Quck Scheme

[Ghost Catcher]

see i'm, always thinking o something
quick schemes...
the means of achieving these things
big dreams...
thats why im riding fast in the lane
real smoothe...
you in a wheel too -
.........sitting in the passenger, lame
- now i gots haters mad in the game
fuck it
they girls love it -
.........now they mad at they dames
you gotta move with the times but
you acting the same ?
like change is bad, thats why -
i'm waving past when i pass you again
i'm sly, get it ? plus i'm fly with it
while you knuckle clowns
.........running around, dry snitching
see i'm better, comes to the cheddar
try grip it -
microwave meal...
.......a plan i cooked up in 5 minutes

[Ghost Catcher]

the title is supposed to be quick scheme lol.

[Vincent Maestro]

Now this had some good multies or whatever Ghost....And like the title states it was just a quick scheme or writing exercise or whatever....That part I liked alot homie.....I'd say you should work on your structure and punctuation though....A few errors in spelling...Overall....nice job...


STAY UP.

Bar Night Pt. 1
hit that up when you get a chance.

outt.

[The Genesis]

ok shit, it seemed a lil rushed like you just keyed it up on the spot, so nothing particularly special stands out, but in terms of the whole rap style it has potential, keep dropping.

[Ghost Catcher]

thx yall.