but w/e...yo dude nice concept on tradgetic love...message was hella clear...i like tha way u told tha story...those other FEEDERZ...they didnt get how 1st then 3rd person views kept addin on to tha piece...i think it made it shyt loadz better...so...good flow...good conceptz...ok vocab...good wordin...not many metaphorz n shyt...but all n all i thought this was a GOOD READ...KEEP ON WRITING BRUH!!!

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    Re: As long as she doesn't forget me.

    links. lol.
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