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    Painted To Perfection

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    In the midst of the heavens sapphire canvas painted to perfection
    I lingered beneath the stars and wander throughout my reflection.

    Across the sea I dreamt unto an island deserted
    I stepped onto its sandy shores and observed it.
    Faultless, it rests undetected transverse from the rest of the earth.
    Above me, an infinite sea of darkness where scattered stars burnt

    And beyond stars rest uncontained, the indefinite
    Unknown though, it remained eternally desolate.
    All the while my eyes reveled at the completeness of the universe
    Entreating hands pressed forth and in an instant thrust in search.

    Through the black depths I had reached aimlessly
    Along the masses awaiting my possession patiently.
    In the distance, a contrast lying among the darkness of the cosmos
    I was captivated in thought, my fingers falling upon it like dominoes

    Grasping the entirety of the object within my hands
    I began to revel at the precision of the omegas craft
    Shape and form, an atmosphere of clouds distort the colors that bore
    Into my intellect, that explores the construction of which it was forged

    From dust and chemicals, when combined compels
    A color so unique an symmetrical it defines pastels
    Devouring my every being with the object now possessed in my grasps
    I started descending unto land eliminating every object within my path

    Ever so slowly I wandered back to where I had begun
    To my dreamt like state in which all of this had become
    Before crossing through the earth’s atmosphere I placed my possession
    Captivated, taking one last glance at the completeness of its complexion

    Then turning away, I descended down to the shores edge
    Walking into the clear blue water, nearing the stories end
    But before I go I just wanted to share, the beauty of a planet to far to stare
    So I brought it back so all could see, that beauty lies in the midst of infinite

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