10 lines due today sometime
no biting, recycling, feeding
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10 lines due today sometime
no biting, recycling, feeding
votes must be explained
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yea, i'll post soon.
LOL
smh.
ur a hasbeen. & if ur ever rappin it's readin' across a page,
so if you rise again like a Phoenix..it's right after you fall off the stage.
com's a fag. postin' chest pics..so now i'm growin in doubt,
i've got a destructive nature, kid you've the type that ppl write poems about.
this guys wack. u better believe the 'burden's sick' chat,
one hit'll leave ur head so far up ur own ass ppl will mistake u for chris black.
vas is right. lettin newbs in to boost ur record..son i'm laughin,
so you should get office case. but being unemployed that ain't gonna happen.
ur lookin' mad homeless. nomadic? ha, he's elusive at that,
'cause com's been livin' the beat-box life for so long, kids try & use it to rap.
LOL
This bitch wants to be me but I remember he said I had no style
Then he joined A.I., the LLL and changed the color of his profile
This ho's vile and the respect is gone, ugly prick once you step it's on
Buts at least its fitting that you're irish coz you look like a leprechaun
Noobs get banned on the daily but no one cares coz they're lame you see?
Then when I UNbanned this faggot, EVERYONE came and complained to me
Bitch I'm ripping out organs, I'd say get to the gym before you're finished
But how can you look after your body when your hearts no longer in it?
So you're still a virgin confess n' I don't wanna stress or upset you dude
But the only burden your balls is your mom when she dresses you
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lol.. this was mediocre..
vs.ur a hasbeen. & if ur ever rappin it's readin' across a page,
so if you rise again like a Phoenix..it's right after you fall off the stage.
pretty funny, I've seen something VERY similar, but i can't recall where.
com's a fag. postin' chest pics..so now i'm growin in doubt,
i've got a destructive nature, kid you've the type that ppl write poems about.
ehh, i didn't like this
this guys wack. u better believe the 'burden's sick' chat,
one hit'll leave ur head so far up ur own ass ppl will mistake u for chris black.
that's pretty funny, flows a bit off.. learn multi's burden
vas is right. lettin newbs in to boost ur record..son i'm laughin,
so you should get office case. but being unemployed that ain't gonna happen.
i'm not sure if its forced or not.. i guess it works.. i likey
ur lookin' mad homeless. nomadic? ha, he's elusive at that,
'cause com's been livin' the beat-box life for so long, kids try & use it to rap.
ehh, i don't like this
This is pretty even, good flips..This bitch wants to be me but I remember he said I had no style
Then he joined A.I., the LLL and changed the color of his profile
good personal.
This ho's vile and the respect is gone, ugly prick once you step it's on
Buts at least its fitting that you're irish coz you look like a leprechaun
..wow, this was bad
Noobs get banned on the daily but no one cares coz they're lame you see?
Then when I UNbanned this faggot, EVERYONE came and complained to me
funny
Bitch I'm ripping out organs, I'd say get to the gym before you're finished
But how can you look after your body when your hearts no longer in it?
.... that's not very good.. just weak
So you're still a virgin confess n' I don't wanna stress or upset you dude
But the only burden your balls is your mom when she dresses you
lol.. that's a good one..
cool name play
i'd say com went a bit more into personals, while burden went for direct punches..
*flips coin in air*
V/com
Pretty close.
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vs.
This bitch wants to be me but I remember he said I had no style
Then he joined A.I., the LLL and changed the color of his profile
Noobs get banned on the daily but no one cares coz they're lame you see?
Then when I UNbanned this faggot, EVERYONE came and complained to me
vote - Com
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ur a hasbeen. & if ur ever rappin it's readin' across a page,
so if you rise again like a Phoenix..it's right after you fall off the stage.
^^ok kinda weak
com's a fag. postin' chest pics..so now i'm growin in doubt,
i've got a destructive nature, kid you've the type that ppl write poems about.
^^bad wording
this guys wack. u better believe the 'burden's sick' chat,
one hit'll leave ur head so far up ur own ass ppl will mistake u for chris black.
^^not really effective punch, non-funny threat
vas is right. lettin newbs in to boost ur record..son i'm laughin,
so you should get office case. but being unemployed that ain't gonna happen.
^^office/off his wp is old, but you coulda flipped it good, you didn't really :-\
ur lookin' mad homeless. nomadic? ha, he's elusive at that,
'cause com's been livin' the beat-box life for so long, kids try & use it to rap. #
^^not too bad
vs.
This bitch wants to be me but I remember he said I had no style
Then he joined A.I., the LLL and changed the color of his profile
^^aight, bit bland
This ho's vile and the respect is gone, ugly prick once you step it's on
Buts at least its fitting that you're irish coz you look like a leprechaun
^^ok
Noobs get banned on the daily but no one cares coz they're lame you see?
Then when I UNbanned this faggot, EVERYONE came and complained to me
^^lol
Bitch I'm ripping out organs, I'd say get to the gym before you're finished
But how can you look after your body when your hearts no longer in it?
^^nice wording, liked it
So you're still a virgin confess n' I don't wanna stress or upset you dude
But the only burden your balls is your mom when she dresses you
^^heh ok
v/com
Burden
ur a hasbeen. & if ur ever rappin it's readin' across a page,
so if you rise again like a Phoenix..it's right after you fall off the stage.
Decent..
com's a fag. postin' chest pics..so now i'm growin in doubt,
i've got a destructive nature, kid you've the type that ppl write poems about.
Decent but I did a personal like this kinda recently that takes away from this cuz it worked better..
this guys wack. u better believe the 'burden's sick' chat,
one hit'll leave ur head so far up ur own ass ppl will mistake u for chris black.
Not feelin..
vas is right. lettin newbs in to boost ur record..son i'm laughin,
so you should get office case. but being unemployed that ain't gonna happen.
I felt this was weak n forced wordplay..
ur lookin' mad homeless. nomadic? ha, he's elusive at that,
'cause com's been livin' the beat-box life for so long, kids try & use it to rap.
Nah, bad..
COM
This bitch wants to be me but I remember he said I had no style
Then he joined A.I., the LLL and changed the color of his profile
LOL, decent personal..
This ho's vile and the respect is gone, ugly prick once you step it's on
Buts at least its fitting that you're irish coz you look like a leprechaun
Nah..
Noobs get banned on the daily but no one cares coz they're lame you see?
Then when I UNbanned this faggot, EVERYONE came and complained to me
Decent..
Bitch I'm ripping out organs, I'd say get to the gym before you're finished
But how can you look after your body when your hearts no longer in it?
This was cool, good set up too..
So you're still a virgin confess n' I don't wanna stress or upset you dude
But the only burden your balls is your mom when she dresses you
Kinda forced but meh, still made me chuckle..
Flow: Tie
Punches: COM
Wordplay: Tie (didn't really like either wordplay attempts)
Personals: COM
Structure: Tie
Creativity: COM
Consistency: COM
\\//ote: COM
yeah COM won this
his opener and the complain line were prob his best. didnt fee leprechaun, heart no longer in it was pretty solid. closer was ok
burden, id say the phoenix line and the nature one were ur best. rest were a little iffy, office line was played, couple others were a bit simple and non personal to compensate
not really a blowout tho, COM won because of a more personal vibe in his better lines
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com's a fag. postin' chest pics..so now i'm growin in doubt,
i've got a destructive nature, kid you've the type that ppl write poems about.
LOL
....vs
Noobs get banned on the daily but no one cares coz they're lame you see?
Then when I UNbanned this faggot, EVERYONE came and complained to me
Pretty Good..
So you're still a virgin confess n' I don't wanna stress or upset you dude
But the only burden your balls is your mom when she dresses you
Decent Closer..
Decent battle both dropped well but com had a better closer Burden had a staright closer but not better than com's so V/COM
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